Angelic Layer comes to Malaysia by Minako88

Narrator's Say:

Hi, this is my first anime fanfiction (I always wrote game fanfictions). I pretty love Angelic Layer and I hope I got one. Okay, here's the chapter 1.

Battle 1: Lucky to get One

"C' mon, Hikaru! Speed up and kick Rin's butt!" a fifteen years old girl yelled when she watched Angelic Layer Tournament through the television in her home. On the TV screen, there were two dolls/Angels that looked like little people fighting each other on a flat layer. On the East Corner was a well-known Hikaru. She was a smaller angel, wearing a red and white jumpsuit which was much shorter and covered her shoulder and thighs, a pair of arm-length red gloves, the red boots that also covered her thighs and a red hairband with angel cords on her red head. Although she was small but her speed was extremely fast and agile. On the West Corner, Rin was her opponent. She was a fair, tall angel. She wore a sexy, white cheongsam, white laced fingerless gloves, white boots that were connected to her thigh-length laced stockings and two bells which were tied on her long, blonde hair as her cord.

Just like the girl said, Hikaru dashed at Rin, gave a strong upper kick at her chin and caused her opponent flew up and fell to the ground with badly damaged. After that, Rin's HP meter changed from 59 to 0. That meant Hikaru won in this tournament.

"HIKARU WINS!" the announcer announced. Then, a brown haired girl who was Hikaru's deus removed her headset, waving at her supporters. She also shook her hand at her opponent. It seemed it looked like a friendship match for her.

"Yeah, I know Misaki and Hikaru can win! I know it! I know it!" the girl (who watched the tournament through TV) shouted happily.

"Cathleen, I know you're her supporter but can you just calm down and watch the television quietly?" the woman's voice came from the kitchen.

"Sorry, Auntie Teh." a girl who was named Cathleen apologized.

After that, a young woman came out from the kitchen and pinched her niece's left cheek.

"Call me Sister Huai Zhen. How many times I need to tell you? I'm still not at the age of being called that. Zhi dou mei? (It meant 'Got it understand' in Cantonese)" she warned, keeping pinching Cathleen's cheek. (Don't worry, she wasn't meant to hurt her niece. She just didn't like someone to call her that. Plus, she wasn't a cruel one. Just think she was Asami Shouko, Misaki's aunt in Angelic Layer)

Cathleen nodded and Sister Huai Zhen stopped pinching her anymore. "Whoa, that's hurt." she thought, rubbing her left cheek.

Her name was Cathleen Lim, 15, a Form 3 student of St. Nicholas Middle School. She was about 144 cm tall and middle-weighted. She had short, black hair which some of her hair were tied in two little ponytails like Sakura Kinomoto and dark brown eyes, nearly black. She lived at her aunt's house when she was 12. Well, her parents were teaching to England. They were both professors and lecturers of Harvest College at there (It was just a random name, don't get serious, okay?). So, they have to let her stay with her aunt. Since Angelic Layer came to her country, everyone began to play that, from child to adult. Not only those, she always bought some manuals about Angelic Layer and didn't miss any tournament through TV, especially in Japan. Her favorite deus was, of course, Misaki Suzuhara and her Angel, Hikaru.

Cathleen always wanted to have her own Angel but she didn't have much money to buy one. The Angel Egg cost RM 50 (equivalent to 1547.84 yen and 13.16 dollar) while the Angelic Layer Beginner Set cost RM 252 (equivalent to 7801.09 yen and 66.32 dollar). With those prices, how she could buy all those?

Speaking of Sister Huai Zhen, she was a younger sister of Cathleen's mother and also Cathleen's aunt. She had wavy, brown hair and black eyes. She was also a news caster who reported about Angelic Layer. She hatred someone calling her 'Auntie', especially her niece (Cathleen, of course).

"Oh yes, before you came back from tuition, Amy asked you to join her to Star Mall. Do you want to go?" her aunt asked Cathleen.

"Sure. Why not?" Cathleen replied when her aunt spoke of Amy. She quickly went upstair, dressing up and went out from her house.

"I go now!" she shouted at Sister Huai Zhen as she went out.

"Please come back home before 7." her aunt replied. Cathleen nodded.

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"Hey, what took you so long?" a girl who was same age with Cathleen asked Cathleen as she came to the front gate of Star Mall which her friend waited for her.

"Sorry, because of the 'bus-stopping'." Cathleen answered, forcing a smile.

"Never mind." her friend continued. "Hey, you know what? Tomorrow is Karen's 12th birthday. I suggest giving her Angel Egg as a birthday present."

"Really? That's nice." Cathleen surprised.

Amy Wong was her best friend in her class. She was half head shorter than Cathleen. She had reddish brown hair that was tied in two ponytails and brown eyes. Same like Cathleen, she was also Angelic Layer fanatic except she was a deus. She had been played Angelic Layer about three years and she got some experience. She got an Angel named Usagi. Usagi was a middle-weighted angel with average speed but powerful attacks. She wore a baby blue tank top, khaki mini shorts with a rabbit tail, a pair of pink bunny gloves, pink boots and pink rabbit ears hairband with two long cords on her blond head. Not only best friend, she was much hyper than Cathleen. Karen was Amy's younger sister. She also loved Angelic Layer like her sister.

"So, what do you waiting for? Let's go!" Amy grabbed her friend's hand and went up to Piffle Princess at Level 3.

At Angelic Layer section, Cathleen only looked at her friend picked one of the Angel Eggs in "Angel Egg" area. Then, they went to buy some Angelic Layer products in the other area. A few minutes later, Amy went to the cashier with the help of Cathleen who helped her to carry some of the products.

"Congratulation, girls. You buy the Angelic Layer products more than RM 100. So, you can take part in Angelic Layer lucky draw." the saleswoman said after they paid.

"Wow, that's great!" Amy remarked. Cathleen surprised too.

The saleswoman took up a pink box with a kawaii wing design from the shelf and put it on the cashier in front of the two girls. "Each ball got a number printed on it. The numbers mean which prizes are you get. Choose one, girls!" she ordered. Amy went first, she put her hand into the hole of the box and grabbed something out from it. When she opened her palm, she got a small red ball with number 10 on it.

"Hmm…number 10. You got…" the saleswoman looked at the prize checklist. "You got a 30 percent discount Angel Coupon." She signed at the back of the coupon, ripped it off and gave it to Amy. "This coupon will be expired after 31 December."

Amy received her coupon and said to her friend, "Your turn now, Cathleen!"

Cathleen nodded to her friend and put her hand into the hole of the box. Then, she grabbed the ball out and revealed it by opening her palm. It was a silver ball with number 1 on it. As she did, the saleswoman and her friend were shocked of what she got.

"Number 1, that's impossible. Along those times, no one got this prize." the saleswoman gasped.

"What do you mean?" Cathleen asked.

"You got a limited edition of Angel Egg as a prize." she said, surprising the two friends. After that, she called the other saleswoman to bring out the prize. The other saleswoman brought out the Angel Egg and gave it to Cathleen. Cathleen looked at her prize, it was an egg with a blue doll inside it. The only difference was, the wings of the egg were light blue instead of white.

"The normal Angels are girls. This one is the guy. There're only 10 guy Angel Eggs in Malaysia." the saleswoman explained.

"Wow, you got your own Angel and also a limited edition one. I'm so jealous to you." Amy hugged her friend happily.

"I…I don't know how can I do that." Cathleen was still gasped in surprise.

"Since you're still a newbie, you can use my coupon to buy some products." Amy handled her Angel Coupon to her friend.

"But…" Cathleen couldn't accept Amy's offer. "No but. After all, I still got my old one. I think you need this." Amy tugged her coupon into Cathleen's palm. "Maybe you can make your own guy Angel like Oujiro Mihara's Angel."

"Oh yeah, Wizard, right?" Cathleen looked at the Angel Coupon, and then, she hugged her friend. "Thanks, Amy. You're my best friend."

"So, still want to shop?" Amy offered.

"Sure." Cathleen replied. "I can't believe of my good luck. It seems a miracle for me." she thought. She accepted her friend's order and went back to Angelic Layer section to shop for more stuff.

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Okay, I already finished this chapter. This fanfic was according to the original manga and next time, I'll try to write by using the anime. Please give me some reviews.