TO IMMORTALS, LOVE LASTS FOREVER

HIYA PEEPS!! YAOI-LOVER13 HERE, BUT YOU CAN CALL ME….drum roll BJ!! (Or just Billie) So yeah. This is my first story to post, but I have one written on paper in my binder ( People thought I was emo 'cause I stayed in my room for hours at a time to write it) and it shall be posted sometime I'm feeling productive…..

Deidara: "When is that going to be, un?"

Me: "SHUDDUP Dara-kun!!"

Any-who, it'll be called: An Explosive Love

Dara-kun: "That has me, right, yeah?"

Me: "Yes it does!! God job, have a cookie!! It's a love story!!"

Dara-kun: Chokes on cookie "WHAT, UN?!"

Me: "Yeah…."

Hidan walks in

Hidan: "Can you get on with my fucking story?!"

Me: "Sure, Hidan-kun."

Oh, by the way, I'm kinda making this up as I go along….. So Here It Is!!

PS: My view on vampires is that of Stephanie Meyer, so if you haven't read Twilight, or any in that saga, please do so now. In short: Vampires do not burn in the sun, they sparkle. They are pale, strong, extremely beautiful, and have high, beautiful voices like tinkling bells. They do not sleep. AT ALL. And the only way to break their skin, is with vampire fangs. Their senses are far better than humans'. Even better than a dogs'. They are extremely fast, and strong. Anything else…. Nope, I think that's it!!

TO Immortals, Love Lasts Forever

& FLASHBACK& (Year:1598)

Sigh "I wish this wasn't so boring….." A girl around the age of twenty sighed, as she finished off the last enemy

Shinobi. "Guess I'd better get back to Konoha." She said, wiping blood off her katana. Suddenly, she felt a sharp pain in her chest, just below her heart. It was agony, and when she looked down, there was an enemy blade through her chest. "At least I didn't fail Master completely…." She heard one of the enemies she thought was dead whisper. 'Damn, I thought I killed him!!' She thought before her world went dark.

TIME SKIP

3 DAYS

Her eyes opened slowly, and she noticed everything was extremely clear. 'Where am I? How long have I been out?'

she thought. 'All I can remember is…the ninja stabbing me…. then the world went black….then…excruciating pain, like fire in my veins! I'm glad that's over.' She took a moment to look around her. It looked like she was on an operating table, but the room was like a library, or an office. Suddenly, she heard foot steps, but they were a ways away. But the door opened, and in walked a very pale, (and extremely handsome) man.

"Hello, good to see you're awake! My name Is Carlisle. I suppose you'd like me to explain. See, three days ago, I found you in the forest, a katana through your chest, and with a punctured lung. You would have surely died, had I not found you. I am a doctor, and I have saved your life the only way I could. You may not believe me now, but you are now a vampire." He went on to explain what she had become. "There is also a possibility you have special powers." He said. "they sometimes pop up." he added. "There is one rule you must always follow, or be killed. That is: You must never let any mortal know what you are, or about our kind. Do you understand?" He asked.

"Of course. And thank you, for everything. I believe you fully. I wonder, where you just thinking about a fire? And just two questions: What is this burning in my throat? And, is there any alternative to killing humans?" she asked curiously.

"Yes I was thinking that, how'd you know?" he asked "Oh and very good questions," He said. "The dry burning is actually your thirst. Actually, I was going hunting today if you hadn't woken. I don't feed on humans, I actually only hunt animals. And there's the answer to your second question. I'll take you with me if you'd like." He offered.

" I don't know. to me, it sounded like you were saying it…." she explained "And y-yes please. I'd like to learn your lifestyle, and, could I please get a change of clothes? And a mirror m-maybe?" She asked shyly.

"Sure, give me two seconds." with that he disappeared, and reappeared in less than two seconds, with his arms filled with clothes. "Okay, now I'll leave you to get dressed, and then I'll bring in a mirror." he left the room again and she got dressed.

"Okay." she said, and he walked in, pushing a full length mirror, faced away from her.

"I must warn you, your appearance has changed. Try not to overreact, for that could lead to trouble." By now she was extremely curious. He turned the mirror around, and she gasped. She looked extremely beautiful, in every aspect, except her eyes. The irises had turned bright red.

"Wow. This is amazing!! But, my eyes aren't going to stay like this, are they?" She asked.

"No. If you stick to my diet of only animals, 'Vegetarian', I call it," He paused to chuckle lightly, "Within a year, they will turn a golden honey color, and darken when you get thirsty. In about two weeks of no feeding, they'll be flat black. If you were to take the original diet, they would stay red, and darken the same way, going bright red after feeding. So let's go hunt." He suggested.

"Okay." With that, they left, and she figured out she was at his house, deep in the forest.

& END FLASHBACK& (Year:2008)

She had stayed with him as a good friend for about three years. Now, she lived in Konoha, an ANBU Captain, in a small apartment near Naruto's. She was the strongest and most renowned ninja (besides the Sannin) in the Fire Country, but no one knew her secret. They sent her on missions alone after her first three teams died, while she was the only one back, and without a scratch on her.

She and Carlisle figured out that she could read peoples minds, and that she was extremely fast.

She seemed to be getting extremely bored with her life, and moved as a ninja from village to village. Her only allegiance was to herself, and she would help people that needed it. 'Jeese if this boredom keeps up, I'm joining Akatsuki!!' She thought, and nodded to herself.

--AT AKATSUKI HEADQUARTERS --

"ZETSU!!" called the creepy voice of the Akatsuki leader, Pein. The bi-polar plant man formed in front of him immediately.

"Yes, Leader-sama?" Zetsu's two halves said, in perfect synchronization.

"I want you to retrieve this girl," he said, handing the plant man a file. "She is of great use to this organization."

"Hai, Leader-sama." They said , again, in synchronization. with that the two toned member left. when in the main room he opened the file , to show a woman age 21, with golden honey colored eyes, and the most beautiful features he had ever seen. She had black hair down to her butt, and that had dark green, ice blue, and cherry red streaks. Her bangs went down to her chin, covering the right side of her face. She was extremely pale, and she had sharp, angular features.

where it said NAME, there was a small note:

Goes by many names, most commonly by Chishio Touzoku. That is what you shall address her by, unless told otherwise by her.

It went along to say she was currently in Konohagakure. Inside was another hand written note. It read:

If she doesn't come peacefully, return to HQ immediately, and I'll go after her myself. DO NOT try to fight her!!

It was Pein's handwriting. Zetsu left immediately.

--

That's chapter 1!!

Hidan: "Why wasn't I in this one? I'm the fucking main character!!"

Me: "If you don't shut up, you won't be in the next chapter, and I'll turn it into a Zetsu story!!"

Zetsu walks in at his name "What about me?" "Why the hell are you talking about me?!"

Me: "Hidan won't shut up, so I'm threatening that the REAL main character will fall for you!!"

Hidan: "…." silence

Me: "Hidan? Are you okay? Talk to me!! OMG the immortal died!! You can talk now!!

Hidan: "I didn't die, I just want this story about me!! Where's Deidara?"

Deidara walks in with mouth full of chocolate muffled by chocolate "….Huh?"

Me: " OMG CHOCOLATE!!" chases Dara-kun for chocolate

Hidan: " Had to show her chocolate, didn't you? Oh well….turns to readers Thanx for reading!! Billie appreciates Reviews and constructive criticism, but flames shall be used to power my attack at you for flaming!! then you shall be sacrificed to the great Jashin-sama!!"

Me: got chocolate and is now totally hyper "NO HE'S KIDDING!! I CAN HANDLE FLAMES!! HIT ME WITH YOUR BEST SHOT, SUCKA!! TEE HEE!! uses deadly serious voice now Really, hit me, I'm immortal."

Zetsu-kun and Dara-kun back away slowly Me: "BUH BYE GUYS!!" waves frantically