Hi this is my first Animal Crossing story. So if you could please review and tell me what I need to work on or what you liked/disliked about it. Thank you.
It was a cold December morning and I had just been created by a girl called Abby. I was glad about the cold because I need the cold. The thing was it was freezing even to me! How the animals and humans will stay warm this winter I have no idea. Anyway I was just staying there on the same spot watching all the animals go by. They never talked to me though. I wish there were other snowmen here. I wonder if I could talk to Abby and she could make more snowmen? Oh here comes an animal whats his name again? I can't remember oh well. He just walked by me pretending he didn't see me how nice. The animals annoy me sometimes because I'm left all by myself on the same spot all day and all night. They get to walk about talk to each other, go fishing, go bug catching, dig up fossils and go shopping. Could they not at least spend 2 minutes talking to me. At least Abby talks to me sometimes which is good.
It's snowing again why does it keep snowing it keeps getting colder.
So did you like it please review. I'm going to do another 2 chapters. Please review. Thank you.