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Chapter 1

"Hey Alex!" Said Sabina Pleasure as she slowly walks toward him in their first secret date spot in the forest. "Can I ask you a question?"

"Sure."

" OK, ummmm…why…..why does nobody like me?"

Alex did not see that coming, nor did he know how to respond to that.

" Everyone likes you, Sabina. Why would you think that?" He mustered.

"Not true. All these girls keep giving me dirty looks, and even some guys."

OOooooooh. Thought Alex. It's probably because she's going out with me, a handsomely great bloke. But, of course, he was not going to say that to her face.

"They're probably jealous of your….beauty." He said.

He was planning on breaking up with her today, but right now didn't seem like a good time.

After he pulled her in to a long kiss, she asked, "Why did it take you a long time to say beauty?" Oh no. "I….I….I didn't….." He stuttered. But then something strange happened. Sabina's face was turning green and she was growing taller and taller. She sprouted black ratty wings, and he smelled an odor so awful a muddy pig would keel over. Then the monster spoke in a harsh whisper: "You…you must dieeeeee Alexxxx Riderr. Your little girlfriend issss deaddddd, although her bodyyy was quiiiiite comfffyyy. My reassssonss aree connnnfidentiallll. Ohhh and byyy the wayyyy, II feeeed onn saddddnesssss, sooo if youu had neveeerr madee theee girlll, orrr whaat wass leftt off thee girl, saaadddd thenn youu would'vee been safffe." It then had its own giggle session. Sabina, I think we should break up.

With that it raised it's wrinkled green hand and shot some sticky green goo at Alex's face. He dodged it, but some landed on his shoulder and burned off some of his skin. Alex cursed and took out the yoyo with twenty feet of string that Smithers made him. He threw it and wrapped it tightly around it's thick neck. It started rasping for air, then collapsed and finally died…..on Alex's leg. He could feel the gooey acid from the beast's body eating away at his skin. It was waaay to heavy to lift off of him himself, and the goo would get all over his hands. He tried and tried with large and strong attempts that his pain even greater, and eventually dragged his leg from under it. He screamed when he glanced at his leg….or what was left of it. It was a bloody bone with chunks of bloody skin with mixes of green. After puking up his breakfast and lunch, he tried to call for help.

"HEEEEEEEELLLP" He screamed. "HEEEEEEEELP". Wait….what or who is that? He squinted his eyes but still could not make it out. It was walking towards him. Fast.

He waited another five minutes in horrible agony because the pain in his leg was just starting to come. He took part of this time trying to squint in the dark (because it was now 10:30) to see. The other part he spent writhing and crying in bloody pain. Now, the figure was right next to him. Alex was surprised he got here so quickly and let out a little gasp. Then the figure spoke. "Alex? Alex, is that...you?" How did he know his name? Then, he knew. "Ash!"

"It is you. hm." Said Ash, Alex's godfather. Then Alex said, "Why are you here? You're not from London."

"I'm on a mission Alex, but that's not the matter right now. And what the hell happened to your leg?!"

"Long story." Says Alex. Could you get me home, please?"

"Oh, sure, right." He heaves Alex onto his shoulder and starts walking. "Do you know the way Ash, in the dark?" Asks Alex. "Um...Yes, I..uh do." He didn't sound the least bit confident, but Alex didn't notice. "Okay, then." He said, and they started walking and then there was silence. After about 2 hours, as Alex was about to drift off sleep, Ash tripped on a stone and he was jerked awake. "Um Ash? Are you sure you know the way back to town?" Alex was worried. "Alex? Actually, I..uh..I thought I did but it's so dark I just..." Ash let his last sentence trail off. "So we're lost?" Asked Alex in the calmest way possible. "Well...yes...and I'm feeling a...bit...achy..and droowsy..." Stammered Ash. This is so unlike him. Alex thought. Then, Ash collapsed in a heap and Alex fell and slammed on the ground. He heard a crack of his neck but felt no pain at all. He realized his eyes were closed and slowly opened them. Where was he?

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