This is my first story so give me all the constructive criticism you want! I need it. And if anyone decides that they want to beta for me then I'm all about that. I'm really bad at editing my writing and I often miss words or put the wrong word in the wrong place so tell me if something doesn't make sense. I also love abusing commas so call me out on that if you please (:
M rating for language and dirty things later on.