Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto, Sir Masashi Kishimoto does (I call him 'Sir' cos let's face it, he deserves it) BUT I do own my OC though and this is my first fic...*sigh*finally huh, so be nice or else...PS. For the rating, it might change in future chapters but for now it's a M, just to be safe though.
Author Note: This is my first fic and to give a quick insight into the story, this is what happens when I make a wish on the eve of my 17th birthday and how it affects me and the whole Naruto-verse.
"Talking"
'Thinking'
"Bijuu/Demonic/Jutsu/Summons/Guardians/Unearthly Talking"
'Bijuu/Demonic/Jutsu/Summons/Guardians/Unearthly Thinking'
(Impromptu Author Notes/Deep Inner Thoughts...mine as the writer and character)
Words with emphasis/keyword
Chapter 1: Be careful what you wish for...
(AN: Just before I start though I would like to inform you that Chapter 1 is basically an introduction to my OC, how he got to be in the Naruto-verse and how he deals with it. This chapter is written the way it is just so that you all can have a complete understanding before we get into meeting the main Naruto-verse characters and get into the story plot properly, so be patient with this story because most readers don't like OCs or having to wait before the action of a story starts. P.S. This is Shippuuden Era...a month or so before Naruto returns to Konoha.)
"No one can say what the future holds but whatever it is you can bet it's something you never could or would have expected but deserved" - ?
'Why does she always feel the need to come into my room early in the morning to open the curtains,' thought a young male who was just waking up from his sleep by the light threatening to blind him, 'She just does it to annoy me doesn't she?'
His eyes fluttered open a bit and even though his vision was still hazy he could still make out the trees as the sun's rays shone through them...hold on one second, trees?
He blinked...
And then blinked again,
TREES!...
He jolted up looking around frantically. Where was he and why were there trees around, the only trees that were close to him were the ones that grew in his mom's little garden at the back of his house and he sure as heck didn't sleep outside but more importantly even though his vision was blurry he could still make out he was in a forest of some sort as there were huge mahogany trees all around, but that brought forth another question...Why was his vision blurry?
He used his hands to rub any bit of sleep that may still be in his eyes but his vision still remained in that same blurry manner which at that point got him panicking. He looked around frantically trying to figure out why his sight was the way it was because he was sure he was definitely fully awake and then more as he panicked, he felt something, it was like a little went spike through his eyes all of a sudden he could see as nothing he had ever imagined before and even that was an understatement as his vision went completely through the roof as he could details of details within those details even as he looked at the trees, grass and all around him.
There were birds chirping which he hadn't noticed before since his mind was still on the fact that he was not in his room anymore but now he could clearly see them and everything they did, it was like he was watching a 3D HD movie up close in person and with each movement they made, they made it feel like they were moving very slowly from the flapping of their wings to their rhythmic dancing as they sang and flew without a care in the world.
Looking down at the grass he could see insects of all kinds moving through it and just like the birds he could see each of them in perfect detail as well. He turned his gaze forward to see a deer that stared at him for a second or two as it lifted up its head from where it was enjoying a patch of grass, it tilted its head to the side still staring at him in very curious way that made it seem cute before leaping away and he had to say even that was quite the sight as he had never seen a deer before.
Of course he knew what a deer was but when you grow up in an urban setting, the only animals you see are those at the zoo or on TV but this was a real deer and it had looked at him from a closed distance and probably gone on its way when it noticed the person it stared at was no cause for alarm.
This of course brought the young male's attention back to the fact that he was in the middle of a forest which he didn't know where with no one around, but before he could go back into mental panic he heard the first words he'd hear in this strange new place which would in a way be the answer to all the questions he had...
"Earth Release: Earth Dome Prison" (fuck)
He turned his head so fast you'd think it'd snap off just as he heard those words being uttered and he saw it in detail even though he was too shocked to react as the earth around him closed up in a dome trapping him inside.
And in that moment it all made sense...
FLASHBACK (The Day Before)
'Well that took long enough and I even worked out a failsafe for any changes that Kishimoto may make or any 'Fan fiction' writer can think of in the ultimate doujutsu.' A 16 yr old (soon to be 17 yr old anyway) dark skinned male thought to himself as he turned to lie down on his bed after writing some things down in a book and setting said book down beside him taking a moment to look at it before staring back at the ceiling.
Ever since John Carlisle Thomas or JT for short as he was usually called had started reading the manga series Naruto, he only thought of one word to describe it, Fucking Awesome...okay maybe that was two words but you get the point, and as time goes on and something you see as 'Fucking Awesome' keeps going further up the awesome bar, you do what some people with some spare time on their hands and an addiction to something like this usually do, and that is you make your own official character or OC as it's called.
These OCs as sometimes very awesome characters you've created to what you would depict as fitting for something so awesome or in JT's case an OC who is the embodiment of how you would see yourself if it were really you there.
And that was how he created the character 'JT Hogosha'.
Some people would wonder, 'JT Hogosha', seriously? (With a raised eyebrow of course) What kind of crappy name is that? Well the answer would be quite simple really and that's that the character had been created exactly how he wanted it to be so why not give it his name or the abbreviation of it and 'Hogosha' was Japanese and meant 'Guardian' because what he'd potentially do would be to protect and guide those whose responsibility it was to make sure everyone that deserved a happy ending got a happy ending and not to get mainly involved unless he had to so you can understand how the name came about.
In the book lying next to him was in close to perfect and to the letter detail everything that this character was from his physical appearance, how he looked, talked, height, how much he weighed to the colour of his eyes, hair, the length of his hair to anything you could think about even to the length of his dick (What?! He had to cover all areas of the 'physical appearance')
He had also written down how high the character's IQ would be, how its thought process was, how it saw the world and how its understanding of it was because that was how he also saw the world and that was how his understanding of the world was.
If there was one thing that JT could say he had a lot of, it was Understanding. He in one word 'understood' things that came by him and wouldn't take them for granted plus reading about a lot of tragic things that happened in the real world really did give you more appreciation for life as it were so that was also imbibed into the thought process of his OC's creation.
As for the abilities his OC would have, he had very conveniently made his OC virtually indestructible and even more conveniently god-like because he felt if you're gonna always be someone's bodyguard (so to speak), you had to always be stronger than the person you're guarding right?. Even though he wouldn't do too much of the general fighting unless necessary and when he did his enemies would be like ants under his boot, he would take his time for a drawn out fight just to show how futile their attempt was at beating him, but he would still have his own fair share of close calls and strong opponents.
JT continued to stare at the ceiling wondering what tomorrow was going to be like. It wasn't the winter season anymore but it was still chilly even though it didn't snow where he was. He looked back at the book that lay next to him and honestly he was starting to feel a little obsessed with what he had spent most of his spare time doing.
Opening it once and going through it to make sure he didn't miss anything he sighed as he heard the reminder on his alarm clock go off "January 12. Tomorrow's the day monkey butt".
He looked at the clock on the wall that showed 10:00am which he had set the reminder on his talking alarm clock that was the shape of a parrot (and talked like one too)to . He didn't know whether to be happy and just plain old depressed so he just settled for face-palming as he groaned...he really didn't need another thing reminding of what the next day was, his thought process was put on hold though as he heard a knock at the door of his room.
Yep, it was gonna be a looonnnngggg day...
Time Skip: That Evening
He sat on the roof of his house staring up at the stars, something he loved to do whenever he felt himself depressed or feeling down and the cause of this throughout that day he had been constantly wondering even with him getting a year older in a couple of hours, would anything still change.
He had friends and he had his family but his life was the same old routine everyday with one or two switches, plus and minuses here and there but other than that it was relatively the same which thinking about it deeply could always get a heavy sigh out of him.
Looking back up at the stars always made him forget it a little but with the addition of the drink in his hand and packet by the side, he was sure when he was finished he wouldn't even remember why he came up there in the first place.
He took another can of beer from pack, he had managed to get one while he was out with his older brother Loki at the store today (don't feel like saying the older brother's name cause it's not really relevant...yet, but for now let's call him Loki cos I call my older brother that too. Same concept if you hadn't noticed) so he owed Loki one...a couple in fact but who's counting...
Meanwhile
"Let's see there's the time I slipped him a pass at the party where they had beer, there's the time I got beer for he and his friends at the party they threw…well a couple of parties and a couple of times, four I think but that last time they hooked my up with Sarah so that one's all good and then there's the number of times I've gotten him a couple for he's 'moments'." Loki said to himself as ticked of some words in a note pad, "That boy owes me big and I will collect, starting with anything he gets tomorrow kukuku…oh sh!t! Damn, I did again."
Back to the Roof
Taking another sip from the can in his hand, JT looked down at the book in his hand he had written all there was to know about the character 'JT Hogosha'. He didn't know what he'd do with it now that it was finished because he just enjoyed making it in the first place but now that it was over and done he really just couldn't think of anything, 'Maybe I'll try my hands at a fanfic of my own and make him an OC there…yeh, that should work.'
He sighed and took another sip out of the can, "I wish I could just be 'JT Hogosha' and escape it all". Unknown to him there was a star that had just shot past and as if responding to his wish it shone brighter before bursting into sparks and then fading out.
He dropped the last empty can of beer as he could already feel himself getting drowsy but kept his vision clear enough to head to his room and on to his bed.
FLASHBACK END
'I'm in the world of anime/manga…I'M IN THE WORLD OF ANIME/MANGA!' He shouted to himself mentally with widened eyes not believing what was happening, even though he was trapped and it was dark he could still see as clear as day.
But first to make sure this wasn't some dream he did the first thing that came to his mind and pinched himself…hard
"Ouch!"
His voice…
That wasn't his voice…
It sounded like…'like the combination of deepness that Shino had, the laid back voice of Kakashi and the relaxed smoothness that Minato had giving it a very Vin Diesel like feel', exactly as he had written it in his book. He had tried to imagine what it would sound like when he had written it but now that he was hearing it himself he didn't know what to think but then he noticed something else…
It had been quite a while since he had been trapped in the dome made of earth he was presently in.
Now that he knew what was happening, how it had happened and that it was in fact real he got an almost evil smirk on his face as he thought of how best to deal with his captors but the look disappeared as he wondered what he had done to have them go after him but it didn't matter, they would suffer for thinking they could trap down someone as awesome as 'JT Hogosha'.
He closed his eyes to try to get a feel of what was happening around him and feel he did.
He could feel everything.
It was even more surreal than the new way he could see.
He felt some sort of energy that flowed through everything around him and even felt the same type of energy flowing through him if only slightly different but he could tell that there was more than just one type of it flowing through him but put that at the back of his mind for later thought as he'd try to remember everything he had written about the way his current body was made up of.
'So this is what Chakra feels like…'
He could sense the chakra of the two men outside of the dome with one higher than the other meaning it was either a Jounin and a Chunin or a Chunin and a Genin but from the technique that had been used and the amount of chakra put in it, he had to go for his first guess.
He opened his eyes and could feel a slight drain in his body, nothing too noticeable but he could feel it there or in this case the lack of it being there.
He concentrated and tried to direct his chakra through his body the way he wanted it to go for what he was about to do, he wasn't sure if this was the right way to do it since he had the concept down only in theory but as he did it, it started to feel more right and almost instinctual but something felt wrong about it, it was like he had been forcing himself to remember something that he already knew how to do and did on a regular basis so he decided to just let go and not force it. The effects were almost instant and on reflex.
He felt his chakra become concentrated around him like a coating, so raising his hands to his sides he thought excitedly with the same almost evil smirk that he knew his future enemies would become familiar with, 'I can't believe I'm actually going to do this', he then let it all out as hard as he could uttering his first jutsu…
"SHINRA TENSEI"
Saito Akoda was not having a good day at all, not even a good week come to think of it.
He was now a missing nin who used to be Jounin from Iwagakure and at a young age of 19 too which was young for someone at that rank. He had turned missing nin after a series of events that would have even left the strongest of Shinobi packing.
He had like many other ninjas before him (Chunin and Jounin alike with some old enough Genin) tried to get a date with the lava mouthed grand-daughter of the Tsuchikage, Kurotsuchi. It wasn't because she was a drop dead gorgeous bomb-shell which she wasn't or because of the assets that she had which she didn't (she was rather flat come to think of it). No, it was just to gain the attention that would come with the rumors of being in a relationship with the grand-daughter of the Tsuchikage, but when he had tried to ask her out she had flat out turned him down before he could even say anything. She had then turned and walked away but as he followed after her to try to convince her to hear him out, he had tripped on a stone and while falling reached out for something to keep himself up but unfortunately he had accidentally latched onto Kurotsuchi's back side.
There had been a moment's pause where time had almost stopped, what had made it worse was at the time he had had his eyes closed so didn't see what he latched onto. He noticed that whatever it was it wasn't the ground and it was rather squishy come to think of it, so out of curiosity he had given it a squeeze. The atmosphere of the area had proceeded to rapidly drop as she turned her head to stare at him with an all too sweet smile and a twitching eyebrow that promised all the pain that hell had to offer and then some, he could swear he saw the Shinigami over head licking its accursed knife staring down at him.
He would never forget what happened next as she proceeded to chase him around the whole village intent on ending his existence. As if that wasn't enough, when the Tsuchikage had heard about the incident, he had proceeded to assign him to missions that would be sure to kill him or place him on a team that had Kurotsuchi on it so she could finish what she had started since as the Tsuchikage he couldn't be seen chasing a single Shinobi around the village plus that bloody aching back of his was in no condition for it either.
Not many people had tried to ask Kurotsuchi out and those that had the boldness to do so although they were all shot down had ended their pursuit at that but because he had accidentally touched her butt, it seemed as if his life had ended there and people had started to look at him with apprehension.
He had then taken that as the last straw and proceeded to leave the village but a childhood friend of his Koga Nahoda who was a Chunin and had always looked up to him had followed him out of the village.
He hadn't objected because quite frankly he felt every man was in charge of his destiny so whatever his friend did was none of his business so he didn't care if he followed him but he would admit that he did enjoy having company even though Koga could be really annoying company.
They had been chased by Iwa Anbu Hunter-nin but had managed to evade them (He wasn't a Jounin and A rank for nothing); come to think of it he could swear that they were getting rather persistent lately even going far as to chase him into Hi no Kuni, something told him that it had something to do with some threatening by the Tsuchikage to not return until they found and brought them back.
After evading the hunter-nin, he had stumbled upon a young sleeping man who looked a little younger than he did, probably 17 or 18 years of age with long red hair reaching his waist that was just two or three shades lighter from becoming blood-red, two long bangs on each side of his face and another one going from the left side to cover his right eye which seems rather ragged and not in its right place at the moment.
He wore a black fitted Chinese style sleeveless vest with a strange symbol at the back that looked like a two tri-blades without the handles making it look like a 'T' facing away from each other, one upwards and the other downwards, both in the colour Red. He also wore black elbow length fingerless gloves, black trousers and bare feet with bandages covering his legs from his ankles up into his trousers. From the looks of it he didn't think the boy had noticed them yet.
Of course Koga wanting to let off some steam suggested they attack the boy even though he did look Koga's age come to think of it, but he didn't think the boy would give much of a fight.
They could gather that the boy might be a Shinobi from how he was dressed but there wasn't any headband with him so maybe he was also a missing-nin. If he was a missing-nin then for his age he couldn't be any trouble but he didn't become a Jounin this young by underestimating people. The boy couldn't be higher than Chunin so with a Jounin and a Chunin...the boy would definitely be done for.
As they moved in on the unsuspecting boy, he suddenly shot up looking around frantically. They were at first on guard thinking the boy had managed to sense them but a little later it looked less like he as onto them and more of he didn't know where he was himself.
As time went by, Koga had had enough with the waiting since the boy hadn't noticed them yet and had started to rush out but something told him that the boy in front of them was not someone to be messed with. As his short-dark haired friend Koga whipped out a kunai rushing out he quickly thought of a way to secure the boy from his friend's anger before they knew what they were dealing with.
"Earth Release: Earth Dome Prison"
Koga had then stopped in his tracks and proceeded to complain about not being able to let of some steam but he had immediately told him to shut up and think before acting. After examining the situation they had decided to check the boy's belonging to find out who he was or in Koga's case to see if there was anything valuable and worth stealing.
They had found a bag with filled with some scrolls which he guessed were storage scrolls cementing his belief that the boy was definitely a Shinobi. They tried to open the scrolls but it seemed like they only accepted a particular chakra signature so they gave up on them, then their eyes went to a large scroll that rested on the ground close by and even though they knew they couldn't open it because the same kind of seals that were on the rest would be no doubt on it, they decided to take it with them to try to rack it open at a later date.
As they tried to pick it up though they felt the ground all around rumble and what they heard next would always be engraved in their memory.
"SHINRA TENSEI" (Heavenly Subjugation of the Omnipresent God / Almighty Push)
...
And then they felt it, they were both blown away by a very powerful invisible force.
The force seemed to have originated from the boy inside the stone dome he had erected and from the looks of it, it had blown away everything in the surrounding area away from him while he just stood there with his head down and his hands stretched out to his sides.
Saito had never felt this kind of chakra and power coming off the boy in front of him and he didn't know if he could take on the boy alone since he wasn't sure if Koga was unconscious or dead from having been slammed into a tree and he was sure he himself was bleeding internally, had broken ribs with bruises on the outside.
The boy in front of him then raised his head and without saying a word stretched his hand towards his belongings which flew back at him with amazing speed where he proceeded to pack everything back and without paying attention to them started on his way. He was sure if Koga was awake he would had made a fuss about being ignored but he knew better and didn't want to aggravate someone that had managed to beat them with only one move.
The boy continued to walk off but before disappearing behind a tree, he turned slightly and said "Would you stop thinking of me as a boy, I'm 17 and you're not that much older than I am you know."
And with that he was gone...
He couldn't process what had happened because it was all just too unreal for him but he had been pulled out of his thoughts as Koga had inhaled sharply and started coughing from all the dust the rubble had caused.
As he limped over to help his friend, he thought back to the mysterious boy... no, man and about something he saw when he had turned slightly even if it was for a split second...his eyes.
The pupils of his eyes were blood-red with if he saw well, six black tomoes revolving round his pitch-black iris.
At first he had thought it was the Sharingan but that thought was squashed by him first of all having red hair while the Uchiha were known to have raven black hair but if he had managed to get it from his other parent then why the pupils of his eyes were blood-red instead of just the normal red. Then there was the fact that there were six tomoes revolving round the iris instead of the three that a full grown Sharingan usually had.
He had to admit that whatever doujutsu he had seen was definitely more powerful than the Sharingan, even though he had no idea what it did but the aura he had gotten from it felt like it radiated extreme power that was not to be tested.
Looking back to where the young male had disappeared, he thought, 'Something tells me that we will meet again Shinobi-san and when we do, I won't be defeated so easily'
JT couldn't keep himself from internally chuckling at how cool he had played it after he had used his a gravity release to wreck the entire landscape.
He had to say that he thought he would be exhausted from using that and from putting too much force on the move but he figured since he had let reflex take over, it had calculated the exact amount of chakra he would need and put it into it.
He looked to the sky and remembered that his doujutsu was still active so remembering some info about his character brought his right hand in front of him and a pair of glasses (that in the right light had a light blue hue to it) materialized in his hands out of thin air but if someone had looked closer, they would have noticed that the pair of glasses actually were formed from the air itself.
His eyes proceeded to change back to their normal pale red coloration with no iris that made it look the red variation of the Byakugan.
He walked a little bit further till he got to a river where he used the water as a mirror to see himself and the changes that had been made to his body.
It was exactly as he wanted it though his hair was longer than he thought it would be and his face looked a little girlish but with his voice the difference would be noted, 'Guess my notes weren't as complete as I thought' but as he let out a sigh he heard a gruff feminine voice in his head, "You got what you wished for so you shouldn't complain" and another smooth female voice, "We see you are taking rather quickly to your new predicament and have already gotten in your first battle easily defeating your adversaries".
He smirked and said to himself, "I was wondering when you were going to show yourselves"
...
To Be Continued...
Finally finished with Chapter 1 and I have to say it did take me some time proofreading this since I had to do it at least 5 times, adding some things, changing some things and just totally removing some other things altogether, then proofreading again but it's done now so leave a review and tell me what you think and be nice.
If you're going to criticize, then make sure it's constructive or don't bother and if you're going to ignore me and just flame, then I advise you to go French-kiss a crocodile...
P.S. Notice how 'come to think of it' keeps coming up in Saito's thoughts, well that's like his catch phrase like Shikamaru's 'Troublesome' and not surprisingly JT has one too but you'll have to guess and it'll become obvious at some point...a clue is that it's kind of an older brother to Shikamaru's 'troublesome'...
Live, Learn, Love
Live living, Live learning, Live loving
Learn to live, Learn to learn, Learn to love
Love living, Love learning, Love loving
And Live Learning to Love (I can just see the 'what the fuck?!' expressions on your faces right now lol)
Ja ne.
(^^) ./,,
