Well it's been since I wrote a story. Been in a writer's block for almost a
year. It was very irritating. So this is a attempt to get out of this.
I also want to thank my beta reader crazy rei luva ^^
Disclaimer: do you really think a poor girl like me owned a popular show like beyblade. Get real. If I did there would be more yaoi in the show.
Warning: Yaoi. I can't write a story without it. And there are two oc in it. But they will not be paired to anyone
So we're done with that I think. Ok let's get on with the story ^^
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HEAVEN OR HELL
Prologue
A long time ago, when the earth wasn't as beautiful as it is now, there where four mighty spirits. Each of them representing an element. Of course they were not alone.
There were many other spirits surrounding them, living peacefully together. Until there came a devil-shaped spirit wanting the power of the four spirits for his own. Of course the four didn't let him.
The dragon, also known as the reckless one, was the first to accept the challenge. Underestimating the devils power the dragon lost. Seeing the dragon fall, the protective turtle attacked. Neither he was a match against the power of the other one.
Having to see how his friends were defeated the tiger also wanted to attack, but was stopped by the phoenix. The mighty bird didn't want the same thing that happened to the dragon and turtle to happen with his lover.
Instead of attacking alone, they became one. Their power increased by the power of their love. This way they were strong enough to defeat the evil spirit.
Before disappearing the devil swore that he would come back to take revenge on the two lovers. With a flash the devil was gone. The dragon and turtle recovered and they where living peacefully again.
There was no trace of the devil left and after a while they believed he would never come back. And he didn't. But you never know. Maybe one of these days the devil will return to take his revenge.
~*~
The six kids stared at the old lady.
"What a stupid story," the oldest boy said. "It would've been better without that stupid love thing."
"Love is very important in life," the old lady said. "But perhaps you're just too young to understand, Lee"
The seven-year-old Lee glared at the older woman. He didn't like it when people called him young.
"I thought it was beautiful. I wish that I will find such a man who loves me so dearly." The pink-haired girl sighed.
"Can love really become that powerful, grandma?" the other girl asked.
"Sometimes it can."
"Mother, what are you doing?!" another woman come walking into the room. "You aren't telling the kids another one of your silly stories?"
"My stories aren't silly. They're real legends."
"Of course, mother. Come kids, go play outside or something like that. The weather is beautiful."
The six kids stood up and walked out of the house. They where heading towards their favorite hanging place. The big old oak tree.
"What do you think of the story, Rei?" the brunette asked the raven-haired boy.
"Just a silly story, Robyn." Rei answered. It was nothing new. Almost every day Robyn's grandmother would tell them a story. Most of them were very silly. But what could an old lady who lived with her daughter and granddaughter do otherwise?
"My grandmother's stories aren't silly." Robyn muttered while she turned to Mariah pretending to listen at her babbling about her opinion of true love. Not that she knew much about it, being only six years old.
Shaking his head Rei went with Lee, Kevin and Gary to throw some rocks at the lake. Leaving the girls to talk.
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So what do you think?
Is it horrible?
Should I stop or continue?
If you told me it would be great. ^^
Onca
I also want to thank my beta reader crazy rei luva ^^
Disclaimer: do you really think a poor girl like me owned a popular show like beyblade. Get real. If I did there would be more yaoi in the show.
Warning: Yaoi. I can't write a story without it. And there are two oc in it. But they will not be paired to anyone
So we're done with that I think. Ok let's get on with the story ^^
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^
HEAVEN OR HELL
Prologue
A long time ago, when the earth wasn't as beautiful as it is now, there where four mighty spirits. Each of them representing an element. Of course they were not alone.
There were many other spirits surrounding them, living peacefully together. Until there came a devil-shaped spirit wanting the power of the four spirits for his own. Of course the four didn't let him.
The dragon, also known as the reckless one, was the first to accept the challenge. Underestimating the devils power the dragon lost. Seeing the dragon fall, the protective turtle attacked. Neither he was a match against the power of the other one.
Having to see how his friends were defeated the tiger also wanted to attack, but was stopped by the phoenix. The mighty bird didn't want the same thing that happened to the dragon and turtle to happen with his lover.
Instead of attacking alone, they became one. Their power increased by the power of their love. This way they were strong enough to defeat the evil spirit.
Before disappearing the devil swore that he would come back to take revenge on the two lovers. With a flash the devil was gone. The dragon and turtle recovered and they where living peacefully again.
There was no trace of the devil left and after a while they believed he would never come back. And he didn't. But you never know. Maybe one of these days the devil will return to take his revenge.
~*~
The six kids stared at the old lady.
"What a stupid story," the oldest boy said. "It would've been better without that stupid love thing."
"Love is very important in life," the old lady said. "But perhaps you're just too young to understand, Lee"
The seven-year-old Lee glared at the older woman. He didn't like it when people called him young.
"I thought it was beautiful. I wish that I will find such a man who loves me so dearly." The pink-haired girl sighed.
"Can love really become that powerful, grandma?" the other girl asked.
"Sometimes it can."
"Mother, what are you doing?!" another woman come walking into the room. "You aren't telling the kids another one of your silly stories?"
"My stories aren't silly. They're real legends."
"Of course, mother. Come kids, go play outside or something like that. The weather is beautiful."
The six kids stood up and walked out of the house. They where heading towards their favorite hanging place. The big old oak tree.
"What do you think of the story, Rei?" the brunette asked the raven-haired boy.
"Just a silly story, Robyn." Rei answered. It was nothing new. Almost every day Robyn's grandmother would tell them a story. Most of them were very silly. But what could an old lady who lived with her daughter and granddaughter do otherwise?
"My grandmother's stories aren't silly." Robyn muttered while she turned to Mariah pretending to listen at her babbling about her opinion of true love. Not that she knew much about it, being only six years old.
Shaking his head Rei went with Lee, Kevin and Gary to throw some rocks at the lake. Leaving the girls to talk.
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So what do you think?
Is it horrible?
Should I stop or continue?
If you told me it would be great. ^^
Onca