(Set just before blackveil)

Karigan was walking down the vast corridor. She was late; she had received an invitation to yet another ball. (She was getting very sick of them but as she was a Knight of the realm she was forced to attend). This time though, she did not wear a ridiculous outfit, she wore a simple dress, (her father had sent her one on finding out about her being a Knighted) and even so, it looked stunning on her. A page bowed to her as she entered the hall. She looked around her, spotted a corner and headed for it. She would just stay in the corner, as she headed towards it Fastion (coming out of nowhere) took her hand. "Ahhh, my lady, would you care for a dance?"

Karigan rolled her eyes "sure, however do you not have a certain King to protect?"

"He can wait, I am not always playing the roll of weapon"

Karigan smiled she had never thought of Fastion as anything other than a weapon.

"I thought you looked a little forlorn, is the ball not pleasing you?"

"No… I mean yes, wait… its just the king, you would know" she knew he knew.

"Oh, well I am always here, for well… possibilities"

Karigan grew stiff, maybe… well she did need a distraction, and Fastion always made her feel happy, she tucked the information away, she would think about it later. The song ended and Fastion led her off the floor near the entrance.

"Thank-you lady karigan for that wonderful dance, I however must depart, I'm on duty soon" before Karigan could react, Fastion planted a kiss on her cheek and slid away leaving a very shocked looking Karigan.

Karigan lay in her bed thinking, the ball had not been a total loss, and she liked Fastion's proposition, (she blushed here) he WAS very good looking, and strong. Her aunts would like him, he had wit. She suddenly realized one thing, THE KING, she hadn't thought about him since seeing Fastion earlier that evening. Now that was a good thing, she thought smugly.

I know its short but its my first try at writing a fanfic and I would love some help, and I know I kind copied that one DANCING WEAPONS, however it was not finished so… yer what o you think?