New Writer, New Story.
So hello! Natasha here. I'm a new writer, so no Beta included in this as of yet. Please review and not just with (Update!) (Good Story) Or (No, it's not good) tell me why, its good or bad, tell me how to improve! Thank you.
Chapter 1.
Swords against swords, clanging and locking together. The sound of metal together, a shrill clangy sound. The sea of people, in a major battle. And one boy started it all. Percy Jackson.
It was all because of Luke, all because of the Lightning Bolt. All because of the damned Lotus Hotel in LV.
They were too late, and Zeus had declared war. It hadn't even been Percy who had stolen the bolt, and now because of Zeus' mighty declarations and false accusations, soon the whole world would be in peril.
So, there Percy was. With Annabeth and Grover behind him. He would save the world, he would stop the war between DemiGods and the heaven's above.
He just needed to get the Lightning Bolt, which was located well...He didn't know. Somewhere with Luke. Somewhere dark, dangerous. Where else? In the middle of the war, between Gods and Half Gods, it must be well hidden.
Percy would hate to admit it, but Luke was damned smart.
He didn't know how...
But he would find it.
"Have you got everything?" Sally asked, her eyebrow raising and making her forehead even more creased in frown lines.
"Yes, Mom. I have. Please, don't worry. I will come back." Percy murmured, shifting his backpack onto his back. He sighed and wrapped his arms around her, just briefly. He wouldn't see her in a while. And it would hurt him. Because she, and he were in danger. And he was worried.
You see, Percy had saved his Mom from Hades. That had been easy, because Persephone had distracted him. Interlocked in a loving, passionate and cringy make out, Persephone had quickly knocked out Hades and ceased the four from their deaths. Not only that, but she had given a pearl to them. They'd all gone back to the mainlands safe, unscathed.
But not for long. Zeus had quickly declared war and Luke had quickly summoned back the lightning bolt from the damned armor. But Zeus thought Percy had hidden it.
Geez, couldn't the God cut him a break?
"Please, come back. Promise Me, Percy." she murmured, her chocolate eyes basically swimming in unshed tears.
"I...-"
"Percy! Come on!" Annabeth yelled, quickly running into the room. "We need to go, I'm sorry Sally." she said, her gray eyes seemingly even more darker than before.
"Never matter." Sally waved her off, and pecked Percy on the cheek. "Goodbye, Perc." she murmured, and hurriedly left the room.
Percy looked after her for a minute, and then started after Annabeth, looking down at the ground.
And that's where it started. Two misjudged DemiGods and a Satyr, looking for a lost treasure.
And trying to stop a raging war while they were at it.
Okay...so there's the beginning chapter. They will get longer as I go along. Tell me how I can improve, and PM me if you want! Thank you. Please, Please Review.
