I'm Watching You
Story summary: As part of 18 year old Max Pedrad's leadership duties, he must train the transfers for Dauntless. A certain Erudite transfer catches the eye of his younger sister Natalie and Max must deal with his baby sister growing up.
Chapter 1
Max POV
I look at the roof and saw 15 initiates: 10 Dauntless born and 5 transfers with three know it all's and two smartmouths. I don't know why Dad had me train the transfers except that he doesn't want Hana to train them because she is carrying his first grandchild, my little boy.
"Welcome to Dauntless," I said. "To enter, you must jump. Whose first?"
"I am," an Erudite said.
"What's your name, initate?" I asked.
"Andrew, Andrew Prior," the initate said.
"Well, Andrew, what made you decide to go from Erudite to Dauntless?" I asked. "Don't all Priors stay in Erudite?"
"Normally, yes, but I fell in love with a Dauntless born, so I decided to follow her to Dauntless," Andrew said. "My twin sister Jeanine is with me as well. We been together since birth, so we decided to transfer together."
"Who is the Dauntless born?" I asked.
"Natalie, Natalie Pedrad,' Andrew said.
"Natalie is my baby sister, so I am watching you," I said. "If you do anything that results you hurting my sister, I will toss your ass into the chasm."
"Yes, sir," Andrew said and then he jumped into Dauntless.
Nobody will hurt my baby sister.
Very short introduction. There will be more coming.