This is my first fan fic so please give me ways that I can improve in!
Disclaimer: I do not own Bleach
I had no sentimental attachment to them.
I don't even remember their name.
They had given up.
They were weak.
Pathetic creatures.
The had asked me to eat them so they could join me.
They saw me grow.
To achieve my aims.
The times that I had killed others.
The time when I became an Espada.
It was the time of my glory.
Then the shinigami came.
It happened as fast as you could say hollow.
I was shoved out of the 10.
I had been knocked off my throne.
I had lost my honour.
My pride.
My dignity.
Rage went through my veins.
My blood boiled.
I needed to rip him limb by limb.
They saw me fight the wretched shinigami.
I had reached my limit.
I was staring up at the sky.
Defeated.
Defeated by a shinigami.
Defeated by a filthy human.
Then I was saved.
Saved by a shinigami.
Saved by a human.
They saw me fall.
They saw me fail.
Worst of all,
They saw my pride shatter.
So urm I hope that was ok :)
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