OK, so this is my first Fan fiction whatsoever, so please, questions, comments, CONSTRUCTIVE criticism please~
Any and ALL credit goes to Hiromu Arakawa, the creator of FMA, Viz media, the publisher, and Funimation for the English dub, and the Japanese dubbing company for the Japanese dub, and all those other wonderful companies who helped make FMA what it is now~
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"It seems like a crappy show to me" Jack said, as I finished explaining to him, via writing, Fullmetal Alchemist. I sighed. Not like it was his fault he sported a very confused look on his face
It seems that every time that I try to say something that makes any sense, even if it does, no one seems to get it. Like I am writing in a foreign language, lost to everyone except me. And that's not just because my writing was messy, because it's not. 'Why is this?' is the only thing I can wonder before I am thrown into a world of confusion, as the skylight above me in the gym basically exploded. Everyone in there for the pep rally (which I find strange to have in FEBUARY) ducked and ran from the gym. Which include me, until, that is, I realized my black hooded floor-length coat (which went to five or six inches past my feet, dragging behind me) had fallen to the floor underneath the bleachers. I ran under there to get my jacket, and my twin brother, Zephyr, and our freshman friend Ash followed me, which was smart, considering we were well hidden from the reason for everyone to be rushing out of the room. Someone who looks suspiciously like the armored Barry the chopper from the FMA anime/manga/novel series (yes, there is a novel. No, I haven't read it) had come crashing through with what also looked suspiciously like a butcher's knife. Everyone froze when he spoke. No, not because of his voice.
"Alright!" he yelled, pointing his knife to everyone. He defiantly sounded like
Barry. "Where is the brat Zhen!" no one made a sound, or moved an inch. Everyone seemed to be holding their breath. "Someone must know her, or at least where she is! She goes to this school! Sophomore, 15 years old? " he growled. I almost laughed, no one of this school knew me as Zhen, as me. They knew me as Zephyr's twin sister, or as Ash's friend.
He must have been getting really annoyed, because he threw his knife at the principal, not hitting him. Barely. People almost screamed. Some did, including (to my immense satisfaction) the school slut Audrey and jerk jock Calvin.
(A/N: No offence to any Audreys or Calvins out there, just two random names.)
"What do you want her for?" a girl no one really liked asked in a disgusted tone "She's a nobody. She probably ran away a while ago.
"Well, it's either her or all of you." He said. Then, he pointed the knife at her. "Are you by any chance her?" he asked excitedly. "My boss will be happy if you are!"
"Yes she is!" some random person yelled, and in the blink of an eye she was decapitated.
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OK, yah it's uber uber short, but that's all I Can write right now, because I don't really know what to write, and it means I can leave an awesome cliff hanger~ So, because I'm not as magic as I'd like to think I am, I don't exactly know what you want to read, so tell me what you'd like to see please~