AN. . .hey, i haven't written anything in a while so i want you to let me know what you think. . .this is my first time wrinting a story like this so please leave me reviews or messages for any advice or ideas. . .let me know what you think people. . .
Preface
"I do," I promised in a sure, knowing voice.
The beautiful man slipped the dainty little ring on my third finger. I felt only happiness as he bent down to kiss me. As I felt his lips on mine, gently moving, I thought, "God, I love this man!"
He leaned down to kiss me again. I looked into his eyes and wondered how this man could choose me, out of every other girl in London. He pressed his lips softly to mine once, twice, a third time and then as he went back down for the fourth kiss he roughly shoved his large, moist tongue into my mouth, fighting with me for dominance of my own mouth. I tried weakly to fight him, I wanted him to win, I wanted him to make every part of me his. This is what I needed, wanted from the first time I saw him. I stared up at him and saw my dreams coming to.
"I love you!" I
I awoke screaming, that nightmare scared me to death. To think of marrying him, of loving him. Ugh, the thought was nauseating. My mind raced for the meaning.
So, what did you think, should i finish it or should i let the idea go???. . .write those reviews for me people it takes like maybe five minutes out of your day. . .
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beautiful-bella
P.S. in this intro Bella is 16 okay, just to clear up some confusion. . .oh and yes, everyone is human in this story, well please review. . .