Prologue
It's funny that she picked Dauntless… I vaguely remember seeing her and her family with my dad while I hid in my room hiding the bruises my father gave me. I didn't know her name. But she intrigued me. In school before my aptitude test, she was always watching the Dauntless jump from the trains to school. That was all I knew about her. Now here I am reaching for her, the first jumper. I tell her to pick her name because she won't have another opportunity to choose again.
What do you guys think? Should I continue?
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