Hey everbody! Well this is my first try under my own name. So if its dorky and other stuff please tell me so i can fix it!
Also I don't have a Beta and if anybody want to help i'd be rather gratefull.
Title. Bloody Static
Author. Ferality Red
Rating. PG just for the words blood and such
Warning. if your a yaoist then you probably see a little shounon ai... but to every body else you
probably won't notice a thing.^-^
Static or close to what I knew static to be
red-life blood
their only adjective
slashed across the screen of my mind
they had always been there
but now it wasn't just a scrambled mess
it had focused over the years
the violence sharpaning them into eyes
Like red-life blood
scarlet eyes
with a flick of a closed eyelids I sees them
they had always been there
why don't they leave me be, alone
no, I have always been alone
except for him
sky
the color of freedom
blue eyes
Will he give me freedom?
He used to screen away the red
but now he wasn't here
to cut away that shaped static glare
the mirrior the mirrior
bloody bloody mirrior
Where is the blue?
my reflected eyes (green)
its reflected eyes (red)
my voice
its voice
our voice
"its almost time love"
our bloody reflection
Well there you go. Rampete cap. and puct. problems...... if I get good feed back I might do a actual story to go with
this. Tell me if you would want this to have in it...and what couples if its going to have romance in it. Ow yes and a
cookie to any body can figure out who is who in this poem!
Also I don't have a Beta and if anybody want to help i'd be rather gratefull.
Title. Bloody Static
Author. Ferality Red
Rating. PG just for the words blood and such
Warning. if your a yaoist then you probably see a little shounon ai... but to every body else you
probably won't notice a thing.^-^
Static or close to what I knew static to be
red-life blood
their only adjective
slashed across the screen of my mind
they had always been there
but now it wasn't just a scrambled mess
it had focused over the years
the violence sharpaning them into eyes
Like red-life blood
scarlet eyes
with a flick of a closed eyelids I sees them
they had always been there
why don't they leave me be, alone
no, I have always been alone
except for him
sky
the color of freedom
blue eyes
Will he give me freedom?
He used to screen away the red
but now he wasn't here
to cut away that shaped static glare
the mirrior the mirrior
bloody bloody mirrior
Where is the blue?
my reflected eyes (green)
its reflected eyes (red)
my voice
its voice
our voice
"its almost time love"
our bloody reflection
Well there you go. Rampete cap. and puct. problems...... if I get good feed back I might do a actual story to go with
this. Tell me if you would want this to have in it...and what couples if its going to have romance in it. Ow yes and a
cookie to any body can figure out who is who in this poem!
