Alright, so here is a preview of a story I've started writing. Please no bashing if my likes in characters are not the same as yours. Feed Back is welcome! Should I keep writing the story? I'll probably add a few more chapters and if no one has read by then I'll just delete it. Thanks!
Sitting on the edge of the bathtub, looking down at her feet she couldn't figure out how she'd gotten here. How her husband had managed to break her heart. Or how she didn't see this coming. Picking her daughter up from the tub, Peyton Scott, soon to be Sawyer again, wrapped the toddler in a towel and gently tickled her belly, putting a fake smile on her face as she dressed their daughter. "Mommy, where's daddy?"
She knew she'd have to answer that question at some point in time, she just hoped and prayed that maybe he'd actually come back home and tell her that he messed up. "He had to go to New York to see his publishers." Peyton softly replied, pulling the clothed little girl into her lap and gently kissing her forehead. "Maybe he'll call later this evening." Peyton started humming a gentle tune to put Sawyer to sleep.
It had all been a big mistake. He knew that now, he just wished he would have seen it all before it was too late. Haley was suppose to meet him at the airport to pick him up and let him stay there. Of course she was the first person he'd seen as he stepped off the plane, followed by Jamie running up to him. "Uncle Lucas!" Said the eight year old as he wrapped his arms around his uncle's neck. "Well if it isn't my main man, ." Lucas replied pulling Haley into a hug as well. Haley looked at him, "Are you sure this is what you want?" She asked. Luke nodded, "I just need to clear my head right now." He finally said.
Looking down at the man sleeping beside her, she was finally happy. A wide smile spread across her face as he rolled over to face her, "Good morning, Beautiful." Julian said, leaning in to kiss her. She smiled again and kissed back, "Sleep good?" Brooke asked him, running her hand up to play with his hair. "Yea it was ok, better knowing you where there." Julian said and rolled out of bed and walked to the kitchen. She sat up, "is something wrong?" Brooke asked, he had been acting different. Ever since she found out she wasn't able to have kids. She knew he wanted a family, as did she.
Walking to the kitchen she stood across from him, "Julian, did I say something wrong?" She finally asked as he poured them both a glass of orange juice and looked at her. "No, not at all. I've got to get to work early." He said, kissing her head and walking into their bedroom to get ready. After getting dressed, he picked his cell phone up and read the last text message on his phone.
Luke's coming back for her..
How was he going to compete with that? he shoved his phone down in his pocket and walked over to Brooke. "Love you, Brooke Davis. See you after work." He said and left. Leaving Brooke in a daze.
Again, feed back is welcome! Let me know what you think!