This Is My First ToonTown Story. Please Review It! this is a story where toontown colides with reality. in this story i am called Aryeh my real name. anyway... here is the story: Once upon a time i was taking a vacation to disney-world with my mom, my dad, my older sister Aviva who is 10 years old and almost 11 i am 8 and almost 9, and my little sister netanya who just turned 4. my older sister quit toontown, and netanya isint old enough to play. so i am the only cog-fighter in the family. at the park, we had a fun time. we went on rollar-coasters ok..i didint come, and we did a lot of other stuff. soon we were in the hotel, wich happen to has a room full of computers with toontown on them. i played on one for awhile. i was walking around doing toontasks. all of a meanwhile in mexico, it was baseball season. one kid it a ball out of the whole field! but it went out of the country. it went faster and faster, into the USA, into florida, into orlando....into disney-world... crashed into the hotel window of the computer room..uh-oh.... CRASH! the baseball broke the screen. and i still saw the cogs it was in daisy-gardens. a name-dropper said "hey... a theme-park! it must be filled with happy people! LETS GO MAKE THEM MISERABLE!!! starting with that guy" he said pointing to me. they starting coming out of the computer screen! i ran away. i knew what was going on. i also knew fighting cogs would be tougher in reality. "how do i stop these things?" i thought as i was running. suddenly a toon came out of the screen. "what the heck is going on here?"
chapter two coming soon! PLEASE REVIEW!!!!