Hey guys! Well, this is my first fanfiction. EVER. So since I'm kinda new at this, i would really appreciate some reviews for some constructive critisism? :D .. But please don;t be harsh, :) lol

Anyways, I'll let you read the story i guess! :)

Disclaimer: I do not own twilight.

"BELLA! Wait for me! " Called my best friend Alice. She had a huge grin on her face and I knew she was up to something I could not refuse. Alice is short with black hair spiking in every imaginable direction. Her walk was so graceful; you'd think she was a professional dancer. I called her my little pixie. She despised me for that. She has been my best friend for as long as I could remember, and I loved so much.

"Hey, Alice. What's up?"I asked with a little fear that I hoped didn't show too much.

"I got invited to a formal this week end and I'm dragging you with me…" Oh god. And it was already Wednesday.

"But…"

"No buts Bella. You have to go out once in a while, you know, live a little? You do know how to, don't you?"

I knew that I should NEVER go against Alice, because she always had her way.

"Fine, Alice. I'll go, but don't expect me to be happy about it."

She squealed and gave me a hug.

"YAY! Oh don't be such a party pooper; you'll have plenty of fun. Oh by the way, Emmett's the one getting us in the dance. You don't mind don't you?" Emmett was Alice's older brother. He was tall dark haired and very muscular. He's been the object of some of my fantasies before, but I moved on from that. I had no chance with him and he could be very disgusting at times.

"No problem, Alice."

The day went by pretty quickly, and so did the rest of the week. It was already Friday, the day of that stupid dance, and Alice was practically bouncing of the walls. We decided that we get ready at her house, since she wanted to play Barbie with me and she had all the stuff. So after school I drove to her house in my old beat up 1960 something red Chevy and was greeted by her parents, Carlisle and Esme. They were like my second parents – I had only my dad because my mom abandoned us when I was born- and I loved them a lot. Carlisle works at the hospital, and Esme is an interior decorator. Their Love for each other is sometimes overwhelming, but I don't mind. It's nice to be around people who love each other as they do.

"Hey Bella, it's so nice to see you, but please, stop knocking at the door when you come here, you're always welcomed here," smiled Carlisle.

"Ok, Carlisle." And I rushed to Alice's room. Her room was huge and had a wonderful view of the forest. Her closet was kind of frightening though. It was almost twice the size of her room, because she was a hardcore shopaholic. I knew she had something for me in there to wear tonight.

"Bella! Sit down on this chair and don't move unless I tell you to. I am going to make you over and every guy at the dance will be drooling."

And for the next two to three hours (I lost count of the hours) I was her own personal Barbie doll. She curled my hair in perfect bit ringlets and my face was absolutely flawless after she was done with me. I still hadn't seen the dress and I was getting pretty scared.

"Ok, Bells, there's one more thing left and that's the dress." She went in the closet and took out what I guessed was my dress. I changed and saw myself in the mirror.

It was absolutely gorgeous.

It was sliver, it went one inch higher than my knees – which I thought was kind of short – it had a huge bow on the front of the waist and was puffy at the bottom. It was strapless. Without thinking, I gave Alice a hug.

"Oh, thank you Alice. I LOVE IT."

"I knew you would," she said with a grin. It took her only half an hour to get ready and she looked so beautiful in her black dress. I personally think that black is her best color, but that's just me. It was strapless, like me, and sat just below the leg with some puffiness. She was so beautiful, I was jealous. Just then, her brother walked in. He was wore a black ensemble, which fit him very well.

"Hey girls. Wow Bella you look great." He was practically drooling, and I found myself blushing a scarlet red. "And of course you look like… my sister." Alice shot him a glare, and Emmett snickered. "You girls ready for the dance? I'm leaving in two minutes."

"Yeah, we'll be down in a couple of seconds." We came down the stairs, and were awed by Esme, and I think I saw a tear in her eye. Tears of happiness. We took some pictures and finally we got to leave the house. I gotta be honest, I was scared like hell!

Alright my first chapter, DONE.

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