Wow people really don't pull any punches, but I respect what some people had to say so I rewrote this chapter because I also wasn't really happy with how it turned out, I also decided not to keep posting it under Grey's Anatomy because I think it'll turn into more of a criminal minds story anyway, so I'm sorry this isn't a new chapter but it had to be done and I should have more for you by tomorrow.

In DC

Two women sat in a restaurant enjoying their dinner and the flow of conversation between them, it was unlike any first date either of them had had before. One, used to people expecting her to be stupid and being spoken down to until she eventually grew tired of it, usually she ended up walking away before the date was even over, unable to deal with the patronising tone and lecherous stares given off by both the men and women she tried to date. The other, born of privilege, was used to being treated like a business deal by people looking to gain a suitable spouse that would help their own status and bank balance, people looking for a trophy, a prize, to brag about to their friends. That was until they found out just how unsuitable it really was and the conversation turned into something more reserved yet polite, because no one really wanted to anger someone with her connections.

"What are you thinking about?" the blonde asked after they had both been quiet for a while.

"How this feels so different to any other date I've ever been on." She smiled, brushing her fingers lightly over the blonde's hand.

"Yeah. I know what you mean; I've never been this comfortable even when neither of us is talking it doesn't feel weird you know."

"I know," the brunette smiled shyly, "So have you decided what you would like for dessert?"

"I was thinking about the chocolate lava cake, but then I noticed the lemon meringue pie and now I have no idea." She grinned, her voice taking on a childlike tone towards the end.

"Well I was planning to have the lava cake so how about you get the lemon one and if you are really nice to me I'll share with you."

"That sounds like a deal I could make... And I'm always nice to you." She smirked, "I mean I was nice enough to say yes when you stood in my doorway mumbling about wanting to take me here wasn't I?" She laughed at the shocked look on the usually composed woman's face.

"Hey that's not nice, I was nervous. I mean we've been friends for almost two years and I only just found out you are bisexual and that didn't mean you would actually be interested in me!" Her voice which had become higher than usual was doing a terrible job of hiding her embarrassment. "And you didn't have to say yes, I could have brought one of the guys here... to your favourite restaurant, I probably would have gotten teased less that way as well."

"That may be so, but you wouldn't have had nearly as much fun and there would have been no one to kiss you goodnight at the end." The blonde smirked, trying not to laugh.

Looking across the table, the brunette struggled to form words at the thought of getting to kiss her date, "I...um... yeah I don't really have a response for that." The woman blushed, tinting her usually pale skin a light shade of pink while she looked down at the dessert which had just been placed in front of her.

After dinner, the two left the restaurant hand in hand choosing to walk through the park rather than end their time together. As the passed the playground the brunette pulled the blonde towards the swings sitting her down in one before taking the one next to it. Neither of them said much the blonde stared up at the stars while the brunette watched her, swaying softly.

When the blonde began to swing higher and higher the brunette jumped off her own swing going to stand in front of her.

"Jump." She said

"No, I can't. It's too high." The woman shrieked.

"Yes you can, I'll even catch you if you want."

"The blonde looked straight into the other woman's eyes seeing the sincerity shine through, she jumped, "EMILY!" she shrieked again as she sailed through the air landing right in front of the brunette who grabbed her around the waist to steady her, "I got you Jen." She whispered just as the blonde's phone began to ring.

In Seattle

Two women finished their shifts at work, for once they had the same hours which meant that they got to come in and leave together for once instead of just passing each other by. In the locker room they got slightly distracted as they changed into their regular clothes, pausing halfway through for a quick kiss... or ten.

"Come on. I really want to get home." The blonde said as she pulled a DVD out of her locker that had not been there when she arrived for work, she frowned putting it into her bag to look at when she got home.

"Well then let's get going, we just have to pick up Sofia since Mark got called into surgery." Her wife said, taking her hand and leading her out of the locker room towards the day care.

"How about pizza for dinner? I'm pretty fried." The brunette spoke as they waited for the elevator.

"You mean I don't get any of Callie's famous chicken picatta after my long day of saving children?" the blonde whined childishly.

"Not unless you're the one making it." The brunette replied.

"Humph... ok I could eat a pizza." She replied skipping ahead of her wife to be able to get the first round of cuddles. "Where's my baby girl?" she asked the woman in charge as she scanned the room.

"I thought you had already taken her, she hasn't been here since I started my shift 45 minutes ago." She explained as Callie came through the door.

"No Mark dropped her off before his surgery; she is supposed to be here." Arizona said her voice getting higher as she began to panic before she set off searching the rooms for the baby. "Sofia!" she shouted/whispered trying not to wake the other sleeping children. "Sof!"

Callie stood at reception frozen, not understanding why her baby girl wasn't there before she pulled out her phone. "Mark! Did you take Sofia?"

"No, I dropped her off about three hours ago, I'm still in surgery." Mark paused, "Callie what's going on?"

"The woman in charge, um Sara, says she hasn't seen Sof since she got her almost an hour ago. Mark she's not here."

"I'm coming Cal I'll be there soon."

By the time Mark arrived with Derek and Teddy the entire day care had been checked and Sara was on the phone with the woman who she had taken over from.

"... yes Sofia Torres." The woman looked down, "Yes ok I'll let you know."

"She says Sofia was here when she did her final check about 15 minutes before she left, that was 5 minutes before I arrived."

"Derek scanned the room, his eyes passing over his own daughter sleeping safely next to Little Tuck, "Can you check the security cameras?" he asked suddenly.

"Uh, um yeah we can. Hold on."

"Ok you guys check the video, Teddy and I will go check with the security at the entrance." Derek said before leaving quickly.

The remaining group, Callie, Arizona, Mark and Sara watched the video as it rewound back to the moment where they saw a man get Sofia's attention crouching by the desk before he picked her up and crept away, keeping his face hidden from the camera. The group stood motionless, unwilling to believe what they had just witnessed before Arizona was struck by a thought and pulled the unlabelled DVD that she had found out of her bag.

Anyway let me know what you think and if I should continue...