How Could Someone Who Said They Love Me And Still Do Hurt Me So Bad?

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Chapter 1

It was a normal day when Keely Teslow and Phil Diffy were walking home from school. They had been seeing each other for 5 weeks and 3 days. They had already said those 3 blessing words (I love you). They were talking about what they would do since it was a Friday night. This is very dramatic on Keely's behalf.

"So Phil, what do you want to do tonight?" Keely asked

"Well, is your mom still on her buisness trip?" a curious Phil asked

"Yeah, she won't be back home until next week." Keely replied

"Well...Maybe we can have a little alone time just you and me!!!!" Phil suggested

"Sounds great! How about 7?" Keely asked

"7's good." Phil replied

"Ok well see you then. Love you." Keely said as she gave Phil a kiss on the cheek before she went inside

"Love you too but, babe is something wrong?" Worried Phil asked

"No, why?" Keely asked

"You just seem a little more shakier and downer. Are you sure nothings wrong?" Phil asked

"Positive, I just had a bad dream last night that has me thinking is all. I'm fine. I'll see you at 7." Keely said

Keely however did not know that her nightmare was going to come true tonight...

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