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"Talking normally"
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Game system
Jack Mason POV
"Ohhh, my head what how much did I …. Wait, this isn't my room! What's" *ping* "What the hell!? That sounded like a video game ping". I said
Would you like to become 'the Gamer'?
(Yes\no)
I hit yes. *ping*
Welcome new player to the game in this you are the main character in this RPG and strategy game now select the universe of your choice.
Star Wars The clone wars
Halo
RWBY
Fable 3
Fallout
Mass effect
"Okay, Only one huh. Eh screw it, I guess Star Wars." I say selecting Star Wars *PING* "Well what's next hope I can get a good perk." I said.
Now before we send you on your way. Pick 3 of these special starter packs.
Halo covenant war pack (1)
Star Wars forger pack (2)
Nanoengineer pack (3)
UNSC rising PACK (4)
Star Wars old republic pack (5)
(also more can be bought in the store or earned in missions or achievements)
"Okay, good to know. I won't have to start from scratch at least, that's good." I said to no one in particular.
Chose 3:
covenant war pack
Star Wars forger pack
UNSC rising pack
Contents of packs
Covenant war pack
200x CSO-class supercarriers full crew, 10,000x CAS-class assault carriers, full crew 5400x CCS-class battlecruisers full crew, 6000x Sinaris-pattern heavy destroyer full crew 1390x stealth ships full crew, 2000x CPV-class heavy destroyer,3000x RCS-class armored cruisers,1,500 CRS-class light cruiser, 600xCCS-class battlecruisers,500xORS-class heavy cruisers full crew High Charity Full crew, Unyielding Hierophant full crew, 10x colony star systems
Star Wars forger pack
1x Star forge 1x HK- 47 1x HK-51, 100,000x sith war droid M1, 200x GXR-7 Command Droid, 40,000x Battle Droid C-11, 50,000 Battle Droid C-13, 10,000x Harrower class Dreadnought full crew,2000x Interdictor class cruiser
UNSC RISING PACK
200x Infinity class supercarrier, 250x Punic class supercarriers, 2000x marathon class heavy cruiser, 2000x valiant class super-heavy cruiser, 3000x Halberd class Destroyer,3000x Charon light class frigate, 3200x Paris class heavy frigate, 2000x Sahara class heavy prowler, 10,000x phoenix class colony ships, 2,000 Poseidon-class light carrier, 2,000 Orion-class assault carriers, 10 colony systems
"Okay, this is going to be majorly overpowered. What if this an RPG? If so then where is the character menu?" I asked with interest.
Would you like to see your character?
I immediately press yes after that a state screen appeared. What I found was fine nothing too great or terrible. [Well it could be worse.] Were my summary thoughts on it.
Title: None
Class: The Gamer
Race: Human
Level: 1
EXP:0/100
HP:100 RG 10% per minute
FP:100 RG 10% per minute
STR:5 (brute force. The higher your strength the higher your physical damage will be, in attacks movement speed or defense.)
VIT: 5 ( the health and one's life energy and physical endurance, Increase HP Capacity and regeneration also increases resistance to disease and poisons and stamina.)
AGI: 5 (your reflexes, speed, agility, coordination and accuracy. base critical rate, dodge rate, speed and accuracy and spotting enemy weak points)
INT: 10( the ability to store and process information, increases force control and efficiency, high intelligence reduces mana cost and increases the skill points you get after leveling up.)
WIS:10(your sensibility, willpower, perceptiveness and the ability to make information useful and retain it)
CHR:6(how people think of you, inspire allies, persuaded people, social standing)
LUC:7 (how lucky you are. This stat randomly affects the antics you get in and Increases drop rate of higher quality of critical hits.
POINTS: (0)
"Well without the bonus from the Title I would have really been screwed. Okay, next would be the tutorial I guess." I assumed.
*PING* new perks can now be selected pick 1
*Hidden past*- as the adopted son if the late emperor you were found by ken mason in a space pod the only thing he found is that your real name is Jack Raynor he was unable to find where you came from.
*Bastard*- son of an unknown man and woman he found you on a planet left to die
[The fuck's with this game? Trying to make my life some shitty TV drama? Fuck this I'll go with the least edgy shit.] I chose to settle for hidden past.
*ping*
Welcome to the Tutorial
Complete the Tutorial Reward
5000 EXP
1M money
Accept mission
Yes/no
I hit the yes button and the blackness around me took shape into a standard clone trooper with a blaster pointing it at me and fired I doge by barrel rolling left. [Great no weapon and I'm going to die in the dam tutor… what I pulled up the menu and looked I have 500 force points ok that means if I focus I may be able to beat the clone with a force attack. Let's see what level the clone trooper is].
*Ping* New skill Identify
[Ok let's see what it does] I look at the clone and activate the skill.
(Identity.)
Lv1 Clone trooper
Hp 100
Fp 0/0
I hold out my hand and with all my might in an attempt to push the trooper back.
Skill unlocked: force push 10 dp masterly 1% FP cost 5
Lv1 Clone trooper
HP 90
FP 0/0
"what the fuck really?! 10 DP?" *PEW* "AHHH! SHIT THAT HURT!" I screamed holding my arm.
Jack Mason
Class: The Gamer
HP 490
FP495
"Alright, you fucker! Eat this shit head!" I throw my hand out.
Clone trooper
CRITICAL HIT 15 Dp
HP 75
Skill rank up force push
Skill obtained force choke
"Well hope the Jedi don't see me doing that… I'll be labeled sith on the spot. Well, shit head here comes the game changer hope you like it!" I yelled holding out my hand and began closing it.
Force choke Dp 20
Clone trooper
HP 55
"That's it bucket head! GRAAAAAAAAAAAA!" I force pushed the clone for 15 dp then followed with a force choke 20 dp to the clone trooper. [Okay he has 20 HP left, I'm going to try force lighting!] I start focusing then start hearing a crackling noise I looked at my hands a see lighting start to arc between my fingers. I let out a scream releasing the bolt of energy at the trooper striking him full on in the chest striking 30 dp. [Okay that was fun. But what kind of sick bastard makes a video game where you don't have a weapon in the tutorial?]
Skill obtained Force Lighting 1/15
Ping
Level Upx 10
Level: 10
EXP:0/5000
HP:400 RG 10% per minute
FP:870 RG 10% per minute
STR:5 (brute force. The higher your strength the higher your physical damage will be, in attacks movement speed or defense.)
VIT: 5 ( the health and one's life energy and physical endurance, Increase HP Capacity and regeneration also increases resistance to disease and poisons and stamina.)
AGI: 5 (your reflexes, speed, agility, coordination and accuracy. base critical rate, dodge rate, speed and accuracy and spotting enemy weak points)
INT: 10( the ability to store and process information, increases force control and efficiency, high intelligence reduces mana cost and increases the skill points you get after leveling up.)
WIS:10(your sensibility, willpower, perceptiveness and the ability to make information useful and retain it)
CHR:6(how people think of you, inspire allies, persuaded people, social standing)
LUC:7 (how lucky you are. This stat randomly affects the antics you get in and Increases drop rate of higher quality of critical hits.
Skill points 30
Force push Mastery Level
Force choke masterly Level 1 (2%)
(Identify)
[ Ok I'll add 7 to VIT, 3 to AGI, 5 to CHR and 10 to LUC]
*Ping*
Level: 10
EXP:0/5000
HP:500 RG 10% per minute
FP:870 RG 10% per minute
STR:12 (brute force. The higher your strength the higher your physical damage will be, in attacks movement speed or defense.)
VIT: 8 ( the health and one's life energy and physical endurance, Increase HP Capacity and regeneration also increases resistance to disease and poisons and stamina.)
AGI: 8 (your reflexes, speed, agility, coordination and accuracy. base critical rate, dodge rate, speed and accuracy and spotting enemy weak points)
INT: 10( the ability to store and process information, increases mana control and efficiency, high intelligence reduces mana cost and increases the skill points you get after leveling up.)
WIS:10(your sensibility, willpower, perceptiveness and the ability to make information useful and retain it)
CHR:11 (how people think of you, inspire allies, persuaded people, social standing)
LUC:17 (how lucky you are. This stat randomly affects the antics you get in and Increases drop rate of higher quality of critical hits.
Skill points 5
Force push Mastery Level
Force choke masterly Level 1 (2%)
(Identify)
Congratulations on completing the tutorial please collect you're rewarded a proceed to the game.
"Well I did just start, it's to be expected that I don't have much of anything. At least I have the 1 Mil a lot better than starting out dirt poor." Lets see what else there is for me to do or start the game.
Select [Start] to begin
"Well let's hope this doesn't hurt… well no more than life usually dose at least." I press the start button then darkness rushes over me.
*PING*
You've slept in a bed. Full health restored. All negative effects removed.
"That was one weird dream. I mean like that would ever hap..." Before I could finish that thought a dam of memories seemed to break flooding my mind with thoughts and memories. I could barely sift threw them all before a Sangheili wearing councilor armor walked through the door. Quickly activating identify and to say I was shocked by what I found would be an understatement.
Vota 'Makam level 150
Age: 45 Human years
Title: 'The Right Hand of The Emperor'
Hp: 2,250,000
SP: 2,100,000
Vota 'Makam is the leader of Makam keep he became the right hand after Vota single-handedly fought off unidentified slavers from the outer rim. He managed to kill them to a man. Leaving none to return to inform their fellow slavers of there new enemy. He is a veteran tactician and master of the blade. He has a personal relationship with you as your godfather.
"Jack, I am impressed to see you up and about after your coronation celebration, you had far too much I even had to carry you back to your room". Vota told me between chortling laughs.
"Uggh, I shouldn't have had that much to drink. Moreover you should have stopped me before I made an ass of myself." I said ever the smart-ass.
"No, it was a learning experience for you. If anyone made a mistake it was you for drinking a whole bottle of Sangheili ale, single handedly at that." Vota said with a with a chuckle
"You're an asshole you know that right well let's go somewhere that does not smell like a drunk's house". I told him as got up off the car
"Come then your war council would like a word with you". Vota said
"Why they find out where the slavers you killed where they came from yet or another matter entirely". I asked as I walked out the door.
"Yes, a planet called Tatooine from the data we have gathered, it's a lawless plant ruled by gangsters and slavers it's being keep quiet for now but once the public finds out well you know how that will go". Vota said with a very noticeable growl
"So then what the plan we just can't do nothing that just as bad as doing it if not more so". I said [It's just, one of the things I never liked is how the Hutts never got what was coming to them. But it's a good thing I'm here now.]
"True my child,however this is something better brought up with the council. it will take us to the council chambers. Now come along there is work to be done." Vota said as we boarded the elevator soon gracefully making way down to the council chambers.
As I looked out the elevator I could see the beauty of high charity. Instead of dark and gloomy it looked peaceful and calm. From the elevator I see humans, san'shyuum, jiralhanae, kig-yar, unggoy, mgalekgolo, huragok, Sangheili, and yanme'e working hand in hand.
It's so odd seeing them not trying to brutally murder each other. I marvel at the sight of phantoms, pelicans, and other aircraft flying around. I was startled from my thoughts as the elevator slowed to a stop.
"Hmm, godfather how is the star forge working. Is it operating at a hundred present yet? We're definitely going to need ships and weapons if we're going to war". I said with interest
"The forge is operating at twice the projected efficiency. It is currently tasked with constructing orbital defence platforms so far there two thousand completed were moving them to defended colony worlds and key systems." Vota said.
"That's good let's just get to the war chambers, Why couldn't I just stay in bed?" I said with a sigh.
As we walked through the hallway I had a feeling that things are about to get complicated
"Here we are Jack. These are the doors to the counsel chambers. Be ready they are all old and wise speak with power and authority or else they will walk all over you." Vota told me
"Okay… got it, fight or get eaten alive." I said with grim determination.
As we walked through the doors we saw nine counselors one human, elite, brute, hunter, san'shyuum, jackal, grunt, and drone queen. Who were all looking at me.
"…. What too much want a pic it will last longer or we can get down to why we're here". I said to them
"Hmmm, not afraid of us boy good my name is Rotus of the Jiralhanae". He said
"My name is Lungor of the Unggoy". Spoke the diminutive alien with all the courage he could muster.
"My name is Maxwell, my lord." The human representative said with a polite nod.
"My name is Lama To'ma of the Sangheili". She said with a respectful bow of her head.
"You may call me Swift Skies of the Yanme'e." the queen of the Yanme'e said
"I am known as The Prophet of War." Stated the elder San'Shyuum spoke in an aged voice
"You may call me Tan of the Kig-Yar". The twitchy creature said
"My name is bofa bako of the Mgalekgolo". He told me
"Let's get to why we're here." I said while sitting in my chair.
"We believe the we should not go after the slavers yet. We should try to contact the governments of the galaxy before making any major choices". Spoke counselor Tan
"Then it could drag us into their a civil war, From what the scout ships have managed to find out we need to approach this with great care". Said Maxwell
"My lord you need to make a choice, either to hide or make our presence felt. If I am honest my lord, I must demand we cast hiding to the wayside and make war on these slaver fools!" Rotus stated with barely controlled rage.
Welcome to the campaign menu
Here is where you can see the territory you control. Your troop numbers, upgrades, fleets, and main, side, loyalty, and troop missions will be displayed here. These combine to show how powerful you are. The more power you have increase the odds of success in a battle or other actions. Things to be aware of some missions and troops cost power to complete/produce so remember to choose wisely.
"You are correct Rotus. However we must be prepared to jump into the fray without a plan could only end in disaster. Also we must not forget the importance of home defence so for now we continue with the production of orbital defence platforms until we have a sufficiently firm footing to launch strikes against these slavers. In the meantime I'm moving us to a war footing, I want a well trained and prepared force for when we make our move." I said knowing the importance of both defence and a show of strength and unity after an attack.
"We shall begin immediately my lord. But if I might inquire what will you be doing?" I was asked.
"I'm preparing to undergo the Spartan augmentation procedure, as I intend to leed our forces from the front." I spoke with authority casting my eyes across the council making sure it is known that there will be no questioning of my choice.
"An agreeable decision my lord. There is honor in leading by example." Lama said
"Then if there are no further issues I will call the gathering of this council to a close, I wish the best for you all in your individual duties." I said bringing a close to the meeting.
Timeskip augmentation procedure room
Strapped to an operating table going through the pretreatments for the Spartan II Augmentation process. To say that they were unpleasant would be an understatement.
"We are ready to begin." The doctor said as she affixed a mask in place to administer sedatives pausing to give me a final chance to go through with a less dangerous process."Are absolutely sure you wish to undergo the II's process?". She asked asked sensing my trepidation at the whole ordeal.
"Yes, I'm sure. Begin the process". I said with my last thoughts being worries at the dangers of the surgeries.
Timeskip 3 months later
The recovery period after the many surgeries was probably one of the most painful experiences of my life. But the benefits far outweigh the inconveniences. My rewards for the whole ordeal were 15 to all my stats with enhanced strength, speed, vision, reflexes, stamina,and hearing. In addition i received the Spartan time skill. The training I had to go through training to get used to my new strength was a bitch and a half. But it was all worth it. I was trained in weapons like the MA5D assault rifle, BR85HB battle rifle, M45 shotgun, SRS99D-S2 AM sniper rifle, Type-25 plasma rifle, Type-57 carbine, Type-27 beam rifle, Type-54 plasma pistol, and Type-1 Energy Sword and I got the Assault Rifle mastery, Shotgun mastery, Pistol mastery, Sniper Rifle mastery, Heavy Pistol mastery, Submachine Gun mastery, Heavy Weapon mastery, and Sword Mastery perks. For armor I had a custom suit of ACHILLES pattern GEN2 MJOLNIR and inplace of the usual aggressive AI I had Church from Red vs Blue {AN: I may do more but only as AI's} same personality and every bit the smartass. My loadout is a BR85 battle rifle,Type-55 storm rifle,M6C/SOCOM,Type-1 energy sword.
Choosing to go with a more indirect approach I decided to take one ship into the galaxy at large under the guise of a newly founded mercenary company. I had a Marathon-class heavy cruiser custom made fo the situation. Unlike its canon counterpart it would have energy shields and among the other various upgrades it has a spartan bay with a full complement of Spartans. With the addition of two hangar bays with a large and varied support complement. Looking at it now I couldn't help but be proud.
(Customized) Marathon-class heavy cruiser
information
Class:Cruiser
Role: Command and control with full combat capabilities
Technical specifications:
Length:1,792 meters
Width:493 meters
Height:475 meters
Armament:
Two Magnetic Accelerator Cannons
1,800 Archer missiles
Point-defense guns
Five fusion rockets
Hull:8000
Shielding:7000
Armor: 5000
MAC Damage:6500
MAC Cooldown: 35 seconds
Archer Missile Damage:550
Archer Missile Cooldown:25 seconds
Complement:
Crew: 2000 sailors
2600:ground forces
2: teams of spartans
40: M12 Light Reconnaissance Vehicles
12:M808B Main Battle Tanks
8:Type-27 "Mantis
2:Colossus
25:D77-TC Pelican Dropships
32:Hornets
2:Condor Gunships
I named her The Fort. My arrival in the galaxy put me at the beginning of the animated film. The battle for Christophsis was underway. I chose to intercede for the sake of gaining the trust of Skywalker and this could be the first step to that end. I should arrive around the same time as Yoda. I've decided to lead the spartans as the only forces to aid the republic we'll not be joining for long. We're only entering combat to open a dialogue with the republic. The less we show now the more we maintain the element of surprise for when the entire empire gets involved. I was in my mjolnir armor ready for departure when my godfather approached me with some parting concerns
"Are you sure about this Jack? You could bring a Infinity or a CSO class supercarrier, with much larger troop contingents" My godfather asked with obvious concern for my safety.
"My chosen vessel will work for now old man. I have to get going for now. I'll contact you when it's done okay?" I respond trying to alleviate his worries as best I can.
"Very well, but I'll be watching." Vota said gruffly with begrudging acceptance.
As my pelican took off I could only look back at my godfather and be thankful for the family I have this time around.
Timeskip Bridge of The Fort
"Sir, all hands accounted for. We are ready to enter slipspace at your order." The helmsman informed he as I entered the bridge
"Very good, begin the jump helmsman." At my command as slipspace window was opened and my new war ship quickly began its journey to Christophsis.
End chapter one
Here's the rewrite I hope it's better than the first one I went back and change a lot of things.