Revised Blooded Stealer
Me: Hi everyone this is the revised Blooded Stealer it will be changed quite a bit as well as a new summary since the old was CRAP! Anyways some things will stay the same. But since some people didn't want be to delete the original I won't I will just add this revised one to the original so people who have followed this will get to see the new Blooded Stealer.
Rose: This is still a Jasper/Harry pairing if you don't like it then go feed yourselves to the mutts.
Sirius: Remus and I will still be together but Harry's hidden talent will be changed as well.
Alice: All mistakes are Fate's for she has no Beta as of yet so please help her out and offer your services for this story.
Harry: Fate owns nothing but the story line! On with the summary and story!
Summary: Finally getting fed up with their friend's behavior towards their youngest son, Sirius and his mate Remus take Harry away to a little town called forks. Only to find out they got more than they bargained for when they figure out harry is the boy-who-lived as well as come into a strange inheritance that causes werewolf shifters and vampires into the picture. Waning grey Harry, Remus, and Siri! Self-harm! And mentions of abuse!
Ever since that day when Voldemort attacked the Potter's house in search for his equal, who will have the power to destroy him. Everything changed. When Voldemort got to the Potter manor there was not just one baby, but two. Pointing his wand at one of them which happened to be the black haired one he shouted, "Avada Kedavra!" though something happened…
With a scream from one of the children a blue shield appeared and the Curse rebound and hit Voldemort square in the chest as soon as the door burst opened. With the backlash of magic a beam came crashing down onto the red headed twin causing him to have a jagged scar on top of his forehead.
Dumbledore saw the red headed twin bleed as soon as Voldemort went down and picked him up much to the protest of his parents, James and Lilly, who held their other son which they named him Hadrian but Harry for short, "This proves it!" Dumbledore shouted with glee showing James and Lilly the scar on little Alexander's forehead, "Alex is going to be the savior for the wizarding world!" Lilly stared in shock and quickly placed little Harry on the ground much to his distaste, as Lilly took Alex from Dumbledore.
"James we must show as much affection as we can to Alexander, after all he is going to save us all," Lilly said.
James looked at Harry one time, whom was still on the dusty floor of the nursery, before turning to Lilly and taking Alex from her, "Yes if he is as powerful as he should be loved and protective but what about Hadrian?" James questioned.
"Not to worry old friend once young Harry is old enough to understand why he can't have as much love as his older brother he will understand right away," Dumbledore stated with a twinkle in his eyes as he snuck a glare at young Harry.
"Not to mention we only adopted Hadrian we don't have to love him," Lilly snarled as Hadrian started crying at being on the cold ground but only received a cuff to the back of the head to silence him as Sirius and Remus watched from the door way with glares of growing hatred as they watched their cub get hit into silence.
Alice started walking back to the Cullen house after she finished hunting as she took on a human speed as she walked through the forests of the Alaska enjoying the peace she was offered when she saw a familiar white light of a vision make her gasp and stop in her tracks
VISION
"Oh come on Jasper we need to get you out of the house so you can stop being…well you," A Green eyed teenager with long black hair that reached to his lower back that looked about 15, 16 said attempting to pull the bronze headed vampire to his feet much to Jaspers amusement. The key word was attempting, as Jasper stayed on the couch, causing the teen to pout and complain to a nearby Rosalie, "Rosy, Jasper won't get up," Rose raised an eyebrow as Jasper went back to pretending to go back to sleep.
After the teen had said that Alice was surprised that Rosalie looked so fondly at the raven black haired teen and she even let him call her Rosy for Pete sake!
"Jazz get up now so you can take Harry on his first day of Forks high or do you want me and Emmet too?" Rose all but growled and smacked Jasper in the back of the head, much the amusement of the newly named Harry.
Jasper all but grumbled and got up only to crawl to Harry and wrap his arms around his hips still on his knees, "My mate please do not take the bait of the fowl mistress Rosalie," at this Rose snorted and the teen laughed, "For she will baby you until the sun raises-"
"Alright that's enough," A shaggy haired Adult said coming into the living room in the place the Cullen had down at forks, "Jasper, Rosalie you two get Harry settled into the school now go!" The shaggy haired adult all but dragged the two vampires and human (by the looks of things) out of the house will ignoring the protest of 'Siri!' or 'Sirius!' while the adult grumbled about something that sounded like Mate, no fun, and acting like and adult for once.
END OF VISON
Well it looks like we have to go to back to Forks in about 15 years, Alice thought happily at getting a future glimpse of Jasper's mate as she ran a vampire speed back to the house only to have to sing the German alphabet back words as Edward looked at her curiously which caused strange looks from the others.
{15 YEARS LATER}
Hadrian sat on the roof top in the shadows sneering at his once called family, for they do not love him so why should he love them? It was a fair question which only got Hadrian slapped when Lilly had asked why he called her by her given name a year ago instead of mom. Over the years Hadrian had noticed that he started looking less and less like James Potter for he still had green emerald eyes it was just that his hair was much more tamer instead of when he first started his years at Hogwarts and was put into the house of the ravens, Ravenclaw. Though the hat had commented he would have done better in Slytherin, but why give his 'family' more reason to hate him over something he had no control of when Voldemort had taken to attacking his house at the age of one. After one last sigh Hadrian went to the edge of the roof and jumped back into his bedroom, if you could call it that after all he had in his room was a mattress that was on the floor with a bedside table with an old fashion alarm clock that was half broken and on the other side was a desk with books (muggle and non-muggle) stacked to the ceiling with all already full self that also had books on it. By his mattress was his chest for school with already had his finished assignments for all his classes done minus his potions homework since it requires him to brew a potion which would just get him a low grade if it was old and of no use. Hadrian suddenly felt like Granger (which put a sneer on his face) for it hadn't even been a month of summer break and he already had all his homework finished.
"Harry get down here now and come wish you loving brother a happy birthday!" Lilly shrieked up the stairs. Hadrian rolled his eyes for it wasn't until a month for Alex's real birthday to take place and not to mention it was also his birthday too but after years of not celebrating it because of his loving 'parents' he lost his taste in any party or celebration. With an irritated sigh Hadrian quickly tied his long silky raven black hair, that reached down to middle back, into a pony tail and grabbed his wire glasses (though he didn't need them they were just for show, he had his eyes corrected in 4th year) and put them one making his eye sight slightly blurring but not enough so for him to be clumsy but to give him a small headache.
"Coming Lilly," Hadrian yelled while exiting his room and closing his door while wandlessly putting Colloportus (the opposite of Alohomora) on the door so Alex couldn't steal his homework which has happened before. Once down stairs he saw Padfoot and Moony on the couch restraining themselves to not to straggle the life out of the fat, chubby red headed boy with brown eyes that was boasting to them about how James had gotten him the newest broom before it hit stores as an early birthday present.
With a sigh and a little bit of sarcasm Hadrian growled, "Happy early birthday Alexander," Hadrian stretched the word early for it didn't seem reasonable for him to have a party for his birthday a month before it happens, "Can I go upstairs now? Oh wait I don't need your damn permission," He snarled as he stormed past a stunned James and Lilly and ignored the glare that Alex shot him for he knew Hadrian didn't mean a word he said.
James glowered at his younger son as he reached for him but was stopped by Remus and Sirius, "I wouldn't stop him James, Hadrian is in that time where he is rebellious to everyone and everything," Remus stated and James nodded and turned back to Lilly, who was showering the fat red head in praise and love, which had Sirius and Remus both roll their eyes as they headed up to Hadrian's room only to find him talking to his friend Draco though the mirror Sirius had gotten for his birthday. Which was enchanted to act like a fire call only you had to have the person, you were trying to contact, standing in front of a glass in order for it to work.
"I know Draco I want to leave this place just as badly as you want to get away from Lucius," Hadrian said nervously. Contrary to popular believe Hadrian's personality was skittish, shy and when he is in a crowded place he will often time panic if he wasn't with one of his friends Draco Malfoy (Slytherin), Blaise Zabini (Slytherin), Luna Lovegood (Ravenclaw), or Neville Longbottom (hufflepuff). They were all a tightknit group that never separated during school and you could never find them alone without another in the group.
"I don't see how we can do that without the others for Blaise's parents find him the bane of their existence, Luna's father died at the hand of a death eater and she now lived with Nev, and Nev's grandmother is growing ill by the day. Not to mention Ri that you have the worst of it since your parent's don't just ignore but abuse you when you do something wrong-" Before Draco could continue there was an angry screech from both Remus and Sirius after they heard the living condition of all of Hadrian's friends and that Hadrian himself was often abused.
"Ri why didn't you tell us?" Sirius said coming quickly to his side while Remus stood in front of his cub.
"I didn't want to get beaten for telling," Hadrian said as he lowered his head his voice growing into a whisper has his tears fell. Sirius quickly handed the mirror which held Draco's worried face in it over to Remus who took the mirror outside the door to talk to Draco.
"Shhh cub its ok I am not mad at you is there anything else we should know about?" Sirius questions rocking Hadrian back and forth but stopped when he nodded his head, "What would that be cub?"
Hadrian didn't answer instead he rolled up his sleeves and heard Sirius gasp in shock.
"Draco I want you to listen to me very close okay?" Remus said once he closed the door hearing the muffled sounds of his cub crying as Draco nodded confused even more.
"We originally wanted to take just Hadrian with when we moved," Draco's face went into horror as he thought he would lose his best friend, "Though me and Sirius decided after we listen we will adopt you, Blaise, Luna, and Neville,"
"Really?!" Draco said ecstatic, Remus nodded his head.
"Yes we don't want you guys living like that anymore,"
Draco's face looked a little guilty all of a sudden, "If you're going to adopt us there is something you should know…"
"What would that be, and I have something to tell you also before we tell Hadrian,"
"Umm you go first,"
Remus nodded," Very well but Padfoot and I were planning on telling Hadrian this which I bet Sirius is right now anyways we were going to tell Hadrian that he is adopted he has no Potter blood in his veins that we know of," Remus vanished leaving a shock Draco to stay silent for a minute, "Are you going to tell me what you know since I told you this or are you going to stay silent?" Remus chuckled snapping Draco out of his trance.
"It's just th-that…umm…I should let Hadrian tell you but… How Hadrian can stand staying with the Potter's is that he ummm...Ha-Hadrian c-cuts h-himself," Remus's blood went cold as he heard a horrid gasp come from Sirius in Hadrian's room. Remus dropped the mirror but it didn't break as he rushed back into the bedroom.
Me: What do you think about the rewrite?
Luna: Please comment and review to you hearts content about the rewrite over the original!
Draco: Fate owns nothing but the plot line!
