hey this is my first story so please give me some positive feedback

but i do not own the characters or anything else.

The Blocks-

Massie: A new girl. Her sister Claire just moved from Florida to Westchester. She is more Fashionable than Claire. She cares about the way she looks. So she is just not as shocked about people staring at her when she is walking through the hall ways. But is being followed by Derrick but he offers to do anything to but she But what will happen when she is torn between liking the person that doesn't like her back? Will she start to like Derrick after everything he has done for her? Or will it be just another disappointment to her love life

Claire: A new girl. Her sister is Massie. Came to Westchester from Florida. She is not as into fashion as Massie. But she doesn't care about the way she dresses or what people think of her. But she is shocked at all the people looking at her. But what catches her eye is a guy with green and blue eyes. Cam. But then she finds out what a jerk he is, from her friend Layne. She is totally into soccer. She was always number one at her old school. But will all that change when she gets to BOCD? But will she stay away from Cam when she keeps being partnered up with him for every class? Will she fall for Cam's charm? Or will she just go out with Josh?

Cam: a player. Gets everything he wants, or so he thought. He gets anyone he wants and right now he wants the new girl, with Blonde and piercing blue eyes dressed differently. He wants the girl with the blue eyes, Claire. But will he figure out Claire wants someone who isn't a jerk? Will he pretend to be someone he isn't? Will he give up everything he has just to be with Claire? Or will he even show his true colors?

Derrick: not a player like Cam, but Cam's best friend. Derrick used to like Cam when he was nicer. He and Cam are both very into soccer, that is where he met Cam. But he finds himself into Massie. And he will do anything he can to get with her. And finds himself changing who he is for Massie. But will he realize that he will get Massie by just being himself? Or will he never understand that he has changed? but will he give up being friends with Cam just be to be with Massie?