City of the Fallen (revised)

Author's Note

So, here's the deal. I was taking a look at my fiction, trying to figure out which one I should pick up first, and this is the one that popped out at me. Read the entire thing and I have to say, I completely hate it. I was going to scrap it but then I thought, why not finish what I started, one fic at a time. So, what I will be doing is this. I am going to take down all chapters to City of the Fallen. I am going to rework them and rewrite the story thus far, and take it from there. I plan on posting all updated chapters by this coming Monday.

Wish me good luck.