Okay people of fanfiction this is my first story so feel free to criticize or enjoy my story. Reviews inspire my writing so if you want a chapter faster I'm afraid you would need to review. Let me know what point of views you would rather hear. I'm making this story different, and if it becomes too cliché let me know immediately.
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Max's Point of View
"Maxie, you'll understand soon why I had to leave," Ari said to me. "Ari, please don't leave me alone!" I shouted as he walked out those doors to the orphanage.
I woke up from that awful nightmare come true that kept reoccurring in my head since he left. It had been two years, yet it was still fresh in my mind. I think the reason I was thinking about it more now was because I was finally leaving the orphanage myself. I was leaving, because I had been adopted, while my brother left the day he turned eighteen without me. I am barely fifteen. I don't even know the family that's taking me away from here. The caretaker told me they were a nice family with two daughters. That's all the information she had given me. I was now packing up my few belongings, since they were to be arriving in a few minutes. The other teens kept looking at me. It wasn't common for teenagers to be adopted. Most families want small children or babies, not troubled teenagers. This family must be a piece of work to want me. "Maximum Ride!" I heard my name being called by the caretaker. I guess the family is here.
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