So far I'll be trying to fix some of this story, but enjoy none the less
Tenten Likes Neji, Who recently started Dating Sakura Who eventually falls for Sasuke who They all think is Tenten's boyfriend, but because of the doubt in Ino, Shikamaru is in a dilemma Stuck with two blonds at the same time! And Naruto's Confession To Hinata But Itachi is just there for a laugh or so he thinks...
Part 1: SakuNeji, ShikaInoTema, NaruHina, SasuTenIta
Part 2: NejiTen,SasuSaku, ShikaIno, NaruHina, ItaTema
You Like Her/ The Date/ Enrolled In School/ Feelings For The New Guy/ Jealousy/ WHAT! New Approach
What's Happening You Like Her?
It was just another day, another morning, another school day. Well so it seemed to be just another day, well that's what you will believe if your naive and don't know that anything can happen. Well yes it was another day, except this one will change the lives of many people as a love spiral begins. Well a kind of love spiral.
Tenten: Brown hair in two buns, nice brown eyes, beautiful, and sort of a tomboy headed to school calmly as she walked along the noisy streets of new York.. She looked up ahead to see two of her friends also walking to school and decides to catch up to them.
They are Rock Lee, and her bests friend who she's had a crush on like since forever Hyuga Neji.
"Hey guys wait up!" she yelled as she caught up with them. Both boys stopped and turned to look at her. She was panting then stood up straight "hey, wazz up" she greeted them like always. It was weird how she always said --wazz up-- cause non of them really used those words and then when she's mad she can really come up with some vulgar slang. She talked weird when she used it which was mainly to cuz people out.
"Hey" they both said in unison, and they continued walking. Neji stold another glance at her he liked her a lot though he would never admit it. He was just to scare to loose their friendship cause a stupid relationship didn't work out. Or what if he told her and she doesn't feel the same and their friendship all of a sudden turns awkward.
The school came to view and they headed to where they meet up with their other friends. Yamanaka Ino,(Blond, Blue eyed can be loud and obnoxious/beuty queen) and her boyfriend Nara Shikamaru (brown Hair and Dark eyed. Then there's his cousin Hyuga Hinata (blue hair and white eyes, and her imbecile boyfriend Uzumaki Naruto(blond, blue eys, big mouth Finally Haruno Sakura (pink haired with green eyes, kind and friendly most of the time, she can be mean and her punches hurt as hell! naturally beutiful.
Well Haruno is also hot and cute, he once had a small crush on her but she was with Gaara. Then they broke up when gaara said he wanted to he was more into his education than wasting his time with her, he had other thingss to worry. Now she's single and has been for some time now. She really doesn't like Lee, unlike him he worships her and the ground she walks on, but it don't matter cause she don't care.
"Yo, wazz popping!" said Tenten as they made their way to them. The girls all crowded around each other. The guys just talked silently waiting for class to start. Soon the bell rang all of them in their group, which is popular, made their way to class as students turned their heads just to get a glimpse of them. But popularity wasn't something they liked or cared for so it was like whatever.
"So wanna go to the mall?" asked Ino to all the girls all of them nodded in agreement. "This time lets take the guys with us!" she said in excitement that the guys heard.
"Where?" the guys asked in unison and all the girls jumped in surprise. Ino winked and shook her finger back and forth.
"Tsk tsk tsk, sorry guys it's a surprise, for after school meet us in the front gates, and don't forget!" she finished off with a glare. The guys looked at each other and shrugged. Their lives where pretty boring anyways. Plus later they had nothing better to do and friday ar home was a drag, so hanging out with the girls should be fun!.
"Class today I will be passing out you math test" said Kurenai "Im so disappointed that most of you did bad" she said and started to call out their names. " Ino, Sakura, Hinata, Tenten" she finished off and started the days lesson. She grabbed a text book and started to write in the board what page to turn to and read from this page to the other and then answere the questions in that particular page.
"Omg...I got thirty percent, mom's gonna kill me" said Ino as she snatched Sakura's test and looked at Sakura's grade " ninety five percent, nerd" she said. Sakura glared and took her paper back.
"What you get Hinata" Sakura asked as she turned to face the shy girl of the group.
"Eighty eight percent" she answered. "Y-you Tenten?" she asked turning to Tenten.
"I got ninety eight, for once" she said with a grin "I studied hard, if I would of failed I'd be kicked out of the soccer team for sure" she said with a sigh. "Thanks for helping me study, Sakura" Sakura smiled at her.
"Your welcome" she said. Then all brought out their Science notebook were they were to take notes on what they read. Then a separete sheet of paper to write and answer the questions and turn in by the end of that class period.
They all smiled at eachother and they began to read and take notes of the lesson Kurenai had giving them to complete. It was all boring they where starting to learn how to find the Surface Area Of Prims and Cylinders, nad then about how to count the sides since they are 3D shapes and to solve surface area for pyramids and cones. Yep, Geometry math was hard! and not only that, boring! But they have to take it cause it's a requirement for college.
The girls walked out the class and begun going down the stairs since their last class was at the third floor. They were just glad they didn't get the fifth floor like all the guys did, it would have been mortifying. That's when, Kimiko, from the soccer team comes along with Shelsey and Myra.
"Yo, Ten, we've got practice today" announced Kimiko she's boyish and long brown hair and blue eyes one of Tenten's home girls from back in the day when she was in a different place with all her other home girls and her home boys, and her twin she misses all of them her old gang though no one really knows much about her. Ok back to the story. Tenten looked at them confused.
"We do, I thought we didn't have practice until Friday" Tenten said a bit disappointed cause she wasn't going to be able to go to the mall with her friends.
"Coach added a day" said Myra, she's got long blond hair she's a bit girly with attitude and has golden brownish yellow eyes.
"Come Tenten we've got to run three laps around the field then start practice till six" said Shelsey she has brown hair and baby blue eyes. Tenten nodded and turned to her friends.
"Guess I wont be going with you guys, I'll catch you later alright" she said and left with her team mates. Just then came the guys and watched as Tenten went with the other girls that are from the soccer team.
"Were is she going" asked Naruto.
"Soccer practice" all the girls said in unison. The guys looked at each other then at the girls. ' see ya later Tenten' neji thought as he watched her leave then the other girls started to speak.
"Should we go with out her?" they asked. Sakura nodded.
"No, lets go see her practice it ends at six we could have a sleep over at Hinata's house if that's alright with you, Hinata?" Sakura suggested. All of them nodded in agreement.
"Y-yeah why not" said Hinata as she agreed to have the sleep over at her house. They turned to the guys to see if they would want to agree with this new plan.
"Sure" the guys said and all of them headed towards the field. 'Guess i spoke to soon. damn' thought Neji. They sat down at the benches and looked around they spotted Tenten already in her practice uniform. She kicked the ball lightly in place as she picked it up with her foot and began to bounce it up and down with ease. Then she kicked it to Kimiko.
The practice game began as Kimiko kicked it to Myra. To another girl. Shoot in the goal, stopped by Gina. They watched their practice till six.
"See you guys.." said Tenten as she stepped out of the locker rooms finally dressed in her own clothes. She was still sweaty and had fun playing. She specially liked it when she saw neji staring at her. It was the up part of her day.
"Hey, Tenten! We're having a sleep over at Hinata's. Coming" said Ino. She sweat dropped.
"Really !" she exclaimed "But, I'm all sweaty and dirty from practice." she finish saying looking a bit embarrassed cause the guys were there and they heard what she said!.
"Who cares" said Naruto "us guys are always like that!" he said all care free as if he was proud of smelling like sweat all day. god, guys really are sometimes immature.
"Bet that" said Tenten. They all laughed at what she said. Weird. On another hand maybe in her child hood time she did spend to much time with her twin brother.
"Ah, Tenten you can take a shower at my home" said Hinata, "and I will lend you some clothes" Tenten nodded.
"Thanks, Hinata, but no girly stuff" she said. Everyone sweat dropped she was so much like a tomboy. So much bad words in her language. Maybe they should teach her to be a lady on of this days, Yeah. Right.
They all headed towards Hinata's home which was a huge for a house. Tenten was led to the shower, given a shirt and some shorts to change into. She didn't have parent but knew her older brother will be checking up in her soon.
Meanwhile...
"Sakura?"
"Yes, Neji"
"I wanna ask you something" he said. He looked to the side and she knew he was nervous and a bit embarrassed. She wondered why. Tenten had come out of the bathroom by that time and saw Neji and Sakura standing in the hall way alone. She stopped and hid when she heard Sakura say 'yes, Neji'. She knew she shouldn't over hear and it was wrong, but when it came to Nei she wanted toknow all.
"What is it?" Sakura asked when it seemed like he wasn't going to respond, since for quite a while he hadn't. She was prety nervous herself, he had never wanted to talk to her in a secluded area. Everyone was downstairs!
"Well I-I " why was he even doing this, he really didn't, he loved someone else. And is he Stuttering! "I like you" he said quickly trying to get this over with. Tenten quietly gasped and put a hand on her mouth in disbelief at what he just said. He was even stuttering as he said it, could it be true! She always wanted him to say that to her. She felt her heart brake as it filled with aching pain she'd never known. Not even the fact of her parents leaving them alone most of the time caused her this, she really didn't care, cause she had great brothers.
"Uh, ... I don't know what to say" Sakura said, she rally didn't. She wasn't expecting this either. And she has absolutely no feelings for the guy. She liked him cause he seemed cool and perfect, but the like was more like friend not something more "I - I don't wanna be mean, but I don't think I feel the same" she said hoping to just forget this. -by the way his like is like of friend, but also but he wants to see how far he can go with her-
"At least go out with me" he pleaded. Tenten was now trying not to cry as she fought the tears back. She kenew that if Sakura knew she liked him she would have already back off. But she was always so secretive. Guess it's like her brother, now she is losing him. What does Sakura have that she doesn't ! Pink Hair Oo.
"I don't know..." she trailed off. She was so unsure and on the other side she didn't want to hurt him. He was still her friend.
"How about One date" he said "and see how we feel after" Sakura looked at him with like I don't want to look. She really didn't wanna do this, but will anyone she knows get hurt? She asked herself. No, she didn't think so, although she always though he and Tenten will make a cute couple.
"Alright" she said hoping after this to get him off her back. Sure he was cute, handsome and all but she had no feelings for him. Sure he was all like perfect but not really, he didn't make her heart flutter and all that stuff you feel when in love. She wanted that, but Neji is none of that.
"Cool" said Neji and he and Sakura headed back to the living room downstairs. Tenten sighed and took in a shaky sharp breath.
Tenten regained her composure when they left and enter in the living room to where all her friends where and then her cell phone rang. Making her feel much better for some reason. "Hey!" she said in a fake happy voice and answered the phone. Everyone who was talking quieted down so she could talk in the phone.
'Tenten!' )(other line speech in bold)(
"Hey bro," she said everyone stared at her, she had a brother?. They wondered why she never told them. They really didn't know much of her life she was sometimes quiet, most secretive. You could always trust her with your secrets.
'Can't you see your incompetent fool of a twin got kicked out of private school, Sasuke I'm going kill you, you hear , where is my shiny butchers cleaver, I going to chop your head off' Itachi spoke fast and frantically. He was fuming she could tell by the sounding rage of his voice.
'Up your ass!" she heard her twin, Sasuke, retort to the fuming Itachi
"Itachi,! calm down, don't kill him !"
'Ten, I don't care where you're at. Just get home now ! And kiss your brother goodbye beause he going to die. I worked to damn hard for him to go there!'
"Ok, ok I'll be there. Please don't kill him!" she said and quickly hanged up. She turned to face all her friends that had started to look at her as a voice spoke loudly and incoherently on the other side. She looked at them with an apologetic look as she picked her stuff up and prepared to leave.
"Sorry got to go before my brother does something he'll regret" she said. They all stared at her.
"What's going on, why did you say kill" asked Ino with concern. Tenten just smiled at them weakly. Then she grinned.
"How do I put this for all of you" she said got a couch cushion and then "you're gonna die!" she said to Neji throwing the cushion his way hitting him hard on the face. And leaving him looking surprise at her actions. That actually hurt! But he'll never admit that.
"That's what my brother means by kill" she said felling a bit satisfied with herself. "Bye, I'll see you guys later" she kind off said smugly and left. Everyone else was like What?
When she was far in her way home she leaned on the door before entering. 'You like her' she thought before entering. She swallowed hard letting the pain surge through, from her heart to her body. No, no she shall not cry for a boy. A boy she loves. Well at least her twin is here and he will comfort her. Is good all three are close though sometimes she feels like killing both. They kind off look like twins, but she and her twin don't.
'I cant believe...you like her' and she entered her home to see...
Note: Well i hope you're liking the story, but Tenten's character isn't that much convey in the show is it. But she does seemed to be close to Neji and know alot from the way he fights and all his move. Right? well whatever.
Kimiko- Made Up Charecter she will surprise you.
Myra- Another Made Up Charecter. She and Kimiko Play A Role Together. If You Catch My Drift.
Shelsey- Based My lil Cousin. Also Made Up Charecter.