Hello!

Well, I'm a mexican reader-writer. For my english class I need make a storie. I just know the basic of english , I use the dictionary and my books for do this. I base in the song "Just a Dream" by Carrie Underwood. I wanna know what do you think about my english and the storie, for edith and give the work at my teacher ;)

This is my first storie in english. Please, don't be bad and read. Give it a oportunity :D

Just a Dream

Some days she wants don't remember.

Some days I wish at the Gods know how can I help her?

Some days she crying in the forest, thinking never hears in the town.

And, all the days, in the twilight, she walks in the beach.

In the same beach.

In that beach, she saw him, before he must to go.

Standing, rocks and sand under her. She don't see the tide. Or the wide, all the wonder happening in front her.

She's break.

When world crashing down, like you lose everything you love it it's normal you hearth break and a pool soul.

Time is running. Be days more dark that another. Today is absolutely black.

"You need follow"

Saying the older persons.

"You must keep moving forward!"

She closed her eyes, and answers:

"This is just a dream"

Then, open the eyes. See the embers flying in the sky. See the destroy house. The ruins decayed for the fire. She saw the sky, without beauty, feel the sadness in the air.

Destruction.

Walk in the desolate street, fear and cold in her hearth. Burnt wood, ash, black metal; stacking in the back. The forest green and big in the past now is little and death. Mountains covered of ice and snow.

Death.

Death anyway!

"This is just a dream"

Repeated.

But she don't let anybody help her.

Close her eyes. See a pair of green eyes, shinning, sparkling, with a million of new ideas waiting for come true. See a boy thin, high always with a friendly smile and sincere.

Hear kids laughter, persons talking, dragons flaying, man building, women walk. Hear life.

Their eyes fill with tears.

"This is just a dream"

But she can't believe that. Not now.

The boy is in the beach, holding her hand, talking about trivial things. She smile, happy just for be with he. Feel her hand. See their eyes. Kiss the boy.

Hear the battle cry.

Pain.

Intense and suffocating pain.

Darkness around her. Persons running, screaming, crying, begging for mercy. Children called their parents. Roaring and fighting dragons.

And the sound.

The sweet and distinct voice.

"I love you Astrid"

Confuse. Pain. Loneliness.

Lost.

"This is just a dream" moaned.

But when she open her eyes and see Berk in ruins, can't resist.

She crashing down.

She saw the pale body, without life. The green eyes close, brown hair tangled and dirty. Lying on the floor, above it rocks. Dead dragon in the trees; dead persons in everywhere. Blood, ruins, destruction.

Astrid scream.

She look the sky with shinning stars.

"Why'd you leave me?" sobbed "I can even breathe…. This can't be happening"

Take a little piece of cloth. It was white, now is gray. Say in their memories at her dad, her mom, her brothers, her friends, her town, her dragon, her life…

Her husband.

"This is just a dream" repeated "Is just a dream…"

But isn't.

Yeah, is short. Can you send me a review? Tell me everything for better.

I hope you enjoyed! :)