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The New Hope
its been 15 years after Vegnagun has been destroyed. Yuna and Tidus went back to Besaid to take care of their daughter Lana which is now about a ten years old. Paine lived on the airship with Brother and Buddy helping them find more spheres until something happened between Baralai and then had a baby named Cera she turned twelve about a month ago. But Then i got a call from Besaid which i haven't got call from there in about year because nothing anything fun happens there saying that they found Terra which was kidnapped by this group called the new hope they were trying to killed the top leaders of Spira children because in a old sphere is says that after a great machina is gone there would be three children of high of leader will be able to control powerful magic. so i went to Besaid to see Terra crying on Yuna's lap until she saw me and Rikku and hug me saying "daddy there were scary they kept asking me if they could have my power" its ok angel then Rikku hug her to and then Yuna said we need to find somewhere so they can't get to them anymore then Rikku said "what if i asked Brother and Buddy if we can go on the airship for now until we find somewhere " then i said "lets call him on the commsphere" as i walked up to the commsphere that was in lulu tent , as the connection took a long time to reach the airship everyone watch the we heard the connection got threw and then Rikku asked Brother in a sad tone "hey Brother can you help us out for now i know you gonna hate this but can you let us on the airship so the New Hope won't try to take any of the girls again" then while we waited for a response from Brother it was silence and then he said "yes as long i don't have to see da- i mean Cid again" as he try to sound normal as his al bhed accent kept creeping in, the I ended the commsphere connection I remember something and then said "Yuna is not a leader at all in Spira so that mean we only have two of them", Paine enter the tent saying "leblanc and Nooj daughter's Diamond is the last one", everyone was shocked that Paine had come and Baralai had followed, but after we heard a scream from outside the tent and Paine looked for Cera was missing so as everyone ran out of the tent we saw that the New Hope had took her and then i pulled out my gun saying "let the girl down" and the New Hope member saying "And what if i don't you" as he raised a blade to Cera throat, then Paine got out her sword and saying "let my daughter down or i will kill myself" but the he didn't listen to her warring but as he raised the blade closer to her throat she started to scream because she was scare and a burst of light came from her and the man went flying and then Cera eyes were a white and said "leave me alone" in a demonic tone after that the man ran away and Cera passed out and Paine ran up to her saying are you ok , then Baralai started to ran after the man but i yelled him not to because Cera is safe now and then Baralai ran to see if Cera was ok , then we heard the roar of the airship as it land.