Naruto the nine tailed fox

Hello readers, this is QCGhostWarrior, on the beaches of old orchard :) I have decided to make the one shot I recently made into a full story since I have nothing else to do but relax at the moment and for the next few days. Also be advised that this text is being written on an iPhone so if there are mistakes or something, sorry. Anyway, enjoy the story and also , feed back is always appreciated. This is QCghostwarrior over and out!

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5 years after kyuubi attack:

Naruto was running from another mob that wanted to 'finish what the fourth started'. It has been this way since he was 2 and the orphanage kicked him out claiming 'demons don't deserve to be cared for'. Since that day he has been living on the streets and beaten almost daily. The worst part is, he doesn't even know why.

Naruto's pov:
I was running from a mob again. I don't understand them, I just wanted to buy some food. Why do they do this? I didn't do anything to them. Why?! Then I turned In the wrong direction and got cornered in an alley. I tried to turn and run, but they were already there. "Going somewhere demon?!" Someone shouted. And then the beating came.

Mindscape naruto pov:

When I woke up, I was in some sort of sewer. 'Great, they through me in the sewers. Why can't they leave me alone.' I thought sadly. Then, I heard a growling noise in the distance. I was scared but decided to follow it anyway. After what seemed like hours of walking, I arrived in a giant room with an equally giant cage at one end. I walked closer till I was touching the bars when all of a sudden I heard movement in the cage. I looked closer and was able to distinguish something big moving in the shadows. I backed away while it moved closer. When It got to the bars I saw the biggest fox I had ever seen. It was about the size of the hokage monument. It had red slitted eyes, long ears and a deep red fur.

Kyuubi's pov:
I had been resting again after having healed the kit's injuries. It enrages me that the stupid villagers can't see the difference between me and a poor defenceless kit. Anyway, I was just about to fall asleep when I saw the kit standing in front of the cage that kept me sealed. I got up and walked closer, happy to finally be able to see him. When I entered the light so he could see me, he was clearly scared so I tried to appear as non threatening as possible by lying down and told him ''come here kit, I promise I won't hurt you.'' To my great joy, he appeared to be less frightened and actually moved closer. Now I can try to make up for making his life hell by being sealed inside him.

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Ok so this was my first chapter for naruto the ninetailed fox and I will probably make more but for now tell me what you guys think about it. And as always plz review
This is QCGhostWarrior, over and out!