"CARBYVILLE"
Hey this is my 1st fanfic so I'd appreciate lot sof feed back. I have 12
chapters but will cut it short if you don't like it.
Part one - "The Beginning"
It had been 2 days since the lockdown. The disease was confirmed as MonkeyPox. The ER was back to it's usual hectic self but Abby and Carter hadn't spoken to each other since "the kiss". Most of the staff have bets on whether or not they will get together. Dr.Susan Lewis is the ring leader.
ADMIN DESK: Wednesday
Susan: So how's it goin' Carter, trouble in paradise? Carter:(grins) I don't know what you mean Susan Susan: Sure you do - How's Abby? Carter: You'd probably know more about Abby than me seen as we haven't spoken since the...(thinks for a sec).....since the lockdown. Susan: You were going to say kiss. Carter: Kiss! What kiss? Who kissed? Susan: Give it up Carter, Malik caugh tyou two and told Josh and Josh told - Carter: Everyone? Susan: Yep! (notices Carters face) It's OK Carter we all know ho wyou and Abby feel about each other. Carter: Really? Care to tell me how we feel Susan: Sure - You're in lurrrrve. Carter: What? I am not in love. Susan: Ok, ok. I give up. Just make sure you speak to her before tomorrow 'cos I've got a bet on you two to make before 10 tomorrow night and I don't wanna lose $50. Carter: Oh. I get it. this isn't Abby and me. This is about your little bet with the hospital gossip parade. Susan: You bet! Gettit? You bet...no * She laughs at her own bad joke*
Chuni steps in: GSW comin' in, ETA 2 minutes. Susan: Ok, Carter cmon. (notices Abby) Abby we need you. *John gives soon the "Why her" look* Weaver: Susan, get over here now! Susan: You got this? Carter:(looks at Abby) Yeah we can handle this. Go. *Carter and Abby head for the ambulance bay*
Carter: What've we got? Doris: GSW to chest and abdomen. BP's 90 over 50. Serious blood loss, possible neck fracture from where she fell, contusions to the right arm and leg. Carter: Ok get me a C scan, an ultrasound to see where that bleedings comin' from. Abby squeeze in 2 litrs of celin just to be safe and someone page Romano.
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Time Lapse - 25 minutes
Romano: Ok let's get him up to surgery. Good work Carter - I know who to call if i need ER care.
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Time Lapse - half hour. Abbys in th elounge, Carter comes in.
Abby: That was some safe. Even Romano thought so I mean you don't get him telling you that everyday do you? Carter: Yeah well I was just doin' my job. Abby: Carter stop it! I'm trying here. can we talk about the - (Carter buts in) Carter: Abby I've had a real hard day and the last thing I need is the "I just wanna be freinds" speech. So if you don't mind I'm gona go back to work. Abby: Actually I do mind. And for your information I wasn't about to give that speech. So can we talk? Carter: (dumbstruck) eh....ok.....so.........? Abby: look John I know what happened was probably not the wisest thing to do but..... Weaver burst through the door: Carter we've got a trauma comin' in. eta - NOW! Abby you too. Abby: I'm off in like 10 minutes. Weaver: You'r here, you'r getting paid, you'r working! Move. * they all walk to the trauma room* Carter: So much for that talk.
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Time lapse - 35 minutes.
Weaver: Ok charge to 260. Clear.....(shocks.) Charge again to 300.Clear...(shocks) how long's he been down? Carter: 35 minutes. Weaver: Ok...em.....stop compressions, time of death 19:39pm. Someone call the family and clear this place up. *they leave the trauma room*
Carter: Abby wait! About earlier, we din't finish our little chat. I'm off now so we can get some coffee if you like..... Abby: Sure. One condition; No Magoo's and you buy. Carter: Thats 2 but ok. Deal. There's a nice little place by the river it's Indian i think, d'you fancy it? Abby: yeah OK. Wait a sec though. Susan and Haleidh wanted to talk to me. I wont be long. Carter: Ok i'll get my coat.
Susan: So, how's it goin? Abby: I think this is it. He is taking me to dinner now. ( smiles from ear to ear) Haleidh: Well you go girl. Hey, does this mean me and Susan won the bet? Abby: Hmmm.... Nothing's happened yet but I'm pretty sure you can start collecting your winnings. Susan: Carters waiting. Call me with the verdict. Bye.
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Time lapse: half hour.
Abby: I had a good time tonight John, Thanks. Carter: Me to but we still need to talk. Abby: Carter ssshhhhhh ( puts her finger to her lips before kissing him) Carter: Wow! so does this mean? Abby: oh I think so * Carter leans down and kisses her again this time more intamatley) Abby: Well, Susan and Haleidh'll be happy Carter: yeah and rich Abby: (laughs a little) Not as happy as me though Carter: Me either. * they kiss again but this time they get lost in each other*
Well there you go. Like I said before theres anoth 11 chapters so if you want more just review. And trust me it's all happy.
Part one - "The Beginning"
It had been 2 days since the lockdown. The disease was confirmed as MonkeyPox. The ER was back to it's usual hectic self but Abby and Carter hadn't spoken to each other since "the kiss". Most of the staff have bets on whether or not they will get together. Dr.Susan Lewis is the ring leader.
ADMIN DESK: Wednesday
Susan: So how's it goin' Carter, trouble in paradise? Carter:(grins) I don't know what you mean Susan Susan: Sure you do - How's Abby? Carter: You'd probably know more about Abby than me seen as we haven't spoken since the...(thinks for a sec).....since the lockdown. Susan: You were going to say kiss. Carter: Kiss! What kiss? Who kissed? Susan: Give it up Carter, Malik caugh tyou two and told Josh and Josh told - Carter: Everyone? Susan: Yep! (notices Carters face) It's OK Carter we all know ho wyou and Abby feel about each other. Carter: Really? Care to tell me how we feel Susan: Sure - You're in lurrrrve. Carter: What? I am not in love. Susan: Ok, ok. I give up. Just make sure you speak to her before tomorrow 'cos I've got a bet on you two to make before 10 tomorrow night and I don't wanna lose $50. Carter: Oh. I get it. this isn't Abby and me. This is about your little bet with the hospital gossip parade. Susan: You bet! Gettit? You bet...no * She laughs at her own bad joke*
Chuni steps in: GSW comin' in, ETA 2 minutes. Susan: Ok, Carter cmon. (notices Abby) Abby we need you. *John gives soon the "Why her" look* Weaver: Susan, get over here now! Susan: You got this? Carter:(looks at Abby) Yeah we can handle this. Go. *Carter and Abby head for the ambulance bay*
Carter: What've we got? Doris: GSW to chest and abdomen. BP's 90 over 50. Serious blood loss, possible neck fracture from where she fell, contusions to the right arm and leg. Carter: Ok get me a C scan, an ultrasound to see where that bleedings comin' from. Abby squeeze in 2 litrs of celin just to be safe and someone page Romano.
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Time Lapse - 25 minutes
Romano: Ok let's get him up to surgery. Good work Carter - I know who to call if i need ER care.
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Time Lapse - half hour. Abbys in th elounge, Carter comes in.
Abby: That was some safe. Even Romano thought so I mean you don't get him telling you that everyday do you? Carter: Yeah well I was just doin' my job. Abby: Carter stop it! I'm trying here. can we talk about the - (Carter buts in) Carter: Abby I've had a real hard day and the last thing I need is the "I just wanna be freinds" speech. So if you don't mind I'm gona go back to work. Abby: Actually I do mind. And for your information I wasn't about to give that speech. So can we talk? Carter: (dumbstruck) eh....ok.....so.........? Abby: look John I know what happened was probably not the wisest thing to do but..... Weaver burst through the door: Carter we've got a trauma comin' in. eta - NOW! Abby you too. Abby: I'm off in like 10 minutes. Weaver: You'r here, you'r getting paid, you'r working! Move. * they all walk to the trauma room* Carter: So much for that talk.
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Time lapse - 35 minutes.
Weaver: Ok charge to 260. Clear.....(shocks.) Charge again to 300.Clear...(shocks) how long's he been down? Carter: 35 minutes. Weaver: Ok...em.....stop compressions, time of death 19:39pm. Someone call the family and clear this place up. *they leave the trauma room*
Carter: Abby wait! About earlier, we din't finish our little chat. I'm off now so we can get some coffee if you like..... Abby: Sure. One condition; No Magoo's and you buy. Carter: Thats 2 but ok. Deal. There's a nice little place by the river it's Indian i think, d'you fancy it? Abby: yeah OK. Wait a sec though. Susan and Haleidh wanted to talk to me. I wont be long. Carter: Ok i'll get my coat.
Susan: So, how's it goin? Abby: I think this is it. He is taking me to dinner now. ( smiles from ear to ear) Haleidh: Well you go girl. Hey, does this mean me and Susan won the bet? Abby: Hmmm.... Nothing's happened yet but I'm pretty sure you can start collecting your winnings. Susan: Carters waiting. Call me with the verdict. Bye.
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Time lapse: half hour.
Abby: I had a good time tonight John, Thanks. Carter: Me to but we still need to talk. Abby: Carter ssshhhhhh ( puts her finger to her lips before kissing him) Carter: Wow! so does this mean? Abby: oh I think so * Carter leans down and kisses her again this time more intamatley) Abby: Well, Susan and Haleidh'll be happy Carter: yeah and rich Abby: (laughs a little) Not as happy as me though Carter: Me either. * they kiss again but this time they get lost in each other*
Well there you go. Like I said before theres anoth 11 chapters so if you want more just review. And trust me it's all happy.