Disclaimer: I don't own anything that has to do with yu yu hakusho (though
I wish I owned Hiei ^^)
Chapter one:
Hiei fell forward onto the hard ground in the park in the ningenkai. Blood gushed from a deep gash in his side, his bare skin pale and sweating. He panted gripping the wound; it was sick green color meaning he'd been poisoned.
He writhed in pain on the ground it felt like thorns and needles were running through his veins and his stomach felt like he'd swallowed two gallons of acid.
Now how Hiei had come to be poisoned and in so much pain is simple, he had been in the park (as usual) and, had come across a demon (yes a demon in the ningenkai, lol) they somehow ended up fighting and of course Hiei had won, but, the demon had managed to stab him with a poisoned blade. And now the poison was taking full affect leaving Hiei in excruciating pain and helpless.
Meanwhile, Kurama was at home, doing homework in his bedroom when he suddenly felt Hiei's ki drop dramatically, he was immediately worried. What's wrong with Hiei? He wondered, he felt another enormous drop in the fire demons ki and jumped to his feet speeding out of his house to find Hiei. He's in in serious trouble, I must find him quickly.
Hiei's crimson eyes stared up at the looming trees above him, his vision was blurry and he saw odd shapes swimming in front of his eyes, it made him nauseous. What did that baka do to me? He thought weakly as another wave of pain overwhelmed him and he blacked out.
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How was that for a first chapter? You guys enjoy it? I hope so. I'll have the second chapter up soon so sit tight to see what becomes of poor Hiei.
Chapter one:
Hiei fell forward onto the hard ground in the park in the ningenkai. Blood gushed from a deep gash in his side, his bare skin pale and sweating. He panted gripping the wound; it was sick green color meaning he'd been poisoned.
He writhed in pain on the ground it felt like thorns and needles were running through his veins and his stomach felt like he'd swallowed two gallons of acid.
Now how Hiei had come to be poisoned and in so much pain is simple, he had been in the park (as usual) and, had come across a demon (yes a demon in the ningenkai, lol) they somehow ended up fighting and of course Hiei had won, but, the demon had managed to stab him with a poisoned blade. And now the poison was taking full affect leaving Hiei in excruciating pain and helpless.
Meanwhile, Kurama was at home, doing homework in his bedroom when he suddenly felt Hiei's ki drop dramatically, he was immediately worried. What's wrong with Hiei? He wondered, he felt another enormous drop in the fire demons ki and jumped to his feet speeding out of his house to find Hiei. He's in in serious trouble, I must find him quickly.
Hiei's crimson eyes stared up at the looming trees above him, his vision was blurry and he saw odd shapes swimming in front of his eyes, it made him nauseous. What did that baka do to me? He thought weakly as another wave of pain overwhelmed him and he blacked out.
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How was that for a first chapter? You guys enjoy it? I hope so. I'll have the second chapter up soon so sit tight to see what becomes of poor Hiei.