Camp rock story draft 1
my first fanfiction tell me what you think
Summery
Smitchie through the years follow them through there ups and downs my first fanfiction story please review
Authers note:
I do not own camp rock demi lavato or the Jonas brothers or Christopher wild
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(Mitchie's pov)
"Meet me at the docks in 5 minutes" a voice I have grown accustomed to over the summers that voice that can leave me breathless.
"uhhhh sure I will see you in a minute" good now I can think clearly and I can see my mum dad and Caitlyn coming towards me with knowing looks.
Mitchie's mum: "you did great honny I will see you in the morning"
Mitchie's dad: "you were fabulous I have to leave now though so I will see you when you get home" gave me a kiss on the head and left with my mum
Caitlyn: "so you and Shane then what's going on there then"
Why did she have to pick tonight to be observant "n-n-nothing is going on" my voice raising up an octave.
"Sure miss I can't lie to save my life." Caitlyn whispered oh must she be a know it all.
"Fine we are going on a canon ride to talk happy and I don't want you to eavesdrop I will tell you later in our cabin" I informed her with that I walked away to Caitlyn's and my cabin to get my cousin Luke's hoddie even though it is a boys it keeps you warm.
(At the docks Shane's pov)
I need to tell mitchie I like her and want to be able to hold her when I want girls are so frustrating I can't read mitchie because she don't treat me like Shane Grey the jerky rock star she treats me as Shane Adam Grey the person.
"You know talking to yourself is like one of the first signs of craziness" my brother Jason Grey roared in my ear.
"Jas you trying to kill me" I expressed to him trust Jason to be the one to find me.
"No ... oh look it birds that reminds me I thought you were making me a bird house"
Trust Jason to get distracted by birds.
"Sorry I have been busy" I stated with sarcasm dripping in my words.
"So bro who was you mumbling about before" trust Jason to bring it back up.
"Mitchie" i mumbled as low as I could.
"Give it a go bro you never know if you can trust her if you don't try" wow who would of though Jason the airhead of connect 3 would be so wise at times.
Flash back
At club 21's my soon to be ex-girlfriend Chelsea stain and best friend were swapping spit with each other. Great just what I wanted
"Chelsea stains you two timing manipulative bitch we are through." I had shouted hastily
"But baby I thought it was you" she had acted so drunk as if I would believe it.
"You are welcome to that slutty bitch and f.y.i get you crape out my house and I never talk to me again" I had screeched to none other than my best friend the one and only Christopher wild.
End of flashback
(Mitchie pov)
"Shane, Shane, Shane" wow he must be thinking deeply I know I will chuck water at him.
"Ahhhhh" he shrieked
"Shane breath" I advised him.
"So you're the girl with the voice wow who would of thought" he mumbled just loud enough for me to hear
"Yer who would have thought" wow this is not at all awkward (not)
"Mitchie I don't know how to tell you this" he is starting to worry me know.
"Go on" I urged I don't like were this is going.
"You changed me from jerky rock star Shane Gray to just Shane Adam Gray, over the course of the summer hear at camp I-I-I" urgh come spit it out " I like you mitchie and I don't want to lose you if I do I might gooooo….."Wow he talks to much so I silenced him with a kiss.
(Shane's pov)
I knew I shouldn't of said anything " I just going to go because I just made a huge mistake" but I was silenced by those same angelic lips on my again.
"Shane I like you too so shut up and fucking kiss me would you" wow she is feisty I like it No bad thought that is Shane rock star gray coming back .
Then for the fourth time that night we kissed with no lust just passion in it.
"Shane we are from two different worlds you are Shane Gray lead singer of connect 3 and I am a nobody finishing school, why would you go after me" she stated
Now or never "mitchie be my girlfriend?" omg what have I done is she going to turn me down?