The darkness consumed her entire being. She trembled with barely controlled
rage. Her eyes held fires that dared to threaten to freeze hell itself. She
stood slowly as if her body were made of fine wine. She looked towards the
man that she could see clearly in the night though his cloak hid his face.
Suddenly she ran forward her intent as clear as her mind. KILL. She thrust her sword as the figure dodged languidly. Sweat poured off her brow as she swung around with a kick to the head. He dodged again and she was thrown to the ground by a kick to the face.
She coughed up blood coating what was left of her all ready blood soaked clothes. She rose once again and prepared to attack only to get hit square in the stomach by the clad figure. She was struck in the face and then kicked again in the stomach.
The figure then took a hold of her shirt and dragged her close to his face. A dagger glistered in the moonlight and she frantically tried to get away but the figure only held on tighter. She pushed out of his hold and managed to escape.
She defended herself as best she could only to lose her sword in the process. In a desperate attempt to flee she stepped back quickly only run into a tree. Trapped. The figure ran toward her the dagger in plain sight as it lunged forward. She closed her eyes tight as her fear took over. The knife was shoved into the bark on the side of her head.
"Never close your eyes on your opponent. Even in defeat let him see that you shall forever haunt his dreams. We are done." With that the man in black walked casually away. The young woman slid to the ground instantly getting up when she saw the figure stop, having expected her to follow. And she did.
Me: So what do you think of my story? I know it's knida really short and you have probably no idea who I'm talking about in this scene. But please review and tell me if I should continue.
Evil Muse: Hey! Why am I 'Evil Muse.' I should be known as The Ruler of The World!!!!!! HaHahaaaaaaaa Buhahahahaha Muahahahahahahhahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Me: 0o. Just ignore him. He can be a little... well. Uh-just crazy.
Evil Muse: I'm not crazy. Just happily insane. Look at the M&M's in the Sky!!
Me: Anyway please review.
Thank You for reading!
Suddenly she ran forward her intent as clear as her mind. KILL. She thrust her sword as the figure dodged languidly. Sweat poured off her brow as she swung around with a kick to the head. He dodged again and she was thrown to the ground by a kick to the face.
She coughed up blood coating what was left of her all ready blood soaked clothes. She rose once again and prepared to attack only to get hit square in the stomach by the clad figure. She was struck in the face and then kicked again in the stomach.
The figure then took a hold of her shirt and dragged her close to his face. A dagger glistered in the moonlight and she frantically tried to get away but the figure only held on tighter. She pushed out of his hold and managed to escape.
She defended herself as best she could only to lose her sword in the process. In a desperate attempt to flee she stepped back quickly only run into a tree. Trapped. The figure ran toward her the dagger in plain sight as it lunged forward. She closed her eyes tight as her fear took over. The knife was shoved into the bark on the side of her head.
"Never close your eyes on your opponent. Even in defeat let him see that you shall forever haunt his dreams. We are done." With that the man in black walked casually away. The young woman slid to the ground instantly getting up when she saw the figure stop, having expected her to follow. And she did.
Me: So what do you think of my story? I know it's knida really short and you have probably no idea who I'm talking about in this scene. But please review and tell me if I should continue.
Evil Muse: Hey! Why am I 'Evil Muse.' I should be known as The Ruler of The World!!!!!! HaHahaaaaaaaa Buhahahahaha Muahahahahahahhahahaha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Me: 0o. Just ignore him. He can be a little... well. Uh-just crazy.
Evil Muse: I'm not crazy. Just happily insane. Look at the M&M's in the Sky!!
Me: Anyway please review.
Thank You for reading!