A long heart piercing beep of death rang out across the hospital.

Bleeding knees fell to the cold lifeless floor and a sad whispered called out

"Take the very breath you gave me..."

tears build up under the eyes

" take the heart from my chest..."

the tears ran down the pale scratched cheeks

"I'll gladly take their place if you'll let me."

One tear falls

"make this my last request."

the tear hits the ground sounding like shattering glass

"but please...don't take my world."


A/N OK now stop bugging me about posting my 2nd sequel up. This is all i will be able to put up until I'm able to finish my other two fan fics. if you want to post you idea of what you think will happen. feel free but it will be months before i start on this story so please people just comment for the time being and wonder.

the idea for the beginning came from the song "Don't Take the Girl" by Tim McGraw