Experimental Story
Intro: Hello followers of JerimiaSmith on ! This is just an experimental beginning to a story that is based off of the Harry Potter books. I got the idea from seeing a comic that someone made on . If you like the idea, comment and tell me if I should make a story of it!
A short figure crossed the marble floors of a darkened corridor. Bodies of dead people who fought back lie strewn on the ground. The figure slowly made his way into a hallway that was lit up by a bright green light. He entered the room where the light was coming from and slowly watched the battle that took place.
Slowly, the cores began to clash, a stream of red against a stream of green. But the red was slowly disappearing. Soon, the green had almost reached the wand of the user who cast the red spell. When did, the wand exploded, sending both wizards to opposite sides of the classroom. The one with a wand still stood up slowly, as if he wanted to savor the moment.
"The time has come, my old friend, to see those which you have lost." the standing wizard said. "Enjoy seeing your family again. Avada Kedavra!" he screamed loudly. Instantly, a bright green flash erupted from his wand tip. The other wizard fell limp, greenish electricity sparked through his body.
"Hmmm..." the other wizard said. "The deed has been carried out I presume?"
"Yes, my lord." the other wizard said. "Hogwarts has been completely, what shall I say, dismantled? Everyone in Hogwarts is dead, though young mister Potter put up a very nasty fight."
"Not to worry. The Potter boy had nothing to live for anyway." The other wizard walked toward the boy that had just died. He turned his body over, closed his eyes, and left the room with the other wizard. "You have done well, Tom." The wizard stated.
"Thank you, my lord." Tom said. "I believe that I am the ruler of the wizarding world now?" he asked.
"No. You have one more wizard that stands in your way. Kill him and you will be the Lord of all wizards. Even stronger is your hunger, no, your thirst for power than your father's." he said proudly as he walked up to the edge of the balcony.
"Who, who stands in my way my lord?" Tom asked.
"Another young wizard that you should be able to defeat easily, though the challenge is finding him. His mother hid him very well; even my sight cannot see him."
"What is his name, my lord?" Tom asked.
"His name is James Remus Potter, and he is the one standing in the way of you and your ultimate glory. Kill him, and you will rise above all others. Kill him, and you may bring the name Voldemort back from its shame." As he said this, he swept his hand across the night sky to show his apprentice that he will never surpass him in magical power. Using only his hand, he conjured the Dark Mark over Hogwarts.
Well, I hope you enjoyed it. Tell me if it was good in the comments! Remember, this is for you to decide if I write the story or not. If you tell me to, this will probably be the ending of the first story. Thanks for reading it!