Disclaimer: I DO own dbz and the characters. They're mine, ALL MINE
WHAHAHAHAHA. *police alarm sounds and stuff **"Go out of the house, and
HAND OVER THOSE DBZ CHARACTERS" (disclaimer) NOOOOOOOOO, don't wanna, hey
give those back dammit. *snif * Well, I still have Vegeta.....whoops, now
they know!. No, get away from me, he's MINE. I'll fight for it with my live
*AAAAIIII, KARATEEEE!!*....... NO, don't get those electric things near
me...they hurt...*bzzzzzzzz* AAAAAUWIE!!! Oke, I surrender, here is *sniff*
Vegeta. The world is SOOO cruel. At least I own my self made up character.
But I don't own the dbz *sniff sniff*
Author's note: heheh, that was a pretty messed up disclaimer, don't ya think. This is my second fict (this chapter has been REWRITTEN), my first one is dbzhighschool (really poorly written, but hey, it's my first) and I haven't finished that yet. I will, if you guys review it more. Oke, everybody knows that Trunks still single at the end of Dragonball GT, there are a LOT of romance ficts of Marron and Trunks, or Trunks and Pan. Pan is absolutely too young for him, and I think that Marron, ehm..., doesn't fit with him..... Sooo, that's why I made my own character. Also I made up those 2 bad guys, you know, that came out of that black hole in the sky, that passage between the real world and Hades (next dimension for bad guys). I saw those episodes an long time ago, and I can't really remember what exactly happened then. So if you see some mistakes, you know why. And the last note: I'm Dutch, so there will be some grammar faults. Fweew, talked toooo much, now let's go on with tha fict.
~Live safer~
chapter 1. ---------------------------------------------------------
Hey, my name is Amy. Just an ordinary girl with brown hair and green eyes. I had my birthday last week, so I'm 23 now. My live is just normal, boring. But something happened that was out of this world.
One day I was walking to a supermarket. Buy some stuff, cause my refrigerator is totally empty, for days. I was tired of eating those double toppings pizza that I ordered at Domino's; really not good for my health.
When I walked back to my apartment with two heavy bags of food; I saw something odd, extremely odd. A small black hole in the sky, who began to grow larger by the second. I stood there and just looked. This was really amazing. But I knew that this wasn't possible, no black hole can just appear out of nowhere. There must be something terrible wrong.
I picked my bags up, that I dropped while looking, and continued walking home. I still looked at that hole from the corner of my eye. Then I saw that some figures came out of it. I froze immediately. "What the..?" I said. I continued walking, only this time faster. I wanted to be home quickly. But then two men came in my sight, they're red and had 2 black horns on there heads. Only the left guy is smaller then they other one.
I saw other people running away. When they walked in my direction, I thought that it was better if I run too. I dropped the bags, turned around and ran very hard.
"This can't be happening to me" I thought while running. I still saw that black hole, it was enormous now.
I looked over my shoulders to those strange looking men, who where coming closer by the second. And, they were flying now, fast. "How the hell can they fly? If I don't run faster, they catch me and I don't want to know what will happen then" I shivered at that thought.
Then all of a sudden they disappeared. That shocked me. I was wondering where those two could have gone. My question got his answer. I bummed into a muscular chest, and felt on the ground on my butt. I looked immediately at the cause of my fall, and looked directly into the eyes of the two men. The couple had both an evil smirk. I backed up slowly and stood up. There was no way out.
"You are not gonna get me without a fight" I shouted at them and placed myself in a fighting position. "Ah, the woman weakling wants to fight" said the left and shorter man, and looked at his partner. "Well" said the taller one "bring it on" "Don't underrate me" I thought. I had martial arts training since I was four. Still, looking at my attackers, I wasn't sure that I'm was going to win this fight.
"Man, I don't have a choice" and I attacked the taller man. I punched to his head, and chest, multiple times. But he blocked every move I made. From the corner of my eye I saw his sidekick smirking. I punched faster and harder to my opponent. Still he managed to block her moves. Then I saw a weak point in his defense, and immediately made a round kick, to his legs. He felled down on his knees.
I hit him in the face with the palm of her hands, and he flew against the wall. I stood there with disbelief "Woow, I don't know my own strength" I thought then. But I returned in my fight position when the man stood up again. His nose was bleeding and he had a very angry look on his face.
"You are stronger then I thought, but it won't help you anymore!" he said with a dark voice and pointed his palm in my direction. He formed a ball of energy in his hand. "No.. " I said softly. I never saw that strange light before that he is forming in his hand, but I knew it will kill me. A single tear escaped my eye and I closed them, waiting for the blow"
Then suddenly I felled that somebody lifted me from the ground, and flew away very quickly. I opened my eyes and saw a large explosion, where I barely escaped from. Then I looked at the person that saved me, a young man with purple hair. My age almost, I guessed. He turned his head and looked to my eyes, and smiled. "Woow, he's cute. No Amy, this is NOT the time to think about that, I almost died dammit!" Then I saw how high I was, and I immediately threw an arm around the boy's neck. The boy was blushing slightly.
But then he turned around and stood, no floated still. "What's happening" I asked. But then I saw my attackers affront of us. The boy quickly flew at the ground and gently dropped me off "Go away from here, it's too dangerous" he said and flew back. "Wait.." said my, but he couldn't hear her anymore "I don't know your name...". At least I want to know my hero's name. But then a ki blast almost hit me. I remembered what he said and began running, far from the battle.
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Author's note: Aaaand what do ya think? Kinda small BUT this is A LOT better then my first fanfict, I say. But now your opinion, pleaaaaase review and maybe some tips, I really need those ^ _ ^. Soooo reviewreviewreviewreview, puleeeeaaaaaase
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Author's note: heheh, that was a pretty messed up disclaimer, don't ya think. This is my second fict (this chapter has been REWRITTEN), my first one is dbzhighschool (really poorly written, but hey, it's my first) and I haven't finished that yet. I will, if you guys review it more. Oke, everybody knows that Trunks still single at the end of Dragonball GT, there are a LOT of romance ficts of Marron and Trunks, or Trunks and Pan. Pan is absolutely too young for him, and I think that Marron, ehm..., doesn't fit with him..... Sooo, that's why I made my own character. Also I made up those 2 bad guys, you know, that came out of that black hole in the sky, that passage between the real world and Hades (next dimension for bad guys). I saw those episodes an long time ago, and I can't really remember what exactly happened then. So if you see some mistakes, you know why. And the last note: I'm Dutch, so there will be some grammar faults. Fweew, talked toooo much, now let's go on with tha fict.
~Live safer~
chapter 1. ---------------------------------------------------------
Hey, my name is Amy. Just an ordinary girl with brown hair and green eyes. I had my birthday last week, so I'm 23 now. My live is just normal, boring. But something happened that was out of this world.
One day I was walking to a supermarket. Buy some stuff, cause my refrigerator is totally empty, for days. I was tired of eating those double toppings pizza that I ordered at Domino's; really not good for my health.
When I walked back to my apartment with two heavy bags of food; I saw something odd, extremely odd. A small black hole in the sky, who began to grow larger by the second. I stood there and just looked. This was really amazing. But I knew that this wasn't possible, no black hole can just appear out of nowhere. There must be something terrible wrong.
I picked my bags up, that I dropped while looking, and continued walking home. I still looked at that hole from the corner of my eye. Then I saw that some figures came out of it. I froze immediately. "What the..?" I said. I continued walking, only this time faster. I wanted to be home quickly. But then two men came in my sight, they're red and had 2 black horns on there heads. Only the left guy is smaller then they other one.
I saw other people running away. When they walked in my direction, I thought that it was better if I run too. I dropped the bags, turned around and ran very hard.
"This can't be happening to me" I thought while running. I still saw that black hole, it was enormous now.
I looked over my shoulders to those strange looking men, who where coming closer by the second. And, they were flying now, fast. "How the hell can they fly? If I don't run faster, they catch me and I don't want to know what will happen then" I shivered at that thought.
Then all of a sudden they disappeared. That shocked me. I was wondering where those two could have gone. My question got his answer. I bummed into a muscular chest, and felt on the ground on my butt. I looked immediately at the cause of my fall, and looked directly into the eyes of the two men. The couple had both an evil smirk. I backed up slowly and stood up. There was no way out.
"You are not gonna get me without a fight" I shouted at them and placed myself in a fighting position. "Ah, the woman weakling wants to fight" said the left and shorter man, and looked at his partner. "Well" said the taller one "bring it on" "Don't underrate me" I thought. I had martial arts training since I was four. Still, looking at my attackers, I wasn't sure that I'm was going to win this fight.
"Man, I don't have a choice" and I attacked the taller man. I punched to his head, and chest, multiple times. But he blocked every move I made. From the corner of my eye I saw his sidekick smirking. I punched faster and harder to my opponent. Still he managed to block her moves. Then I saw a weak point in his defense, and immediately made a round kick, to his legs. He felled down on his knees.
I hit him in the face with the palm of her hands, and he flew against the wall. I stood there with disbelief "Woow, I don't know my own strength" I thought then. But I returned in my fight position when the man stood up again. His nose was bleeding and he had a very angry look on his face.
"You are stronger then I thought, but it won't help you anymore!" he said with a dark voice and pointed his palm in my direction. He formed a ball of energy in his hand. "No.. " I said softly. I never saw that strange light before that he is forming in his hand, but I knew it will kill me. A single tear escaped my eye and I closed them, waiting for the blow"
Then suddenly I felled that somebody lifted me from the ground, and flew away very quickly. I opened my eyes and saw a large explosion, where I barely escaped from. Then I looked at the person that saved me, a young man with purple hair. My age almost, I guessed. He turned his head and looked to my eyes, and smiled. "Woow, he's cute. No Amy, this is NOT the time to think about that, I almost died dammit!" Then I saw how high I was, and I immediately threw an arm around the boy's neck. The boy was blushing slightly.
But then he turned around and stood, no floated still. "What's happening" I asked. But then I saw my attackers affront of us. The boy quickly flew at the ground and gently dropped me off "Go away from here, it's too dangerous" he said and flew back. "Wait.." said my, but he couldn't hear her anymore "I don't know your name...". At least I want to know my hero's name. But then a ki blast almost hit me. I remembered what he said and began running, far from the battle.
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Author's note: Aaaand what do ya think? Kinda small BUT this is A LOT better then my first fanfict, I say. But now your opinion, pleaaaaase review and maybe some tips, I really need those ^ _ ^. Soooo reviewreviewreviewreview, puleeeeaaaaaase
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