The Final Destination: Dead Ahead

by Elven Dwarf

Telle saw the train they are in crashed in the ocean. She managed to save her friends and some people. But the vision didn't happen as expected. Are they safe from the sickle of Death? Or is this their starting point to their Final Destination?

1. The Final Destination: Dead Ahead

The Final Destination: Dead Ahead

What if the future wasn't that bright for you?

Cristelle and her friends are about to board a ship en route to Kiwi Island, a newly constructed theme park in the middle of the Pacific Ocean, when she saw a horrific vision of the ship exploding and sinking halfway to the island. She managed to stop her friends and some other people from boarding the doomed ship, but her premonition didn't come true as expected. Does this mean that the future she saw wasn't really the future meant for them? Are they safe from the sickle of Death? Or is this their starting point to their Final Destination?

Characters:

Cristelle Halfway – She was the one who had the vision of the ship exploding. She left the ship together with her friends.

Paula Jester – She is the best friend of Cristelle and the twin sister of Patricia and the girlfriend of Charles. She left the ship with Cristelle and her friends.

Patricia "Pat" Jester – She is a friend of Cristelle and the twin sister of Paula. It was her death that caused the rift between the best friends. She left with her friends.

Charles Arin Dassler – He is the boyfriend of Paula. He left the ship because Paula did.

Dehniel Saw – Cristelle's long term boyfriend. They were together since high school. He left the ship because Telle did.

Mary Antoinette Thompson – She is the daughter of one of the owners of Kiwi Island. When she saw a group of people left the ship, she remembered that she left her handbag at the hotel. She and Aris went back to the hotel and was just going to take the next trip.

Aris Baker – He is a friend of Mary. He left the ship because Mary did.

Nina Marie Preston – She did not board the ship because her ticket fell to the ocean.

Joshua Hudson – He is a little skeptic about Cristelle but was just too superstitious, thinking that it was a sign, he left the ship and just waited for the next trip.

Jaime Andersen – He is alcoholic and is over-emotional and self-centered, man. He came late and was not able to make it when Mary let the ship to go without them.

Finished the first Chapter 10-03-09

Edited Chapter 1 10-03-09

Working on Chapter 2

Finished Chapter 2 10-06-09...

Chapter 2 Revised 02-21-10

Continued Chapter 2 Revision 06-23-10

Finished Chapter 2 Revision 06-23-10

Edited Chapter 1 06-23-10

Started Chapter 3 06-23-10