I wish to thank those who have read Thoughts of a dog and his childy, I must admit that I didn't think anyone would like it .

I'm currently thinking of another to write, Something along the lines of. . .

Rin dieing but not leaving. And here it is enjoy,

. . .I didn't think she would leave me after all these years. . .

. . .Who'd have known that age would get a hold on me. . .

. . . So long ago we both held our fears. . .

. . . I thought we'd always be together, me and he. . .

. . . Shes so old, and yet the child I once knew is there. . .

. . . The face I hold is not the one he knows. . .

. . . My cold heart melted when she arrived here. . .

. . . But my old one still shows. . .

. . . Her life force is fading. . .

. . . Whether it shows in a flower. . .

. . . She is leaving me. . .

. . . Or in a sunset. . .

. . . Damn this girl, A child shouldn't die before its father. . .

. . . Maybe in the eyes of every little child. . .

. . . You promised that you'd never leave me. . .

. . . And I will keep that promise I made. . .

. . . You lived a long life and must leave, But I wish that this didn't have to be. . .

. . . The child you loved will always be by your side. . .

. . . Good night Rin, sleep well Until morn comes. . .

. . . Goodnight? Not good night nor good bye, I will never leave the family I have. . .

. . . Sleep my child, sleep in a warm embrace. . .

. . . A side of him that he never shows is seeping through what is so cold. . .

. . . Now she knows not all is cold, Not everything is true, those lies I sold. . .

. . . Does he know this is not goodbye? That death is nothing but a lie. . .

. . . Does she know this is goodbye? That together we cannnot fly?

. . . Does he know I will not leave, That I will wait for him, he'll see. . .

. . . Good night sweet child, Good night MY child. . .

. . . Hmm I feel cold, and yet I feel warm, This world I know is long gone. . .

. . . Her bodies limp, has she gone? Left this world and gone far beyond?. . .

. . . I see his face, tears streem down, Does he know I connot leave?. . .

Ok there we go I just HAD TO WRITE IT! It was my second most sucssessful Fic and well just HAD TO!!!
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