My first fanfic, YAY ME! :D :D
Basically, this series of stories will be a retelling of the One Piece anime. But, this will have my OC in it and it will mostly focus on him too.. Instead of starting from the very beginning, how about we start from when The Straw Hat Pirates first arrive on the island. So far, they only consist of: Luffy, Zoro, Nami and Usopp thus, making Jet the 5th one to join the crew. Hope it become successful! Please rate and review! :3
The Straw Hats are sailing peacefully through the East Blue. Luffy is desperately bored with nothing to do. Complaining, the ship suddenly starts rocking back and forth violently. What has happened? Did the get attacked? Hope you enjoy :3
Note: Text throughout the story that's in italics are translations.
I don't own One Piece
I own Furutsu Shima, Nijiryu Jet, Nijiryu Yuuto, and their Devil Fruits I guess... :)
About Nijiryu Jet (The Basics)
Name: Nijiryu Jet
Age: 17 (début)
Birthday: February 19
Build: Average height, lean, muscular
Blood Type: WX
Favourite Food:Sushi
Smells Like: The earth but stronger scented (because of Devil's Fruit)
Physical Traits: Right handed, Has a scar across his nose, Black hair in a mohawk style
Clothing:Blue/Purple snapback, Blue handkerchief around neck, Tye Dye Tank, Black arm band, Yellow sweatpants, Black skull belt, Pant chain, Orange shoes
Skills: Able to control Devil Fruit's power very well, 8th degree black belt in karate
Combat: Both close range and far ranged combat
Personality: Nice, Friendly, Protective, Helpful, Stubborn, Reckless, Positive
Devil Fruit: Niji Niji No Mi
Meaning: Rainbow
Ability: User is able to use attacks from a variety of different elements such as ice, fire, rock, etc.
Details: User is not able to use 2 or more elements simultaneously or it will cause extreme fatigue.
Chapter 1: Furustu Shima & Nijiryu Jet
Right now, in the East Blue, the Straw Hat Pirates are currently sailing across the sea heading to the next island in sight. "AAAAAAAH!" Luffy yells. "WHEN WILL WE GET TO THE NEXT ISLAND?!" he continues. He is so bored with not doing anything on the ship. Everyone else is busy doing something. "We should be at the next island in about 1/2 a day" Nami says. "That's too long..." Luffy complained. Although he did want more nakama before heading into the most dangerous sea, The Grand Line. All they need to have is a musician and a cook for their crew.
All of a sudden, the ship starts rocking back and forth violently. "Steer the rudder to port! We're caught in a current!" Nami shouts. Zoro quicky runs quickly takes control of the rudder but it is unable to move it. "AH! Don't break the ship Zoro!" Usopp screams desperately. "It's for our lives! Do you want to die?!" Zoro yells back. Usopp pouts and agrees. As Zoro attempts to change course the Going Merry increases speed and keeps circling with the current. They fall unconscious because of all the dizzy spinning. After a few minutes the ship stops. As the crew wakes up they find themselves in front of an island. "AMAZING!" Luffy says as his eyes gleam with amazement. The whole crew gasps in amazement of an island they've never seen before. It's so much different from any other island you would see in the East Blue, or any other Blue for that matter. The island was a crescent-shaped island that was bordered by a long beach. The inside was a huge forest. There is a huge Devil Fruit in the middle of the island and it had a huge tree with colourful dots on it at the very top, almost like the steam. On the right, you can make out a small village. "Woah, can there even be a Devil Fruit that big?" Zoro questioned. "Maybe that's the Giant Giant Fruit, hahahahaha" Usopp comments. "YOSH LET'S DOCK HERE!" The captain orders with hope and happiness.
They dropped anchor on the beach in the inner bay. They take a look at their surroundings and the first thing they notice is that part of the beach has been stained with dirt, blood and it's really been tattered with alot. "Hmm, I wonder why that part of the is all messed up. The things in the thing up there also look suspicious." says Nami. The decide to walk into the village. It seems like a big village but it's so empty. "It seems that the villagers probably evacuated." After all we're pirates." Usopp says to the crew. "Whatever... let's just go and explore the place. I wanna go to the top of that fruit that's in the middle of the island. Shishishi!" Suddenly, some guy pops out from the side of the entrance "What are you guy and why are you guys here? This is supposed to be a secret island.."
"Secret island?" The crew said as they tilted their heads. "We're pirates" Luffy replies and right after that Nami punches him, "BAKA he's gonna think we're evil." She turns to Jet "Sorry, we just ended up here because we got caught in a current." "You must have gotten caught in the Spiral Shocker, a current that spins the ship until the crew can't stand and sends them flying here. It only surfaces every 5 years for a full week, always in a different location in the East Blue. Know one knows where exactly where this place is, but it's still in the East Blue." "Wow! We're not even in the Grand Line yet and there are some weird currents and islands here already!" Nami says with excitement. "Well... as long as you're not evil pirates." he turns to the empty town and shouts "IT'S OK GUYS, THEY'RE NOT BAD PEOPLE!" As soon as you know it, the town was as lively as ever. "C'mon, I'll take you to my place."
As they enter Jet's place near the center of the village, they see another guy, slightly older than Jet, but they look very alike. "Guys, this is my brother Nijiryu Yuuto, Yuuto these are the Straw Hat Pirates." "Oh, so you're pirates? Here, take a seat." "So who are you guys?" he asks.
-I'm Luffy and I ate the Gomu Gomu no Mi Rubber Rubber Fruit (or Gum Gum in the manga), also the captain
-I'm Zoro the swordsman
-I'm Nami the navigator
-I'm Usopp the sniper
"Wow you actually ate a Devil Fruit?!" he turns to his brother "Hey bro, our work did pay off after all I bet people are getting them all over the globe!" Jet says to Yuuya. The crew seems confused as they tilt their heads. "You probably don't know this but this island is actually produces 50% of the world's Devil Fruits. Since we have so much, we usually throw them all over the place so people can find them and stuff like that. About 25% of the people here have eaten Devil Fruits, my bro and I have too." He explains as he smiles. "EHHHHHHHHHHH?!" the crew says in astonishment. "W-Which ones have you guys eaten?" Zoro asks while hesitating. Jet replies "I ate the Niji Niji no Mi Rainbow Rainbow Fruit and my bro here ate the Muko Muko no Mi Void Void Fruit." "So what? You make people fall to oblivion (pointing to Yuuto) and you produce rainbows (pointing to Jet)! Hahahaha!" Nami laughs as she teases the brothers. "Don't judge a power according to name..." Yuuto says as he smirks at Jet. "Let's get to the beach, we have a few dummies there."
They walk down to the blood and dirt stained beach. "What's with all this?" Zoro asks in confusion. "Well, we call this place, Battle Beach, a beach where people fight for fun, with Devil Fruits obviously. They like to train alot to make use of their powers." Jet explains as they pass by what seems to be a tiny stone with inscription on it. Jet walks up to it and explains, "This is a memorial for the founder of the island, aka the chief. He's already passed so my brother here is the new chief of the village since he's so strong." "WOW AMAZING!" Usopp and Luffy exclaim as they clap in amazement. They continue walking across the beach. They get to the dummies, 16 for Jet and only 9 for Yuuto. They take theirs stances and...
-Mercury Kasai Susei Fire Comet! Immediately, tiny but deadly meteors appear out of thin air and hit the dummy, combusting it.
-Venus Kumo Cloud! A strong gust of white wind suddenly blasts sends the dummy flying and crashing down.
-Earth Saigai Disaster! Under the 3rd dummy, leaves start circling it, then BOOM! A mini but powerful tornado smashes it into pieces.
-Mars Korudo Spurue Cold Spray! A cold blast of water sprays the dummy far off into the distance.
-Jupiter Hariken Hurricane! The all the crew sees is a piece of the red storm occurring on Jupiter destroying the next.
-Saturn Zangai Debris! The ring from Saturn compresses Dummy No. 6 and it disappears. Leaving a pile of dust.
-Uranus Aisushado Ice Shard! The sharp, pointy pieces of ice pierces the dummy, rendering it cold and freezing it. Then, it shatters.
-Neptune Daiyamondo Diamonds! The big pieces of ice that look like diamonds falls at a rapid pace leaving the dummy in scratches and rips.
-Pluto Shimo Frost! A thick white mist surrounds the last one, encasing it in a thick shell of ice, immobilizing it.
All they see are 9 dummies either not there or completely destroyed. Yuuto looks back at the crew. They turn their head back at him with their mouths dropped to the ground. "Yea, the void in the fruit's name actually refers to space. So I can summon things from space and use them too attack things." Yuuto explains. "Is that even possible?" Usopp exclaims.
"Why don't you take your turn Jet?" his brother asks. "Hehehe! Ok, here it goes! Watch this..."
-Gin no Kaze Silver Wind! I blast of silver wind knocks the first away at an incredible speed.
-Dakku Parusu Dark Pulse! A giant wave of darkness swoops the second one and blasts it away.
-Ryu za Ryusei Draco Meteor! Blue and red meteors start falling down, hitting the third and blowing it up.
-Kaminari Punchi Thunder Punch! Thunder forms around Jet's fist and he runs. He hits the fourth, electrocuting it.
-Haijanpukikku High Jump Kick! A really high jump is preformed then with incredible force, Jet smashes the fifth down. It had so much impact, that it made a crater.
-Kasai punchi Fire Punch! Fire forms around Jet's fist. While running, he burns the sixth to a crisp.
-Aeroblast Air Blast! Another strong blast of wind comes again but, this one was so strong that it shredded the seventh into pieces.
-Shadoboru Shadow Ball! A dark ball forms right in front of Jet and he launches it. This blasts the eighth right off the island.
-Ha Mi Leaf Blade! Bright, green leaves start grow on Jet's arm and he runs into the ninth. With fast reflexes, he cuts it into even smaller pieces than before.
-Doro Bakudan Mud Bomb! The mud from underneath the sand starts to float and it's being compressed. He tosses it and it explodes with incredible impact destroying the tenth.
-Aisu Punchi Ice Punch! Frosty ice forms around Jet's fist and smashes the eleventh. It starts to freeze and then it shatters.
-Kyusokuna Spinu Rapid Spin! Jet starts to spin at a super fast speed. He spins into the twelfth sending flying straight into the sky. When it hits the ground it smashes into pieces.
-Hedorobakudan Sludge Bomb! He spits out a purple substance and when it hits the thirteenth and melts it.
-Saikokatto Psycho Cut! With a swift swing of the arm, a purple blade flies at a fast speed making the fourteenth spazz and fall.
-Pawājemu Power Gem! Tiny rocks float up in front of Jet and he sends them flying, penetrating the fifteenth with holes.
-Hagane Tsubasa Steel Wing! Jet grows wings made of steel, he flies up and slices the sixteenth with the steel.
-Haidoroponpu Hydro Pump! High pressure water is blasted from Jet's mouth, completely demolishing the seventeenth along with a few trees behind it.
Jet looks back once again. The crew turns and their mouths drop in amazement. "The "rainbow" in the fruit's name actually means elements. Basically, I can use almost any element that I want to. Whether it be fire, poison,ice and stiff like that. "AMAZING! C'MON YOU HAVE TO BE MY NAKAMA NOW! YOU GUYS ARE SO STRONG!" "Can't remember I'm the chief of the village." "And I don't know why I should. Hahaha." Jet adds in. Luffy pouts in sadness.
Zoro asks suddenly "Why is that Devil Fruit so big?" as he points to it. Nami adds in, "And why is it so colourful up there?" "That's actually a mountain, and how we got the name for the island. Let's go up there and you'll see why" Jet says while chuckling at the same time. Yuuto interrupts saying " But you guys will have to prepare, the climb will take at least 2 days. There's no short cuts up the mountain either, we'll have to keep spiralling up." "That's too long =3=" Luffy complained. Zoro punched Luffy "QUIT COMPLAINING!"
Now they are all prepared and wanting to start climbing the mountain, and so they did...
What will they find at the top?
Is it going to be beautiful?
Or something deadly?
Ch. 2 Coming soon! Hopefully... =3=
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