Chapter 1
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The sound of clashing of metal was so loud that if you were not wearing earplugs you would bleed from the ears.
Two of the most ledgendary swords collided sending sparks everywhere.

"Halfbreed scum. You cut me down before but it will not work again! You die here!" Bankotsu shouted. He held his Banryu out with both hands and started screaming as he focused his power.

Inuyasha and the bystanders shot their eyes wide open at what they saw. Bankotsu had sprouted wings of the hell butterfly.

"Yes, this is about 5%." Bankotsu said.
"What are you talking about?! 5%?! My balls!" Inuyasha shouted. He charged towards Bankotsu getting ready to stab him.
"Too predictable." Bankotsu said. He threw Banryu as if it were a boomerang.

Bankotsu swatted Inuyasha away with the 50 foot long wings. Not only was Inuyasha bleeding badly but he was also on fire. His robe could not stand the massave heat the wings of hell mustered.

He jumped down and landed on his hilt. He squatted down and stuck out the tip of his tonuge and let it hang.
"You know, a pretty teen like yourself shoulden't wear that here....you might get....raped." Bankotsu said. He finished his sentance with a low whisper. He grabbed Kagome's chin and claimed her mouth in a kiss.

("No! This is sooo wrong!...But it feels so...right.") Kagome thought.
She instanctavly wrapped her arms around Bankotsu's neck and leaned into the kiss.

Bankotsu pulled away, only to swat Inuyasha away again.

Bankotsu snatched Kagome up and grabbed his Banryu.
"Tah-tah for now, Halfbreed scum!" Bankotsu said vanishing into a cloud of smoke.

"Damnit, Kagome, Noooooooooooo!!!" Inuyasha screamed.

7 hours away....Bankotsu contracted his wings and set Kagome down. He quickly tied her up afterwards.
He yanked up the rope, bringing Kagome to her feet.

"Where are you taking me?!" Kagome asked.
She than remembered what Bankotsu had said a moment ago...
"You know, a pretty teen like yourself shoulden't wear that here....you might get....raped."

Bankotsu said nothing.
"I don't wanna get raped!" Kagome screamed. She started crying.

Bankotsu looked back once he was pulled on his head leaving a massive bump.
"Get moving, damnit!" Bankotsu commanded. He yanked on the rope sending Kagome into his arms.
"And relax. If you be a good girl..." Bankotsu paused to hook his finger inder Kagome's chin. "I won't violate you sexualy....Unless you beg for it." Bankotsu said finishing his sentance.

"Let's get moving. I wanna get back to the hideout atleast in 2 days." Bankotsu said grabbing the rope again.
Kagome nodded and followed behind Bankotsu.

After a few hours of walking and silence Bankotsu spoke up. "I never said you couldn't talk." Bankotsu said.
"Nothing to talk about." Kagome said.
"...Talk to me as if I were Inuyasha." Bankotsu said.
"Does that mean you will carry me?" Kagome asked.
"Anything to lighten the damn mood around here." Bankotsu replied.

Bankotsu turned around and picked Kagome up bridal style.
Kagome pulled out some sculptang paste and grabbed some of Bankotsu's hair. She made them look like doggie ears.
"The fuck?" Bankotsu asked.
"It's sculping paste. You use it to keep your hair stay in place so it dosen't fly around when your doing stuff." Kagome said.

"Is it eadible?" Bankotsu asked.
"Most likley not Bankotsu." Kagome said slightly giggling.
Kagome dropped the empty paste can and flattened out the doggie ears so they looked like horns.

"Huh?" Bankotsu asked. "What are you doing now?"
"Making horns." Kagome said.
Once she was done she wiped the paste off on her skirt.
"Now your hair stated you're personality."
"Personaliwho?" Bankotsu asked.
"Personality. It's like... Well for an example: Inuyasha is stubbern and hard headed and you are....Ruggad and powerful." Kagome explained.
"What's the differance between ruggad and handsome?" Bankotsu asked.
"Well..." Kagome started blushing. "Handsome means you look at yourself and ruggad means people look at you.

Just than it started raining.
"Fuck me" Kagome said.
"...Are you sure? And out here in the cold rain?" Bankotsu asked.
Kagome blushed. "Bankotsu!!!" Kagome shouted. "I'm 15 and you kidnapped me, not to mention I don't know anything about you!" Kagome continued.
"......... Your point is?"

Kagome slapped him.
"Ow! What the fuck?!"
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There you have it. The first chapter of My Girl: Revised. Please review and if I should completely remake put the number 1. Remake. at the end of your review or 2. try to stay along the original. at the end. TY byyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

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