I gave Kagome a bit of cockiness and more skills and different weapons in fighting. I may switch to 1st person (1p) or 2nd person (2p) and 3rd person (3p) a few times.
Kagome 1p:
I was just walking and minding my own business when a stupid hanyou appeared in front of me. I could just tell he was a hanyou; you know felt his aura and stuff. He had long white hair which gleamed in the sunlight and golden, sunset eyes. He wore a red kimono and he was bare footed. He growled at me and said, "Get outta here, wench, this is my place!" I just scowled at him and said, "So you actually took the time and pissed everywhere, mutt."
"F**k you."
"I'd rather not" I smiled and walked passed him. Not even glancing once at him.
3p:
She walked past the frustrated hanyou with no fear. The hanyou tried to roundhouse kick her but she quickly dodged it and countered with a kick to the ribs. 'Dammit, I'm getting beaten up by a girl!' the half breed thought but then she stopped and swiftly jumped backwards and said, "Before I kick your half breed ass; tell me your name hanyou," she said with a grin.
"Why in hell would I tell you?" The hanyou said, smirking.
"Coz I'm the one sending you to hell, jackass!"
"Inuyasha." He spat.
"Kagome" she grinned.
"Ok, Fagome, let's see what you've got!"
"Bring Bitchyassa"
Inuyasha (1p):
Damn, was she good? For a human she was strong and fast. She had a sword and a bow without any arrows which confused me but she didn't use the sword. I had the Tetsusaiga with me but like her, I didn't draw. I used 'iron reaver soul stealer' but she dodged it like it was nothing and used some attack called 'spirit rush'. In a flash I saw a mist lunge towards me, I barely missed it and it left a deep cut my left arm. She may have been human, but she fought like a demon! I was forced to draw my sword; I hated losing. Especially to a girl let alone human.
"Hmph, so the mutt, draws the sword." She told me with a massive grin. She took out her bow and distanced herself away from me. She got in the stance which you'd normally use to fire an arrow; I saw her draw back her free hand and a golden, gleaming arrow appeared. I blocked it with my Tetsusaiga but the power drained out of it and it turned back into an old, rusty sword.
"What the…?" but she tripped me up.
She walked towards me and grinned as she pointed her sword towards my head, "Any last words, hanyou?"
"Yeah… STOP CALLING ME A HANYOU, WENCH!" with that I tripped her over and pinned her to the ground. I looked closer at her and I realised after a closer look, the wench was actually very beautiful.
"Kagome, don't tell me you got into ANOTHER senseless fight!" cried a woman coming out from the trees. I stared at her. 'Who was she? Was she with the enemy? '
"Please get off my friend. We were given a mission to track down a demon. Kagome, I've already killed the demon. The mission is over." I looked at the miko.
"You gonna get off me or what, then?" she stared at me.
(3p):
"Keh, whatever!" Inuyasha said getting of her and looking away at her.
"Sango, why'd you stop me? That was fun!" Kagome said cheerfully, "It's not like I was really going to kill him." Kagome said, looking back at Inuyasha. 'He's too cute to die!' Kagome thought.
"Excuse me…?" Sango said, wanting to know his name.
"Inuyasha." Kagome told her.
"Inuyasha, I'm sorry for what she has done. In return for NOT KILLING HER," She eyed Kagome; who looked away cheekily, "Please have dinner with us."
"WHAT?" Kagome said, horrified. Inuyasha knew it would bother her so he accepted, "Heh!" He smiled sarcastically and followed with Sango in front and Kagome not far behind him…