CHAPTER ONE: THE GIRL IN THE BATHTUB
POTF: Welcome to the redo of To Love-Kiactu, a fic redone from the first one where it was solely based on Kiactu. Well, now, it is based back upon your favorite Namae no Nai, only this time it has a FEM! Rito and is not in 1st POV. The pairing is still Kiactu/Mass Harem including Riko Yuuki.
Kiactu: List of the girls in the harem is:
Riko Yuuki
Mikan Yuuki
Lala S. Deviluke
Momo Deviluke
Nana Deviluke
Rin Kujo
Ayako Fujisaki
Saki Tenjouin
Mio Sawada
Risa Momioka
Haruna Sairenji
And others
CHAPTER START
It was a boring day in class and Kiactu just had to put his head down to sleep when the girl behind him poked him in the back with her pencil. "The least you can do is sit up," she told him. He yawned and looked towards his adopted sister. "Riko, why did you have to wake me up?" the boy pouted. "I was just having a nice dream about Haruna-chan." The girl in question was halfway across the room actually paying attention towards the teacher, though her eyes did wander towards the silver-blond boy. Riko wasn't as understanding. "Kiactu-baka," she said, a little miffed that her adopted brother's attention was towards a one-time friend. "I don't even think she'll give you the time of day." To that, Kiactu's head dropped, an aura of gloom surrounding her head. "You know, I might just confess to her today," he smiled. "Maybe after school is out so that the news doesn't spread around like wildfire, like that rumor that I had dragon eyes underneath my mask."
It was true that no one had ever seen the boy's mysterious eyes, not even her nor her family. She lost count of how many times she tried to see what color they were. Whenever she tried to sneak a peek in the bathroom, she never really got a chance. As soon as she got a clear view, she noticed the tattoo of a horned moon with an eight-sided star in its horns on his back and found herself wondering about it until she looked to see him staring at her . . . well, what she knew of. "Riko-chan," he would say in a sultry voice, "if you wanted to look, all you had to do was ask." He would walk off and not see her blush as her face began to heat up.
It was after school when Kiactu decided that he wanted to talk with Haruna when all of a sudden, he found himself lying in the bushes as Riko wanted to walk the girl home. She looked back to see Kiactu slowly get back up before giving his version of a glare (AN: Meaning that she felt the glare through his mask.)
He made it back to the house and walked in, saying hello to the youngest girl there, Mikan. "Hey, nii-san," she said as Kiactu half-heartedly waved back. The young man made it to his room before talking to Saruyama, a friend of his ever since he met the Yuuki family. "You're sort of weak at love, y' know?" the perverted boy told him. Kiactu didn't say anything but listened as Saruyama made banter about how Kiactu should think about Haruna in a bikini. The image was burned into his head, but he shook it to forget. "I can't think about her like that! She's just too innocent!"
After hanging up, Kiactu decided to lie back in the tub. He could tell that Riko was looking at him, but he didn't say anything, as his body was covered up to his upper lip. "Tch, if this wasn't such an act, I would be all over Haruna," he said as he raised his hand out of the water out of what he thought to be Riko's line of sight. He began to add chakra until his hand began to glow before transforming into a clawed hand reminiscent of a certain Kyubi-chakra infused ex-monk of the Fire Temple. He transformed it back as Riko tried to play off that she was trying to use the bathroom. "I've always wondered what you hid under that mask," she asked, sitting down on the toilet, her laced panties hanging on her legs.
"Hey, Riko, all you had to do was ask," Kiactu asked, putting his left hand on the sides, slowly tantalizing her by taking it off centimeter by centimeter. That was when a sudden splash occurred in the bath, showering Riko and making her lose focus. While she was not looking, Kiactu slipped the mask all the way up, showing the handsome face of a shonen manga character. His right eye was still hidden by the matted down hair, but the rest of his face could . . . no, would've been seen, if he hadn't taken down the mask quickly.
"Hello," a new voice could be heard. "Oh, hey," Kiactu told its owner. It was a pink-haired girl who looked about both Riko's and Kiactu's age. The former flipped out while the latter stayed calm. "How do you stay calm in this situation?!" she asked him. Kiactu thought about it. "For some reason I knew she would appear and didn't feel like acting like I was surprised. That and I have never been surprised that easy. Why do you think I dodge when Rin and Aya try to rape me?"
Meanwhile, her flipping out caused Mikan to run to the bathroom. "What's wrong?" the black-haired little sister asked the red-haired older one. "There was a naked girl with Kiactu in the bathroom!" Riko yelled. Mikan looked around to see that her adopted brother was hiding his mask covered face in the tub up to where she would think was his nose, but no extra female in sight. "You know, Riko-chan, the worst thing you could do is bringing another girl into our bathroom while I'm in the bathroom."
"I know, Kiactu-nii, she seems to be hallucinating about other girls with you," Mikan agreed. "I think she's so jealous that she's seeing other people with you." Riko pouted. "Stop making fun of me," she said. "I know what I saw and Kiactu does too. He knew that there was another girl in the bathroom." Kiactu shrugged as Mikan looked towards him.
After the bath, Kiactu had a towel wrapped around his waist and shoulders with his upper body on display. He was muscular, but not overly muscular, like a cyclist or a track star. Riko tried to keep her attention above his neck, but found her line of vision drifting down towards his tattoo. "Riko, stop for a second," he suddenly told her, stopping the girl as they got close to his room. "What is it?" she asked, finding it much easier to look up as her hand was on his shoulder. "I thought I heard something in my room." He opened the door.
The girl from before was on his bed wrapped in a towel that barely hid her assets. "Yo," Kiactu greeted the girl. "Hello," she greeted back, a smile on her face. Riko was still trying her hardest not to be jealous at the fact that a naked girl was in Kiactu's room, even if said girl had nothing to do with her brother. "Well, I'm Lala Satalin Deviluke, daughter of Gin Deviluke and princess of Devilukan."
"I don't know," Riko voiced her opinion. "She doesn't look like some kind of alien to me." Kiactu didn't say anything, displaying a serious side that Riko had never seen before. "There is that strange scent that accompanies her," he admitted. "And there's also the fact that I saw something move underneath the towel." Lala noticed that he was staring at the spot before standing up. "This is my tail," she explained, showing the long appendage (which was topped off with a heart-shaped tip) as she lifted up the towel. She also showed a lot more than just the tail and Kiactu was glad that the mask shielded his face from view as he felt something wet drip from his nose. Riko blushed as well, but she covered the eye designs on Kiactu's mask as she could tell he was staring at more than Lala's black rear appendage.
"How did you show up in our bathroom?" Kiactu asked, obviously intrigued by the girl. She tried to show him, but then realized that he couldn't see her device as Riko's hand was still over his eyes. He moved the girl's hand off his mask before glancing at Lala. "This is Pyon-Pyon Warp-kun," she told him. "It's a device that allows the user to warp anywhere in a short distance. I used it to escape from the spaceship bathroom."
"Oh great," Kiactu said aloud. "Just what I need: another alien girl to just appear in my bath." The two looked at him strangely. "What do you mean another?" Riko asked. "Has this happened to you before?" (AN: Plot device for another famous alien-girl-appearing-in-your-bath manga fic I was thinking of writing before I wrote the original To-Love-Kiactu) "Well, I used to know this other girl who ran away from her responsibilities, only her entire population was mostly female with few scattered males. But that's a story for another time." More and more her adopted brother mystified Riko and she shook her head at his antics. "Keep going, Lala-chan."
"I thought I would be safe on Earth, but my pursuers followed me here and if I hadn't gotten away from them I'd be . . ." Lala started before the sound of rushing wind caught Kiactu's ears and he turned to see some kind of robot with wings fly into his room. "Lala-sama, you're here!" it yelled, clinging to its master like a love-struck puppy. "Who are those two dense-looking earthlings?" Kiactu turned his head sideways. "Dense? I'm a lot of things . . . but dense isn't one of them."
"Perverted, idiotic, Sir Peeks-a-lot, retarded, the list goes on," Riko agreed, getting a glare from Kiactu. "But dense is far from describing him."
"Well fuck you too, Riko," Kiactu growled. "That reminds me," Lala remembered. "I haven't asked you for your names?"
"Yo, I'm Kiactu Maheem-Yuuki," Kiactu greeted, sticking his tongue out and messing up Riko's hair. "And this is my little sister, Riko Yuuki." Riko scowled before throwing his hands off her head. "You're only older by one year." Lala smiled before introducing Peke, the small costume-change robot in her hands. She threw her towel off and it flew past Kiactu's head, exposing more of the girl than Riko would like to have exposed herself. Kiactu didn't seem to reply, so Riko did for him. "What are you doing taking off your towel like that?" she asked the girl in front of her.
"Peke, change," Lala told the robot. It transformed before wrapping around the girl and changing into the most bizarre outfit you would ever see in your life. It had Peke's head with bat-like wings expanding from the sides. It seemed to be a little tight as Kiactu could tell her figure underneath the threads. "You know, you could learn a thing or two about your body from her," he joked around with Riko. The girl pouted as she glared at Kiactu.
"Shut up, you ero-baka," she said, crossing her arms. That all stopped when Kiactu's window was busted and the glass flew everywhere, though Kiactu shielded Riko from the glass by embracing her. She felt his muscles ripple as they wrapped around her, causing a blush to appear on her face at the closeness. "Are you okay?" Kiactu asked as they separated. "Yeah," Riko said. "Nothing happened to m- WHAT HAPPENED TO YOUR SHOULDER?"
A giant shard of glass was standing out of the shoulder bone, cut deep into the skin. Kiactu reached around and gripped it before pulling it out as if nothing happened. The wound was bleeding badly and began pooling around that injury. Riko went to help him, but he stopped her, telling her not to worry as the wound began to close on its own. He turned to see who broke his window only to look at two buff men. "Who the hell are you?" Kiactu asked, pissed that someone broke his window. "And why haven't you just used the door?"
"Princess Lala, you must come back to the ship with us," the first man told the princess, ignoring the human talking to him. "Excuse me sir, did you not hear the question I just asked you?" Kiactu asked again, intent on getting an answer. He glared at the men, though they didn't realize it before closing his eyes, radiating killer intent throughout his body. "I said who the hell are you?" Kiactu asked, all emotion gone and his voice ice cold. Riko never saw this side of her adopted brother and could feel as the air grew denser.
Once the men put a hand on Lala, a bandaged right fist connected with his face and shattered his sunglasses. "I'm only going to ask one more time," he growled. "Who the fuck are you two?" Riko was surprised at his burst of speed. She knew he ran track at the school, but she didn't know he was fast enough to slip past her. And that guy had been knocked out as soon as his fist hit home.
"Are you okay?" he asked Lala in a monotone voice. The girl was speechless at the sound of her Prince Charming's voice. "Y-Yeah," she answered. He picked her up bridal style before running across the rooftops. The first guy he knocked out woke up and the two chased after their quarry.
"What did they mean by 'Princess'?" Kiactu asked as he jumped from roof to roof. "You see, I'm one of the Princesses of Deviluke, my twin sisters being the other two. My father decided that I was old enough to marry and proposed an arranged marriage where I have to meet my suitors. I get to pick my husband, but they all seemed so . . ."
"Selfish? Ugly? Slow?" Kiactu suggested, Lala nodding to all three. "Apparently, the one I choose is supposed to be extremely powerful. And I want someone that's a little like me. Someone who has a humanoid shape so close to that of a human that they are human." Kiactu knew she was making references to him, but didn't say anything about it. "If you're talking about me, I'm farther from being a human than you are," he finally answered after a while.
Haruna Sairenji was outside walking her dog when she saw the figures hopping across roof to roof. "Burglars!" she shouted to herself before she caught a good look at Kiactu. "That can't be . . ." she said. "But that mask is really distinctive." She could only watch as the forms moved farther and farther away. "I might just be thinking too much about him."
They were trapped in the middle of the forest by the two men in suits. Lala was still in Kiactu's arms and put her hand on his chest, a blush on her face as she tried to get him to set her down. Kiactu did and watched as the men got closer. "Come on, Princess, just leave this human here," one of the men told her. "I'm pretty sure that she doesn't want to go back to her planet to just get married to some scumbag alien," Kiactu told them. "Leave out of this human or your companion gets it," the other warned Kiactu, showing that he had Riko in his possession.
"If you hurt one hair on her head, you'll regret it," Kiactu told him. "Grimm Claw!" His right arm burst through the bandages before transforming into slimmer version of its sealed form. Its claws were longer and reached the ground as his arm was also extended. A mirage of colors shown from the arm as the eyes (Again, Asura's eyes from Soul Eater) glowed with a red color. He disappeared before appearing with Riko in his left arm. The girl stared at his clawed appendage in shock.
"Are you okay, Riko?" Kiactu asked, getting no reply. He looked down to see that the girl was staring at his arm. The man who held her fell to the ground as four deep claw marks bisected him from his right hip to his left shoulder. "Is he okay?" Riko asked.
"If he had hurt you, he wouldn't be breathing right now," Kiactu said. His arm reverted back to its sealed state and he held Riko in a bridal style like he did Lala before, making the girl blush almost as much as said girl did as she stared into the mask's eyes. Riko suddenly got the urge to take off his mask, but he moved his head out of her reach. "There's a reason I always were a mask, Riko," Kiactu deadpanned.
"And I want to see why," she argued. "Yeah, me too," Lala said. "Let's worry about that later," Kiactu told them. "I'll show you after this fight, okay?" He was about to go for the other man when Lala decided to speed it up by calling one of her machines, a giant octopus-like machine that began to suck everything inside it like a black hole. Kiactu wrapped his hands around Riko and Lala before noticing that the man he had incapacitated was heading for the vacuum as well. He contemplated saving the man and his partner, who was trying to hold on for dear life, before cursing his moral alignment and creating dual fox tails to capture the men and keep them in place.
A third tail was created that pierced the machine and caused it to explode. "Are you okay?" Riko asked Kiactu as she noticed him flinch a bit. "That burns," he said before sighing as all of his tails withdrew back into his body. "It burns a lot."
"You have tails like Devilukans?" Lala asked. "Then you must be one!" Kiactu shook his head. "No, I just have some friends who have multiple tails and taught me to how to create and use them," he explained. "I'm actually a lot older than you two think I am." Riko tried to think about it. "So you mean that you were actually in your twenties when my parents adopted you? They also put you in the tub with me when we were younger!"
"Nope," Kiactu told her. "Physically, I was three, but mentally I was a lot older. You see, I can change my age to any one I wanted." He demonstrated by transforming into an older version of himself, though somehow his clothing still fit, before transforming into a slightly younger version about Mikan's age. He then went back into his original form.
"Now what about your promise?" Lala asked, reaching for the mask. Kiactu sighed and let her take it off, showing a face that the girls found extremely attractive. His eyes weren't on them . . . Well, eye. Only one of his eyes showed with the hair that was blocking his right eye. She was about to move the bang that was in the way, but he leaned his head back. "I said I had to take off the mask, not move my hair out my eye."
"Is it hard to see out of it?" Riko asked, now intrigued by anything by his face. She couldn't believe someone this good-looking was so close to her all this time and she didn't realize it. Riko was a red lighthouse in a cloudy day as she looked into Kiactu's eye. "Could . . . Could you let me go?" she asked. "Oh, sure," he answered, letting both Riko and Lala down before turning to the two men. "Let me heal him." He walked up to the man and placed his hands upon the wound before letting out power. The wound began to mend before disappearing altogether.
"Tell your boss that Lala will stay with me until this whole thing blows over," Kiactu told the both of them. "Besides, I have a feeling if I didn't help her, it would be really boring here." Riko nodded at the statement as she knew if she had never met Lala, she would never have seen Kiactu's face. Speaking of which, Kiactu put his mask back on and left a message with the unconscious men before taking Riko and Lala back home.
The next morning had Riko and Kiactu walking to school. "I hope Lala went back home," the male of the group said. "It just doesn't feel all that right with a third wheel." He stretched before laughing out loud. "Besides, today is the day I finally ask Haruna-chan on a date!" Riko hit him with a rock upside his head. "Ow! Dammit, Riko? What the hell is with you and Haruna? You jealous of me or something?"
"Me? Jealous of Haruna? Never!" Riko blushed, nervously smiling. Said girl suddenly popped up. "Hello, Riko, Kiactu," she greeted the two. "Um . . . Kiactu-kun?" Haruna stopped for a second, remembering what had happened the night before. She could've sworn she saw Kiactu's mask on the figure as he was jumping from roof to roof. She blushed before dropping the subject and walking with the duo to school.
"I was wondering if you were doing something this . . ." That was when a ball somehow found its way upside his head, much to Riko's relief. "Itai," Kiactu groaned. "Now I lost my train of thought. Thanks a lot, ball that just ruined my good day!" He threw it away and watched as it sailed over a building. "You know, there's something I always wanted to say," he told Haruna without looking over his shoulder. "It's been bugging me ever since I met you . . . So . . . Will you go out with me?" The sudden sound of someone gasping made him spin around to see "Lala?!"
"Ohayo, Kiactu-kun," the alien girl told him. "Of course I'll go out with you." Kiactu's eye twitched as he knew what happened. "DAMMIT RIKO!"
Said girl was dragging Haruna to the school, trying to avoid the confession from the Namae no Nai and keeping him single. "Let's get married, Kiactu!"
"What did I just get myself into?"
CHAPTER END
Prince: Welcome to the first chapter of the newly redone To-Love-Kiactu. I had been planning to redo the series after my first one was a major flop, flamed by people who did not have FanFiction stories and just flamed me, so you can understand when I get pissed at people who don't have their own stories and flame mine. That's all I have to say for now, other than the money the government owes me for scholarships is running late and I can't get my hotspot until later on.
