Ok this is my first one ever so i hope this is a good start.
Chapter One:
Antonio was having the best day of his life. He got a promotion at his job at the daycare last night, plus his favorite store had there tomatoes ripe as can be today. Even better he was going to propose to his love lovino and hope he would say yes. Antonio walked down the street toward his apartment one hand his bag of tomatoes the other had a little black box a ring felt around for his keys before opening the door to there shared apartment ,"Hola lovi~ im back!"He waited for his Italian to yell shut up bastard, but none came so he became worried. He walked to the kitchen to set his bag down but instead it fell to the ground. There he saw His best friend Gilbert was kissing his lovino his lovino, but what really made his heart break was Lovino was kissing back. Still in shock they broke away and turned to see me at the door. His heart was broken so bad the pain made him want to die. "T-Te amo lovino."He thrown the box over and ran out of the building tears staining his face. Lovino was in shock he just kissed his worst enemy and his boyfriend saw the whole thing. He bent down and picked up the box and opened it to see the ring shining with one green emerald in the middle. He new he screwed up big time, and Gilbert was leaning on the counter watching the whole thing and smiled at what he did.
Review please i would love advice for it thanks!