Name:Naruto Wars, The Force Unleashed
Story Trailer.
A young girl is seen looking up at the incredible mountain with the faces carved into it dedicated to the previous Hokages, she then enters a small food stand as a older males voice is heard asking, "Who are you?"
She is then seen sitting down as a voiceover from her begins, "I'm no one."
She then looks up to see a portrait of a young blonde hair boy with piercing blue eyes having a party with the owners and what appears to be the former Hokage in a picture hanging in the background.
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The same young boy from the picture is then seen standing before the village council being judged as his own voiceover begins, "I was raised to do one thing."
The next scene shows him looking out upon a vast wasteland with large amounts of wreckage all around him was then cost to a scene of him in front of a campfire as the voice over continues, "But now, I've got nothing to fight for!"
The next scene shows what appears to be the bridge of a Separate Command Ship, the Snake Sannin as well as his personal assistant and a young boy everyone has thought of as dead stand behind a man with a spiral mask with only one eye visible as his voice is then heard, "Nothing will stand in our way, I will finish what you started!"
The shot then changes to reveal a statue to his ancestor as the scene changes once more to him torturing an old friend who has only one eye and mask hiding most of his face from view.
The background music increases in tempo as an old black and orange Jedi Starfighter is seen moving at a rapid speed trying to avoid the laser fire from two Vulture Droid in a no snow and ice covered canyon with what appears the wreckage from the old Galactic Empire littering the area.
The girl from the beginning is heard talking once more as a scene shows her and the remaining members of squads seven standing before an old man with red lines on his face as a young looking Jedi, "There were stories about what happened?"
"It's true, all of it!" the older men says as this seemed changes the showing an old starship that was reminiscent of a certain Bounty Hunter's is seen jumping into hyperspace.
The scene then changes to a massive aerial battle taking place over the Land of Snow with everything from old Republic fighters and Star Destroyers to New Empire and Republic ships as well what appeared to be Separatist and First Order vessels attacking.
The next scene shows a a massive ground battle with what appeared to be soldiers from both the descendents of the clone trooper's as well as Republic and New Empire troops fighting against battle droids and First Order troopers, the voiceover then continues, "The dark side, the Jedi and now the Sidi... they are real."
the next scene shows the young men from the camp fire looking into the faces of several people like him especially when young girl with green hair and slightly darker skin who smiled back at him, the next scene shows him fighting the Snake Sannin and his apprentice without much difficulty.
a new voiceover is then heard, "The force it is calling to you."
This next scene shows the young man once more with a determined look about them with a certain individual now bowing before and and hoping that he could save his little brother from the dark side, "Just let it in!"
NARUTO
The Force Unleashed
WARS
Summary: In a attempt to solidify her power and the control of the Hidden Leaf Village and after the failure of the Sasuke retrieval mission which is led many to believe that Sasuke has been killed, Tsunade inadvertently signs a banishment order for young Naruto not realizing that the new traitor could even be alive and well.
With all of this happening his former village had become a hell on earth for him.
But Naruto can no longer fight the Darkness on his own and this final betrayal of someone he once trusted with his life has led him down the path of the Dark Side of the Force, but like Darth Vader and his Secret Apprentice he will emerge from the Darkness more powerful than ever.
He has met people that have shown him the Light once more and those people he will protect with his life including one worth dying for.
Pairings: Naruto x Fu and others
I do not own, Naruto or Star Wars.
The authors note, originally I have decided to do some editing to this story as I regret to say that some of the grammar in it is indeed horrible awful and downright disgraceful, at the same time I have come to a realization that while I like the original story I seriously need to rework it.
Areas of the story will be much the same except I intend to do a lot of work to give it a new feel and direction.
C1, Fear and Hope is his Ally
"Talking." 'Thoughts.'
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A Long Time Ago In A Galaxy Far Far Away
NARUTO WARS
Episode One
The Force Unleashed
It is a time of great chaos as the Jedi have won they last great battle with the Dark Sith but this has left the Jedi order in ruins.
From the ashes the Jedi under the control of the New Republic seek to rebuild their damaged order and are unaware that the Force has begun to rise on a distant world in the Outer rim.
Two of the Jedi who feel that the order and the New Republic has become too complacent now feel a strange pull towards the outer rim in an unknown destiny that awaits them.
From this world the Force will be unleashed and Awaken once more and the Force spirits of both the Sith and Jedi of the past will guide the new Chosen One who will unleash the Force once and for all and bring about balance.
the scene then moves that the stars in the background then moves down to the view of a lush blue and green planet.
His dreams flowed with the memories of his dark past and the event that had led him down the road of the Dark Side of the Force and meeting the Force Spirits that had forever changed his destiny from that day and on, he remembered the day of his ultimate betrayal and banishment at the hands of someone he once viewed as a surrogate mother who had in the end had only sought power to maintain her new position.
He had seen many of his so-called friends turn on him and embrace their hatred and anger and vented upon him as if he was the demon that he carried since the day he had been born, an event that he had absolutely no choice in whatsoever.
He still remembered the day he'd gone to see Tsunade about his future and that of the teammate he had attempted to save but had failed to do from the villages greatest threat who had done everything in his power to obtain the boy no matter the cost in the end, that cost had been making everyone think that the boy in question was now dead and that he was responsible.
The older woman was clearly nursing a hangover and had been drinking heavily the night before and was in no mood to entertain anyone or anything at the moment, and yet at this moment she was unaware that she would be setting in motion the great change on this world by the actions she was about to take.
And yet for some reason she seemed different which the alcohol had no bearing on.
He walked up to the desk careful to not antagonize her as her punches and strength were no laughing matter and came upon a document of his name parted on it only to discover what it was intended for, his curiosity had turned to horror as he read the clauses and punishments for simply completing a mission and realized that there was much more going on behind the scenes that he could not see but still the pain and anguish from what she had done to him had hurt him more than any assassination technique could ever do.
His thoughts raced, 'Is she doing all of this to me because of Sasuke, it's not fair that I should suffer because of the fourth's actions to save these ungrateful people. Why should I suffer because of them and the fact that they cannot let go of their hatred, I have deceived myself for far too long in thinking that there is a chance for me here, I was a fool there is no hope in these people's hearts anymore. I have bled for them for far too long with nothing in return and there is no more point in staying here.'
It was at this moment that Tsunade was coherent enough to sense that someone was in the room with her only to see the young man she saw as a younger brother standing before her desk holding a piece of parchment that would decide his fate, but because of the effects of the alcohol and of her hangover had worn off and she was still not thinking clearly and instead of trying to comfort him she responded with anger and hatred and snatched the document from his hands not even bothering to read the document that was in her hands and in a fit of rage placed her official seal upon the document not caring that she had just destroyed whatever little hope the young man before her would have for many years to come and was the event that started his path down the Dark Side.
After stamping the document she called in several of her personal bodyguards the ANBU who were shocked at what they saw on the document as well but followed their orders as they begin to drag the young man out of the office who could only yell out the question of why and was everything on that document true.
To his utter dismay her response was a simple, "Yes, now get the hell out of my office you little brat."
By the banishment order , he knew that if he stayed his life would be in tremendous amounts of danger forcing him to flee as soon as the deed had been done and the parchment was placed in his hands.
He had read the document and knew that for some reason she wished him to suffer even more in the future by forcing him to return to this hellish place despite the fact that every person here would know his darkest secret that he had no control over and would do everything in their power to make his life and even more unbearable than it had already been, what was worse for him was that he could not even enter the Land of Fire for the next three years without the threat of death upon him.
He also knew that he could not stay in one place for too long as there were more than one group of people that would want nothing more than either have his death or to control him as their own personal weapon, it'd taken him more than a month but he'd eventually reached a what some called The Lost Era.
What few of the people of the Hidden Leaf knew was that he was aware of his mother's ancestry, he was aware of his ancestors connection to this place and the stories that went with them.
He had read many stories from his ancestors journals that many would never willingly enter this place and thought, 'What a perfect place to hide.'
One of the stories had said that a great and terrible battle had taken place in the sky with flying ships who were from beyond the stars, it was even said that a dark order had found a new home here.
It was upon entering this place that he discovered that it was a in fact a large graveyard and battle site with strange metal buildings seemed as if they had once moved among the skies themselves upon entering several of the strange silent metal structures he discovered how many strange things were inside it and it was here that he encountered them, both the Light and Dark Side of the Force flowed strong here waiting for the day of their return and it just so happens that this boy who had been denied so much in his life.
He was then suddenly handed what some can only be called one of the greatest powers in the known galaxy.
The spirits themselves have debated amongst themselves and ultimately decided upon how to not only approach the boy but also how to train him as they had seen many events that would lead the boy down both the Dark and the Light path ultimately leaving him in balance, the darkest among them decided it was his turn to train the boy down the path of the Dark Side.
It was a strange way to do the right thing but it had to be done for the events that were to would soon become a part of what would allow him to grow like no other person in this land would ever would and to receive and return the Force to this would once more.
XX
Naruto had finished what he could only describe as his initial search of this ship's bridge only to find two rather strange looking corpses that had been at the time of their death or the crash of this vessel had been engaged in mortal combat against one another, he had found no other bodies in this section and decided to at least give them some form of dignity and had taken the bodies outside to give them a proper burial and it but kept their strange looking cylinder weapons for himself as he had seen that they still worked and realized they could come in quite handy against his many enemies.
It was at this moment that he felt a strong presence in turned to see what he could only describe as a ghost of a rather evil looking old man standing before him with a curious look upon his face while at the same time the men seem to have an aura of fear and hatred and even evil about him that was tempered with a calm collected nature, it was clear to him while this man had once done great evil he had also played a part in some kind of great event that had set a new balance of power.
Naruto however felt no fear of this spirit and in fact felt something else, the desire to learn everything could and let his anger and hatred finally found a voice before it destroyed him in the process of trying to control it endlessly.
The spirit before him nodded and then introduced itself, "Hello young one, allow me to introduce myself I am Darth Sidious of the Sith and what would your name be young one?"
"Naruto Uzumaki, are you going to hurt me?" the boy asked him.
The spirit could only laugh at this question, "No my boy I have no intention of hurting you, in fact I have a proposal for you."
"What kind of proposal?" Naruto asked him now quite curious in all honesty.
"Both I and 3 more spirits wish to train you in our arts, I have elected to begin your training first." The spirit said to him with no deception in his voice at all for the young boy to hear unlike others he had met in the past.
The spirit could see the worry and concern in the boy's face and eyes, "I can assure you that to be trained by us is your choice and yours alone young one, so I ask you this, become our apprentice learn to use the Force starting with the Dark Side and then the light and you will achieve a power greater than any ninja."
Naruto was honestly surprised and yet still skeptical as he asked another question, "Can I truly learn to use this power?"
"Not from a ninja!" Sidious said to him.
Naruto felt a great power come over him and went down on his knees before the spirit and said, "I pledge myself to your teachings and that of my future teachers."
"Good, good Young one the Force is strong with you, a powerful Sith you will become and one day a Jedi as well, Hence forth you shall be known as Darth… Maelstrom."
Naruto bowed to his new master and said, "Thank you My Master."
The spirit smiled and motioned for him to follow as he said, "Rise Lord Maelstrom, I have much to teach you and so little time to do so in and there are things happening in this land and I believe that you will play a very important role in events yet to come."
XX
A young girl with long blonde hair had just entered the Hidden Leaf Village to finally meet her godmother who's now the village leader when she suddenly felt a strange sensation like none other than knew that instantly something had gone wrong was someone important to her.
XX Seven months later the Lost Era
A young woman wearing a white armor with blue markings upon it that had been obviously worked on to fit her frame walked along with her three companions, the other three companions were also young females but each as different as they could be.
At the moment they were currently leaving their forest home and heading into what was known as the Sand Graveyard which held the remnants of their ancestors arrival upon this planet, very rarely did anyone ever enter this area and were more afraid of the stories of ghosts that seemed to walk this area.
Their current destination however was the edge of the Sand Graveyard where they were hoping to find the necessary parts to help their friend Akima Fett out as she needed help repairing her vessel and the potential parts that were known to litter this area.
However they were surprised to find that there was almost no parts laying around as there had once been, Bow the young woman wearing a blue and white armor was honestly surprised realizing that something had indeed happened here but the question was what?
Akima was also surprised as they had found parts here before but realized that someone had come through here with a fine tooth comb, and it had been to recently.
Mavis and her sister Quorra were also surprised and left the area looking like the parts had never been there before and they have been here many times before, "What is going on in this area there were plenty of parts lying around the last time we here?"
Quorra nodded her head in agreement as she began to observe the area in more detail as she then spoke, "It's been eight months since we were last here sister, but it looks like someone has been here and recently by the look of things."
Akima turned to Bow and then spoke, "I thought that no one came out this far unless they absolutely have to Bow?"
"I think someone new is here, we needed to press on and quietly all of us!" Bow said to them as she motioned for them to follow her deeper into the woods and ultimately into the Send Graveyard itself.
The 4 women made their way into the Sand Graveyard without attracting any kind of attention from whoever this new person was, after only a few minutes they eventually came upon a large clearing that was full of activity for the lack of a better word.
All around the area appeared to be a young man who was busy salvaging and repairing anything he could get his hands on, much to their surprise they noticed just how many of them there were which were too numerous for any one person to be unless they were a ninja of this world.
Even with the sheer number of this young man they were also surprised to see many different droids both the appeared to be from the Old Republic and much to their surprise several different models of battle droids working together, in the center was a black and dark orange Jedi Starfighter that was of the later designs which become the model for the Tie Fighters of the Empire currently being worked on by a black and orange astrometric droid and a another version of the young man but also someone they had not seen before with having an era of power about him.
Naruto and Anakin were quite aware of their visitors and yet continue to work however they have let several of the others know they were there so that the two could meet these people and determine their motives, from their hiding spots they were truly surprised at the amount of activity going on and had to admit that seeing this many parts it would help them and Akima out in their village greatly.
However right at that moment they then heard what sounded like weapons being leveled at their backs and could only let out a curse, they then turned around coming face-to-face with several battle droids and many copies of the young man who had what looked like a Lightsaber in his hand that had yet to be activated.
The two young girls were absolutely surprised by how he moved and admitted to themselves that he must've already been trained as a warrior as he then brought out one single cylinder and ignited the blue blade, the musical like sound of the weapon conveyed a sense of both wonder and danger as he then motioned for them to follow him as the droids kept an eye on them as well.
Eventually the group of women were brought just before the Jedi Starfighter as the group of young men in question continued to work, Naruto then tightened one final circuit on the starfighter as its systems came back to life once more.
The small droid then seem to let out a happy squeal as the blonde put his hand on the top of its dome and finally spoke in almost angelic tone, "Good work D-4, you were right master Anakin it was just a simple flow problem and now she's purring like a kitten."
It was at this moment that Bow recognized his face as well as the name, "It can't be, there is no way your Gen. Skywalker... That was almost 200 years ago during the Clone Wars, it's not possible."
Anakin was honestly surprised that they had recognized him at all and was also surprised they had not associated him with his time as Darth Vader the Sith Lord, there was also something about this young woman that spoke and reminded him of Capt. Rex.
Anakin then proceeded to walk over to her and gave her a once over, "Was Capt. Rex one of your ancestors?"
Bow was honestly surprised by the statement, "Yes, but who are you there's no way you can be the General."
Much to their surprise a small and very old Jedi then appeared glowing blue, the small being then walked forward and stood next to Anakin and Naruto and then spoke, "Yes strong with the Force you all are, trying to understand you are hhm."
Akima Fett had only rarely been told she had a connection with the Force and yet was never strong enough to be trained as a Jedi but it had aided her in many of her adventures for misadventures for that matter, she was so shocked to see the ghost of one of the greatest Jedi Masters of all time standing before her and that she actually dropped her helmet.
They could not come to any coherent words to say.
Quorra tried opening and closing her eyes only to still see the tiny spectral Jedi was still standing there with a look of amusement, she then pointed at him and could only mutter, "It's a ghost."
Yoda could only let out a laugh, "Yes a ghost I may be, but one with the force am I now... Only a small time we have here in this world, not made of muscle are we but luminous beings we are."
Naruto could not help but laugh as he then walked over and pointed to his masters as he then spoke, "the first time I met them I was scared to death but at least I was smart enough to listen to them, now I've become something more than either the Jedi or the Sith could ever become... Master Yoda said I am a thing of balance and I still have much to learn but also much To Pass on as Well."
Mavis was still trying to piece together what was going on as well, "But how are they here and why does Gen. Skywalker have a physical form?"
Yoda now had a smile on his face as he then spoke, "Truly wonderful the minds of a young person is, Naruto here was trained as a ninja of this world before coming here... Hurt he was but also strong with the Force as well, trained him we did and for a time with his Shadow Clones a temporary body he can give us for a time to help him and guide him."
The four young women were surprised at what they had just learned and realized they were looking at two legendary figures, right at this moment they then heard the sounds of gears and motors as a rather ornate and an extremely dangerous looking protocol droid enter the area.
The droid took one look at them and instantly brought out a blaster and ended right at them only to be stopped by Naruto himself, "No Prime they are not a danger."
The protocol droid now known as Prime simply lowered his weapon and then spoke, "I thought you were in danger master, if anything were to happen to you my behavioral core would simply malfunction."
"It's all right Prime they mean no harm so you don't have to worry about doing anything to them, it's not like they're the ones who betrayed me." Naruto said was a bit of sadness at the end.
"I understand master and I hope to destroy those meat bags one day for what they did to you it would make my behavioral core glow with excitement, I also see that master Anakin is here as well but please remember his clone body can only take so much before he returns to the force." Prime said as he still eyed the 4 women with a cautious attitude.
"You may just get that chance Prime, we both know one day they'll be coming for me and the others of my kind." Naruto said.
The small orange and black astrometric droid then quickly rolled up with what looked like panic in his movements, Prime was the first droid to begin translating, "It would appear that one of our reconnaissance droids has picked up a rather large seagoing fleet of warships landing on the beach, he also says he can give us a look at what they are up to?"
Naruto quickly turned to R4-D4 and nodded his head as the droid then began to play a hologram of this meeting, "Have we located the village yet?"
"Yes sir, it's blocking our path to the Lost Lands so no matter what we'll have to go through them Sir." One of the other men in the projection said.
"Good, kill anyone who gets in your way I don't care if their civilians are not... No witnesses that comes straight from Lord Chronos himself." The commander said .
"What of the resistance leaders we have on board?" one of the soldiers asked.
"When this is over will take them back and execute them and their resistance will die with them."
Bow Akima Quorra and Mavis were absolutely stunned by what they had just heard as Quorra then spoke, "There's no way we can hold off a invading force of that size for very long, and there's no way we will make it back in time on foot."
Bow quickly began to check all of her equipment and gear just as Akima did as well, "Don't count the village out just yet, but you're right about one thing without some serious help I don't think we're going to make it and let's not forget that they have Akima's ship there as well but it's in no condition to help."
"Then we will help you!" Naruto said as he then motioned for all of his clones and droids ready to depart, R4 quickly used his thrusters to get back into the Jedi Starfighter readying it for flight.
Bow was honestly surprised by his statement but then was tapped on the shoulder by Prime who pointed towards a republic dropship that was being outfitted with enough weapons for a battalion, she then shouted so that everyone could hear her, "Get on board the dropship."
Akima was already on board with all of her gear ready for action and set in the pilot seat, "I'll drive, everyone hold on here we go."
End of C1
Development Diary 1.
This first chapter originally started out as a simple rewrite of the original story but as time progressed I realized I could make the new version of the story that I had been playing around with for some time, and then I did that preview of this which was heavily inspired by the new Battlefront game and gave me new ideas of where to take the story.
One of the first things I did was to change some of the aspects of the story and also to realize I never really explained or even spent any time on the place called the lost era or as some of the outside world knows it as the lost lands, there was also fact that I brought so many Jedi into the preview story and I did not have any time to really set up some of the other characters it just felt rushed and plus I had to correct so many mistakes because I was rushing it.
Because I used the first chapter from the original story to help with this rewrite I was able to keep certain things from the original story and yet take it in a completely new direction, one of the other things they did is that Sasuke is now thought to be dead and this is created in a large amount of backlash for him in the village which is completely different from the original story where he was brought back and this makes his banishment and also his fall to the dark side first much more understandable and in way believable.
And while I like the original story this is the one I feel I will work on more and luckily I was able to and that particular story in a way that was similar to the movies and sets but at the same time it wasn't as satisfying to both me and some of the readers, plus I had to set up certain characters as we went on an original notice there are no Jedi characters coming to the world just yet and that will start on purpose because they'll be one of the events that will change certain things happening in the elemental nations but at the same time it will be one we had in the previous story where you have mostly arrogant Jedi to contend with.
I would like to hear what you all think of this new version of the story, please read and review.
