Shared Pain

by rose1112

Beatrice aka Tris has left abnegation and went to dauntless. She has a big secret not just that she's divergent. She hates abnegation now. What happens when a war breaks out on abnegation and she's the only one who can stop it? Will she be loyal to abnegation? Or will it be faction before blood? Who will win? Who will lose? It's all up to Beatrice. Edited by Dauntless-Princess3392

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Shared pain Chapter 1 edited by Dauntless-Princess3392

Tris's pov

Two years ago our leader Marcus Eaton's son left abnegation to go to dauntless, our leader was left alone since his wife Evelyn "died" ten years ago leaving him with just his son. When his son left he was seen as a traitor to our faction. They don't know why he left but the Erudite believe it was because Marcus abused him until he was 16 years old.

So on the day of his Choosing Ceremony he left to escape his father's abuse. His name was Tobias Eaton. Nobody knows the real story except Tobias and I. We weren't friends, best friends, and we were never in a relationship if that's what you were wondering. I've never even seen him in person, but I do know the reason he left Abnegation was because of his father Marcus and a faction that supposedly believed in helping others when in reality they never helped him.

Tobias's story is the reason why I'm on the train headed to dauntless I had to escape. I couldn't be in a faction I hated with all my heart. Don't get me wrong I use to love abnegation and it's lifestyle as a child, but as I grew older I saw it for what it really was. A corrupt faction like all the others, and it's all because of one man and his name is Marcus Eaton.

"They're jumping!" Someone says. I look out the car door and watch as members of dauntless jump onto the rooftop of an oncoming building. I look at my friend Christina and nod. I stand up getting ready to jump but Christina grabs my hand I turn and look at her questionably.

" I can't to this unless someone drags me ." I nod and give a reassuring smile we walk toward the car door and I face her.

"On the count of three" I say. She nods and we both get ready to jump off.

"THREE" I scream and jump out of the car door with her. I curl into a ball and roll onto the roof of the building and jump up. I look over and see Christina. She looks at me and I say "Woo we made it out alive!" She laughs at my jock and gets up.

"Yeah we did" she says

Ok I want to give dauntless-princess3392 a shout out because she is helping me with my book.