Hello there and welcome to Frozen (again). this is a story that has been bugging me for a while and i really wanted to give it a try, anyhow, the story is NOT on your typical writing way since I'm using Celtx to write it and I also wanted to give this a shot (although I discover I suck at it) anyway here I leave this If you read it and want to leave a suggestion I'm open to it since this is still a work in progress. Enjoy ^^
*It starts in silence for a few seconds. Sudden footsteps sound coming closer and a shadow appears looming a top of a thick layer of ice saw penetrates the ice crossing it, other men join him as the all sing a song.
ICEMEN
Born of cold and winter air,
and mountain air combining.
This icy force both foul and fair,
has a frozen heart worth mining.
So cut through the heart,cold and clear, strike for love and strike for fear.
See the beauty sharp and sheer...
*A small boy with blond hair appears sitting in a small sleigh taking a bite out of a carrot. He gives a bite to his following reindeer, one of the icemen behind him ruffles his hair. The boy smiles as he sees the older men still singing and cutting ice.
ICEMEN
Split the ice apart, and break the frozen heart.(Grunts of men pulling ice)
Watch your step, let it go.(Grunts of men pulling ice)Watch you step, let it go.
Beautiful, powerful, dangerous, cold.
Ice has a magic, can't be controlled.
Stronger than one, stronger than ten, stronger than a hundred men.
*Twilight leaves leaving the men in sheer darkness as they continues their work.
ICEMEN
Born of cold and winter air,
and mountain air combining.
This icy force both foul and fair,
has a frozen heart worth mining.
So cut through the heart,cold and clear, strike for love and strike for fear. There's beauty and there's danger here. Split the ice apart. Beware the frozen heart.
*As the last lines of the song are heard one of the men signals the boy that its time to head back. The boy readies his reindeer and they start back to town.
*Now is dark outside and we found ourselves in a wooden cabin. The door suddenly opens to reveal the boy only this time he's alone, with a look of excitement on his face.
GRANDMA
Kristoff be careful, and don't go to far.
KRISTOFF
Yes grandma.
*Kristoff runs out the porch and into the woods as light snow starts to fall around him. He runs and runs until he finds himself alone in a the dark forest. Kristoff doesn't seem concern about it since he's entertained by the snow. He follows it until he slips on a layer of ice in the floor.
KRISTOFF
Ice?
*He follows the trail and soon comes across a girl with blond nearly white hair. Her hands shoot to the sky and snow falls. Kristoff walks near.
KRISTOFF
Snow?(he says close to the girl)
*The girl spins around startled by it. her face is one of shock and horror.
KRISTOFF
Don't be scared, I won't hurt you. What's your name?
*The girl stutters but her voice is clear.
Elsa
It's Elsa.
KRISTOFF
Can you do that snow trick again?
*Elsa moves her fingers and snow falls from them as Kristoff looks astonished.
*Kristoff looks at the girl but notices she is still not really moving.
KRISTOFF
What's wrong?
ELSA
I'm not supposed to?
KRISTOFF
Don't worry I wont tell if you don't want me too.
ELSA
Don't tell.
*Kristoff nods. He looks around and sees piles of snow surrounding them. a wicked grin appears on his face.
KRISTOFF
Do you wanna build a snowman?
*Elsa starts smiling. Together they start building it.
*They play and laugh until from way behind a voice is heard.
GRANDMA
Kristoff time to come inside!
KRISTOFF
Awwww! I wanna play some more.
ELSA
But if you don't they will be worried.
KRISTOFF
Not fair.
ELSA
Tell you what, I'll be here tomorrow so we can play some more.
KRISTOFF
Promise?
ELSA
Promise.
*Time passed and Kristoff and Elsa became friends. not that young anymore, Kristoff goes to their playing spot (the same one where he met Elsa. Elsa is there but her hands are on her ears and she rocks back and forward. her head shakes from time to time and she mutters things that he can't understand.
KRISTOFF
Elsa?
*Elsa keeps on without hearing him. Kristoff walks a bit further and asked again with the same response only now he can hear what Elsa is muttering.
ELSA
Your future is bleak, your kingdom will splinter, your land shall be cursed with eternal winter. With blast of cold will come dark art and a ruler with a frozen heart. Then all will perish in snow and ice with the tyrant ruler at its high.
KRISTOFF
What...
*Elsa startled by the voice (and unable to control her magic) stands. the ice surrounding her engulfs her then blasts in every direction. one of the shards impales Kristoff in the head leaving him unconscious.
*Elsa turns around and sees Kristoff. His eye seems covered with snowflakes. Elsa rushes to Kristoff side and starts crying. A near by iceman hears her and runs in her direction.
*When he arrives he finds the place covered in snow with Kristoff in Elsa's hands. it wasn't winter yet.
ICEMAN
Help! The ice witch has Kristoff!
*Elsa freezes as soon as she hears this and lets go of Kristoff. His head fall on a cushion of snow. Elsa stands and without turning she walks away. tiny snowflakes surround her body. after covering her they disappear leaving only the empty air.
*Icemen rush to Kristoff's help. only his grandmother took him inside the cabin and made a special drink for him.
ICEMAN
Will that work?
GRANDMA
*Only time will tell, the curse of the snow witch is quite powerful even with this broth Kristoff may once again remember the snow witch but lets hope that he never has to suffer from this again.
*Elsa steps into her father's study. The king sees his daughter and her face.
KING
Elsa?
ELSA
I don't wanna hurt anyone.
KING
That's why we always keep you here, so you can be safe.
ELSA
There has to be another way.
*The king confused took out a pair of gloves and gave them to his daughter.
KING
This shall conceal your power and make you an ordinary girl.
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Conceal, don't feel.
*Elsa puts on the first glove and touches a surface. seeing that nothing happened she puts on the second one and touches the surface again.
KING
What happened?
ELSA
I don't wanna build snowmans anymore
*Elsa brakes into sobs. Seeing this the king wraps his daughter in his arms.
*The camera moves back showing the castle. As it does this the first snowflakes start falling (Vuelie starts playing, and title screen appears).
As it can be read I'm sticking to the movie i will move from time to time but I'll try to be as faithful to both (the story and movie) as I can. If stumbled upon review or whatever.
