ummm hey guys my first fanfic ... would love some critisism too ... so it starts in a pub and ends in a game ... but which game?
Percy entered the pub and his eyes immediately fixed on the single most beautiful thing on the planet A GIRL. He just sat in one of the seats at the pub and kept staring at her. He did that every day for the next 1 month.
The girl Annabeth Chase had noticed the guy the minute he came in a month later he was still coming in. she walked right up to him and said "Hi, I'm Annabeth Chase and you are?"
"Ummm ….. Percy …. Percy Jackson"
"Hey Percy. You look as if you are very good at poker u want to play?"
"Ummm sure lets pull up a table and get some people "
"God Percy you really think I want to play poker with u here. Come on I have a special place for poker … with you"