Young samurai Parody
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Chapter 1
ATTACK!
Jack Fletcher stood up, the ocean was gleaming in the sun, and the rest of the sailors were singing and drinking. They had just escaped a huge storm which had blown the east, away from Nagasaki. Jack was admiring the view, he was a tall lad with large muscles for his age (13) his blonde hair was long. But he still looked very masculine. His blue eyes were lovely and were just like the calm sea. Jack walked into the captain's cabin. There stood his father, leaning over a map with the captain, "It is too dangerous wokou prowl these waters." Said his father
"I will not risk this ship sinking sir" Argued the captain, "we must repair or she'll sink!" John looked a Jack, and signed for him to leave. As he left, he heard more shouts coming from the cabin; he looked through the spyglass his father gave him. He spied the shore, nothing there. Suddenly a maiden riding on a horse rode on to the shore. Jack stared, she looked beautiful, and he couldn't pry his eyes from her. Her dark hair and her seemingly brown eyes looked amazing. As well as other physical features. The girl stayed there for the whole day, but when it was dark she vanished.
The crew were repairing the ship, and Jack was told to go to the crow's nest to see if anything came. Jack waited for about an hour. Suddenly he couldn't speak. A gag was at his mouth. As well as a sharp looking star. Jack looked at his attacker. It was a shadow. A man dressed in black tights. Jack rammed the man into the pole and screamed. "WE ARE UNDER ATTACK!" The shadow tried to stab Jack, but he jumped out the way, and the shadow fell to the deck with an almighty crack. Jack looked down his father had a pistol and shot another shadow. "JACK!" John yelled he looked up at him. "GET THE RUTTER!" Jack climbed down the rigging, but a shadow began chopping the mast. It began to shake, Jack jumped and quickly stood up, dizzy and winded, and he ran for his father's office.
Jack ran into his father's office, maps were everywhere. The Rutter was in his secret place, his wall, Jack pressed a button and the small lid opened. Jack took the Rutter, and put it in a water skin and ran to the door. Suddenly an explosion happened and the door flew off its hinges. Jack saw a shadow with a blade at John's throat. Jack looked in panic, he grabbed a cutlass, and ran at the shadow, the shadow disarmed him and threw him to the side of the ship, suddenly the gunpowder stores exploded as soon as the shadow ripped John's head off, Jack was blown of the ship as it started to break apart and sink…
Jack landed on the beach, his muscles were aching. Suddenly he saw the beautiful girl. "Am I in heaven?" He stuttered, thinking the girl was an angel. Jack tried to stand up, but fell unconscious.
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