Puppy Problems
This is my first story I've written for public please review.
Timmy's alarm clock went off at 7:00AM as it always did. "aurgh..." Timmy moaned as he got out of bed and wandered down the stairs.
"Uhh?"Timmy mummbled, noticing the cristmas tree sitting in the middle of the living room. "Wanda, why is there a cristmas tree in the middle of the living room?" Timmy yelled up the stairs to his gold fish.
" Yes dear," Wanda replied. Wanda apeared next to timmy. "What is it Timmy?"
"Why is there a cristmas tree in the middle of the living room?"
"Oh, don't you remember Timmy, tommorow is cristmas." Wanda replied.
"Oh, where's Cosmo?" Timmy asked.
"He's making an apointment for my wand."
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In The Fairy World Apointment Center
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"48," the annoucer cried out into the lounge.
"Oh, ohh, thats me," Cosmo said excitedly. "What did I win, wha'd I win!?"
"A trip to the front desk," the announcer said as if talking to a baby. "Right this way sir."
Cosmo walked up to the front desk. "Now what?"
"Sir do you have an apointment to schedual or do I need to call the next person up?"
"Oh ya, I need my wife's wand repaired.
"Name?"
"Wanda."
"OK, since this is the 10,000th check up you get a free trip to the Fairy World Spa for 1 week, where can we pick Wanda and her wand?
"Timmy Turners house."
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The next day Timmy Turners House
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"Ring, ring," Timmy's alarm clock blasted at 5:00AM.
"Wanda, Cosmo, its cristmas wake up." Timmy yelled, his voice briming with excitment.
"What up good buddy?" Cosmo said loudly into Timmy's ear. "Wanda's not here she has an apointment with the Fairy World spa this week."
"Oh, wonder whats in my stalking?" Timmy said while runing down the stairs. Timmy picked up his stalking picking through the canddy to get to his stalking stuffer. "No, gum, lolypop, more gum. Ah here it is, Crash Nebula Saves the Day for Gameboy Advance Awsome!!! Cosmo could you get my Gameboy."
"Sure thing," Cosmo says. "Here you go" A mallet hits timmy on the top of the head."
"Cosmo!" Timmy said angrily.
"What I thought you said hit me on top of the head with a mallet?"
"I'll just get my self."
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7 hours later
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"Timmy," Timmy's parent sung in unisen. "Time to open your present."
"Oh boy, I wonder what it is, it's a puppy." Timmy said happily. "Thanks mom and dad.
So How do you like it so far? please review.
This is my first story I've written for public please review.
Timmy's alarm clock went off at 7:00AM as it always did. "aurgh..." Timmy moaned as he got out of bed and wandered down the stairs.
"Uhh?"Timmy mummbled, noticing the cristmas tree sitting in the middle of the living room. "Wanda, why is there a cristmas tree in the middle of the living room?" Timmy yelled up the stairs to his gold fish.
" Yes dear," Wanda replied. Wanda apeared next to timmy. "What is it Timmy?"
"Why is there a cristmas tree in the middle of the living room?"
"Oh, don't you remember Timmy, tommorow is cristmas." Wanda replied.
"Oh, where's Cosmo?" Timmy asked.
"He's making an apointment for my wand."
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In The Fairy World Apointment Center
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"48," the annoucer cried out into the lounge.
"Oh, ohh, thats me," Cosmo said excitedly. "What did I win, wha'd I win!?"
"A trip to the front desk," the announcer said as if talking to a baby. "Right this way sir."
Cosmo walked up to the front desk. "Now what?"
"Sir do you have an apointment to schedual or do I need to call the next person up?"
"Oh ya, I need my wife's wand repaired.
"Name?"
"Wanda."
"OK, since this is the 10,000th check up you get a free trip to the Fairy World Spa for 1 week, where can we pick Wanda and her wand?
"Timmy Turners house."
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The next day Timmy Turners House
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"Ring, ring," Timmy's alarm clock blasted at 5:00AM.
"Wanda, Cosmo, its cristmas wake up." Timmy yelled, his voice briming with excitment.
"What up good buddy?" Cosmo said loudly into Timmy's ear. "Wanda's not here she has an apointment with the Fairy World spa this week."
"Oh, wonder whats in my stalking?" Timmy said while runing down the stairs. Timmy picked up his stalking picking through the canddy to get to his stalking stuffer. "No, gum, lolypop, more gum. Ah here it is, Crash Nebula Saves the Day for Gameboy Advance Awsome!!! Cosmo could you get my Gameboy."
"Sure thing," Cosmo says. "Here you go" A mallet hits timmy on the top of the head."
"Cosmo!" Timmy said angrily.
"What I thought you said hit me on top of the head with a mallet?"
"I'll just get my self."
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7 hours later
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"Timmy," Timmy's parent sung in unisen. "Time to open your present."
"Oh boy, I wonder what it is, it's a puppy." Timmy said happily. "Thanks mom and dad.
So How do you like it so far? please review.
