Ok, this is my first attempt at a LOTR poem, so don't expect anything
brilliant. Please R&R! It would be easier to improve if I got some good
constructive criticism.
Note: I couldn't get it to have the proper amount of spaces between stanzas (is that what they're called?) so I just put a line. (-------------)
Where is it...it can't be gone!
My hands go to my breast
Where the precious thing should be
Until I find it I shall not rest
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Ah, there it is!
In the hands of the human man
I knew it all along:
To steal it was his plan
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At least I can trust Aragorn
He says "give the Ring to Frodo"
And It is given back to me
The Ring I cherish so
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But wait.what am I saying?
This is an evil thing
So why do I cry out in dread
When I lose sight of the Ring?
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The power of the Ring
Is already taking hold
It's amazing the power that's contained
In a tiny band of gold
Note: I couldn't get it to have the proper amount of spaces between stanzas (is that what they're called?) so I just put a line. (-------------)
Where is it...it can't be gone!
My hands go to my breast
Where the precious thing should be
Until I find it I shall not rest
----------------------
Ah, there it is!
In the hands of the human man
I knew it all along:
To steal it was his plan
----------------------
At least I can trust Aragorn
He says "give the Ring to Frodo"
And It is given back to me
The Ring I cherish so
----------------------
But wait.what am I saying?
This is an evil thing
So why do I cry out in dread
When I lose sight of the Ring?
----------------------
The power of the Ring
Is already taking hold
It's amazing the power that's contained
In a tiny band of gold